Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example and a brief reason. Remove fillers and correct article/number agreement (e.g., "simple and comfortable clothes", "leggings").

예시: I prefer simple, comfortable clothes, such as a T-shirt with leggings and comfortable shoes. I avoid expensive or overly colorful outfits because I like to feel relaxed and effortless.

제안: Answer directly, use one linking phrase to compare, and correct grammar (e.g., "comfortable clothes", "more casual than smart"). Avoid repeating the same idea about your sister; give one specific contrast detail.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits. In contrast, my sister likes smart, colorful clothes because she enjoys standing out.

제안: Keep it short and precise: one topic sentence and one supporting reason with a linking word. Fix grammar ("they give me freedom"; "more comfortable"). Avoid repetition about comfort.

예시: Yes, I do. T-shirts give me the freedom and comfort I want, especially at home, although I might choose slightly smarter casual clothes when I go out.

제안: The feedback given is good; convert it into a concise spoken answer. Provide a clear topic sentence and one specific example (e.g., matching shoes). Avoid filler words and unnecessary elaboration.

예시: Yes, I often spend quite a while deciding what to wear, especially before an important event when I need to match shoes and accessories to my outfit.

제안: Be clearer about the contrast and correct grammar: say "on weekends" and explain one specific reason briefly. Use a linking word (e.g., "because") and avoid vague phrases like "we should be in a great appearance."

예시: Yes. On weekdays I dress casually for work, but on weekends I tend to wear smarter clothes because I meet family on Friday evenings and want to look presentable.

제안: State your preference clearly, give one specific example of colors and one concise reason. Fix grammar ("light colours", "they make me feel"). Avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: I prefer light colours, such as pastel blues and beige, because they make me feel more energetic and positive, whereas dark colours can feel too severe for me.

× In my opinion, I would like to wear an simple and comfortable clothes, for example T-shirt with a legging and umm comfortable shoes.

✓ In my opinion, I would like to wear simple and comfortable clothes, for example a T-shirt with leggings and comfortable shoes.

Use 'an' only before vowel sounds; 'simple' begins with a consonant sound so 'a' would be wrong and here the article is unnecessary before an adjective modifying a plural noun 'clothes'. 'Clothes' is plural so do not use 'an' or 'a'. Use plural 'leggings' instead of singular 'legging'. Add the article 'a' before 'T-shirt'. Remove filler 'umm'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles before plural nouns, use plural forms for garments that typically come in pairs (leggings).

× Uh, I don't like an expensive clothes uh or uh, too much clothes or too much colors.

✓ I don't like expensive clothes or too many colors.

Do not use 'an' with plural 'clothes'. Use 'too many' with countable plural nouns like 'colors', not 'too much'. Remove repeated filler words. Suggestion: use 'too much' for uncountable nouns and 'too many' for countable plural nouns.

× I prefer to wear a comfortable clothes and more casual than smart clothes, not like my sister.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes and be more casual than smart, not like my sister.

Do not use the article 'a' before plural 'clothes'. Change 'wear a comfortable clothes' to 'wear comfortable clothes'. For the comparison, use 'be more casual' to describe your style rather than 'more casual than smart clothes'. Suggestion: omit articles before plural nouns and use appropriate verb 'be' for comparisons.

× My sister the opposite of me, she likes to wear uh a smart clothes, uh, she like to wear colorful clothes and to be a special in her outfits.

✓ My sister is the opposite of me; she likes to wear smart clothes. She likes colorful outfits and to stand out with her style.

Missing verb 'is' after 'My sister'. 'A smart clothes' is incorrect: 'clothes' is plural so no 'a' and 'smart' modifies it. 'She like' should be 'she likes' to agree with third person singular. 'To be a special in her outfits' is unidiomatic; use 'to stand out' or 'to be special'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement and include linking verb 'is' for noun phrases; use idiomatic expressions like 'stand out'.

× I prefer to wear it because it's give me the freedom that I want, the comfortable that I need, especially when I am home.

✓ I prefer to wear it because it gives me the freedom I want and the comfort I need, especially when I am at home.

'It's give' is incorrect; use third person singular present 'gives'. 'The comfortable' is wrong; use the noun 'comfort'. Add 'at' with 'home' for the common collocation 'at home'. Remove extra 'that' before 'I want'. Suggestion: match verb forms to subject and use correct noun forms.

× Uh, it makes me feel more comfortable than other clothes.

✓ It makes me feel more comfortable than other clothes do.

Comparison sentence ideally includes the auxiliary 'do' for clarity when comparing verbs and actions: 'other clothes do' or simply 'other clothes'. Both are acceptable; adding 'do' clarifies the comparison. Suggestion: optionally include 'do' to complete the comparison.

× Umm, But if I, if I want to go out, umm, I prefer to wear something casual more.

✓ But if I want to go out, I prefer to wear something more casual.

Avoid repeating 'if I'. Place 'more' before the adjective 'casual' to form the correct comparative structure 'more casual'. Remove fillers like 'umm'. Suggestion: keep comparative adverb/adjective placement correct: 'more casual' not 'casual more'.

× Good job!

✓ (No correction needed.)

'Good job!' is an interjection/praise and does not require a verb; it is acceptable in this context.

× I usually wear smart clothes at the weekend because on every Friday I meet my family, maybe hang out together or stay at home.

✓ I usually wear smart clothes at the weekend because every Friday I meet my family; we might hang out together or stay at home.

Use 'every Friday' rather than 'on every Friday' for natural phrasing. 'Maybe' should be 'we might' to indicate possibility and subject. Semicolon or conjunction improves sentence flow. Suggestion: use 'every Friday' and include the subject with modal 'might' for possibility.

× But we should be in a great appearance so that why I wear it.

✓ But we should look presentable, so that's why I wear it.

'Be in a great appearance' is unidiomatic; use 'look presentable' or 'be well dressed'. 'So that why' is incorrect; use 'so that's why' or 'which is why'. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'look presentable' and correct conjunctions 'so that's why'.

× In fact, I like wearing light colors not dark colors because it depends to my personality.

✓ In fact, I like wearing light colors rather than dark ones because it depends on my personality.

Use 'rather than' to contrast and 'dark ones' to avoid repetition. The correct preposition with 'depends' is 'on', not 'to'. Suggestion: use 'depends on' and 'rather than' for contrasts.

× If I wear a dark color it's give me a bad energy or look like I'm angry or I'm aggressive person.

✓ If I wear a dark color, it gives me bad energy or makes me look like I'm angry or an aggressive person.

'It's give' should be 'it gives' (third person singular). 'Look like I'm angry' needs a verb 'makes me look'. Include article 'an' before 'aggressive person'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree and include necessary verbs for causative meaning ('makes me look').

× But if I wear a light color it's it's makes me feel like more energy and more positive and that's me.

✓ But if I wear a light color, it makes me feel more energetic and more positive; that's who I am.

Remove duplicated 'it's it's'. Use 'makes me feel more energetic' (adjective) rather than 'feel like more energy' (noun). 'That's me' is informal; 'that's who I am' is clearer. Ensure subject-verb agreement 'it makes'. Suggestion: use adjective forms for feelings (energetic) and avoid repetition.