Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify meaning and correct word choice; give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid confusing phrases like "dresses with men" and "change details." Use linking words (for example, because) to connect ideas and keep answers under five sentences.

예시: I usually wear dresses to work because they are comfortable and professional. For example, I often wear a black sheath dress with a long chain necklace around the neckline because it looks smart but stylish, and it’s easy to pair with a blazer for meetings.

제안: Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., "professional clothes," "colleagues," "blazer," "tailored trousers"). Start with a clear statement of preference, then give a concise reason and an example. Use linking words like "but" and "because" to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes for daily life, but at the office I wear smart professional clothes because I want to look confident and make a good impression on my colleagues. For important meetings I usually wear a blazer and tailored trousers.

제안: Good simple answer. Improve by using correct collocations and slight expansion: replace "these shirts" with "T-shirts," and use "warm weather" and a linking phrase like "for example" or "especially". Keep it concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I often wear them when I go for a walk or exercise, especially in warm weather.

제안: Correct grammar ("it usually takes me a long time") and vocabulary ("colour combinations," "fabric," "fit"). Provide a clear reason and one specific example. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

예시: Yes, it usually takes me a long time to choose an outfit because I’m picky about colour combinations and the fit of the clothes. For example, I often try several tops to make sure the colours match and the fabric is comfortable for the occasion.

제안: Be specific and accurate: say "on weekdays" rather than a single day like "Wednesday" unless you mean that day. Fix awkward phrases ("pick up my job"). Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide a contrast using "but" and a concise example.

예시: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I usually wear smart clothes such as blouses and tailored trousers for work, but at the weekend I prefer comfortable clothes like T-shirts and jeans so I can relax.

제안: Fix vocabulary and collocations ("colours," "beige or light brown," "shades," "match with other items"). Give a clear preference and a simple, specific example. Keep sentences short and natural.

예시: I like many colours, but I prefer beige or light brown because those shades are easy to match with other items. For example, a beige blouse pairs well with navy trousers or a denim skirt, so I can wear it for work or casual outings.

× I usually wear dresses with men to change details because they add a simple but interesting task to my office outfits.

✓ I usually wear dresses with minimal details because they add a simple but interesting touch to my office outfits.

The original uses 'with men to change details' which is nonsensical and likely a preposition/word choice error. Replace 'with men to change details' with 'with minimal details' and 'task' with 'touch' to convey intended meaning. Use correct prepositions and word choice to make the sentence meaningful.

× For example, I have a black dress with a long chain around the neckline that I often wear to work because it looks professional yet stylish.

✓ For example, I have a black dress with a long chain around the neckline that I often wear to work because it looks professional yet stylish.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It uses adjectives and modifiers appropriately. No correction required.

× I usually prefer comfortable clothes for everyday wear, but at the office I choose the smart professional office because I want to look confident and make a good impression on my college.

✓ I usually prefer comfortable clothes for everyday wear, but at the office I choose smart, professional clothing because I want to look confident and make a good impression on my colleagues.

Original uses 'office' and 'college' incorrectly. This is mainly vocabulary/word-choice and adjective order: use 'smart, professional clothing' and plural 'colleagues.' Also remove repeated 'office'. This aligns with adjective order and correct noun form.

× For example, I typically wear a bladder and tailor trousers for important meeting.

✓ For example, I typically wear a blazer and tailored trousers for important meetings.

'Bladder' is a wrong word; correct is 'blazer.' 'Tailor trousers' should be 'tailored trousers.' Also use plural 'meetings' or 'an important meeting.' Fix word choice and noun/adjective form.

× Yes, I really like wearing these shirts because they are very comfortable and easy to move in.

✓ Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and easy to move in.

The student answered 'these shirts' which could be unclear but not strictly incorrect; changed to 'T-shirts' to match the question. No major grammatical error; adjustment improves clarity.

× I often wear them when I go out for a walk or run around, especially in warmth weather.

✓ I often wear them when I go out for a walk or go for a run, especially in warm weather.

Use 'go for a run' or 'go running' not 'run around.' 'Warmth weather' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'warm weather.' Fix prepositions and adjective form.

× Oh yes, it's quite difficult for me to decide what to wear, so it's usually take me a long time to choose an outfit.

✓ Oh yes, it's quite difficult for me to decide what to wear, so it usually takes me a long time to choose an outfit.

Subject-verb agreement and auxiliary placement error: 'it's usually take me' is incorrect. Correct form is 'it usually takes me.' Ensure the verb agrees with the singular subject 'it.'

× I'm picky about machine colored and making sure the clothes are comfortable for the occasion, which is why I often take extra time.

✓ I'm picky about colors and fabric and about making sure the clothes are comfortable for the occasion, which is why I often take extra time.

Original 'machine colored' is unclear; likely meant 'colors and fabric.' Restructure sentence to parallel 'picky about X and about Y.' Clarify vocabulary and fix sentence structure.

× Yes, I wear a different style on weekdays and at the weekend.

✓ Yes, I wear a different style on weekdays and at the weekend.

Sentence is acceptable; no grammatical change needed. 'At the weekend' is British English and correct. This entry acknowledges correctness.

× On Wednesday I usually wear smart or professional clothes like shirts or just pick up my job.

✓ On weekdays I usually wear smart or professional clothes like shirts for work.

Original 'On Wednesday' and 'just pick up my job' are incorrect. Likely meant 'on weekdays' and 'for work.' Fix time expression and phrasing to match intent.

× But at the weekend I prefer to wear comfortable clothes such as T-shirts and jeans so I can relax.

✓ But at the weekend I prefer to wear comfortable clothes such as T-shirts and jeans so I can relax.

Sentence is grammatically correct and matches tense and meaning; no change required.

× I like many color, but I prefer to wear Peggy or light brown because those shapes are easy to match with other clothing.

✓ I like many colors, but I prefer to wear beige or light brown because those shades are easy to match with other clothing.

Multiple word-choice and number errors: 'color' should be plural 'colors'; 'Peggy' is incorrect, likely 'beige'; 'shapes' should be 'shades.' Correct vocabulary and pluralization.

× For example, a baked dish should go well with drinks or touch trousers so I can wear it for work or casual outings.

✓ For example, a beige dress should go well with shirts or dark trousers so I can wear it for work or casual outings.

Original is largely nonsensical: 'baked dish', 'drinks', 'touch trousers' are wrong. Likely intended 'beige dress', 'shirts', 'dark trousers.' Replace with appropriate clothing vocabulary to make the sentence meaningful.