Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kejelasan. Gunakan kalimat topik yang jelas, hindari pengulangan, dan batasi durasi jawaban maksimal 3-4 kalimat. Contoh fokus: sebutkan jenis pakaian, alasan, dan satu detail pendukung.

예시: I usually wear simple outfits, mainly T-shirts and trousers because they are comfortable. For example, I often choose soft cotton T-shirts that are easy to move in. This style suits my daily routine and makes me feel relaxed.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa (agreement dan article usage) dan ringkas jawaban. Jelaskan alasan spesifik dan berikan satu contoh untuk mendukung pendapat.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than fancy or expensive outfits because I don't follow fashion trends. For instance, I usually choose jeans and a plain T-shirt even for weekends because they are practical and low-maintenance.

제안: Perbaiki kalimat tidak jelas dan tata bahasa. Hindari pengulangan ide yang sama; sebutkan satu alasan utama dan berikan detail konkret (mis. bahan atau potongan).

예시: Yes, I do because T-shirts are more comfortable than formal shirts. I especially like cotton T-shirts since they are breathable and fit me well, so I can move freely throughout the day.

제안: Perbaiki struktur dan grammar (negative form dan kata ganti). Berikan jawaban langsung lalu alasan singkat dan contoh kebiasaan memilih pakaian.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I'm not interested in fashion. I usually grab something comfortable that fits well, like a simple T-shirt and jeans, so I can get ready quickly.

제안: Perjelas perbedaan gaya dan perbaiki kosakata yang salah (mis. 'question' → 'occasion'). Gunakan linking words untuk keterpaduan dan berikan contoh konkret pakaian untuk tiap situasi.

예시: Yes, I do. On weekdays I usually wear simple casual clothes like jeans and a T-shirt, but for special occasions I dress more smartly. For example, I would wear a shirt and chinos for a family event or a party.

제안: Perbaiki kejelasan dan tata bahasa. Jelaskan alasan secara spesifik dan hindari ekspresi emosional yang tidak relevan. Gunakan 2-3 kalimat: warna, alasan temperatur/penampilan, contoh penggunaan.

예시: I prefer black because it feels comfortable and doesn't show stains easily. Also, black suits my skin tone and looks smart, so I often choose a black T-shirt when I go out.

× Personally, I love wear clothes like in simple way, like a simple outfit, just umm T-shirt and pants. Just that that makes me comfortable, yeah.

✓ Personally, I love wearing clothes in a simple way, like a simple outfit, just umm a T-shirt and pants. That makes me comfortable, yeah.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund 'wearing' not the base form 'wear'. Also 'in a simple way' is more natural word order than 'like in simple way', and 'a T-shirt' needs the article. Suggestion: use 'love wearing' and place articles and phrases in natural order.

× I prefer to wear a comfortable and a casual clothes rather than an expensive or or a fancy clothes because I am kind of person that don't really like fashion.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes rather than expensive or fancy clothes because I am the kind of person who doesn't really like fashion.

Plural noun 'clothes' does not take 'a' or 'an'. Use zero article for plural adjectives + noun. 'Kind of person' needs 'the kind of person' and relative 'who' not 'that'. Subject-verb agreement: 'I am' with clause 'who doesn't' requires 'doesn't'. Remove duplicate 'or'. Suggestion: drop 'a' before 'clothes', use 'the kind of person who doesn't'.

× Yeah, I do, because teachers makes me more comfortable than wearing a shirt.

✓ Yeah, I do, because T-shirts make me more comfortable than wearing a shirt.

Subject 'T-shirts' is plural so verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also the original 'teachers' seems to be a typo for 'T-shirts'. Ensure correct noun and plural verb agreement: 'T-shirts make me more comfortable.'

× That's the reason why I really like wearing T-shirt, because also T-shirts makes me comfortable and yeah, it just fits on my body.

✓ That's the reason why I really like wearing T-shirts, because T-shirts also make me comfortable and yeah, they just fit my body.

Use plural 'T-shirts' consistently and ensure subject-verb agreement: plural 'T-shirts' take 'make' and 'fit' with plural pronoun 'they'. Avoid 'fits on my body' — use 'fit my body'. Suggestion: keep number consistent and match verbs.

× No I've never do that because I'm person that I don't really understand about a fashion about outfits.

✓ No, I've never done that because I'm a person who doesn't really understand fashion or outfits.

Present perfect requires past participle 'done' not base 'do'. Add article 'a' before 'person'. Use relative pronoun 'who' and negative 'doesn't' for present simple. Remove unnecessary 'about' before 'fashion'. Suggestion: 'I've never done that' and 'who doesn't really understand fashion'.

× So I will wear whatever it is as long as it's comfortable on my body and also fit on my body.

✓ So I will wear whatever it is as long as it's comfortable and also fits my body.

After 'it' the verb should be 'fits' to agree with singular 'it'. Also avoid repeating 'on my body' and use natural collocation 'fits my body'. Suggestion: use 'fits' and simplify phrase.

× If I have a special location or when I hang out with my friends, I would wear a different outfit because when I hang out with my friends I need to be casual and simple.

✓ If I have a special occasion or when I hang out with my friends, I would wear a different outfit because when I hang out with my friends I need to be casual and simple.

Use 'occasion' not 'location' when referring to events. 'Location' is wrong preposition/context. Suggestion: replace 'location' with 'occasion'.

× But if I want to go to a question, I need to have a fancy, fancy one.

✓ But if I want to go to a formal event, I need to have a fancy one.

'Go to a question' is incorrect collocation; likely meant 'formal event' or 'occasion'. Use appropriate noun. Also avoid repeating 'fancy'. Suggestion: use 'formal event' or 'party' depending on context.

× Probably would be black because it makes me comfortable, it's not that hot and also it just suitable on my skin and my skins looks brighter when I wear a black clothes or T-shirt and I love a bad boy I feel.

✓ It would probably be black because it makes me comfortable, it doesn't show heat easily and it suits my skin; my skin looks brighter when I wear black clothes or a T-shirt, and I feel like a bad boy.

Add subject 'It' and reorder. 'Black' as color needs no article when referring to color choice. Use 'suits my skin' not 'suitable on my skin'. 'My skin' singular; 'clothes' plural so use no article, but 'a T-shirt' needs article. 'I love a bad boy I feel' is ungrammatical—change to 'I feel like a bad boy'. Suggestion: restructure sentence, fix articles and collocations.