Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and conciseness: use correct verb forms (‘prefer wearing’ or ‘prefer to wear’) and avoid redundancy (‘in daily life’ repeated). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief specific example. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer wearing casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and comfortable. For example, I often wear jeans and a T-shirt when I meet friends at a café.

제안: Fix grammar and clarity: use correct structures (‘prefer wearing… to…’, ‘it depends on the occasion’) and avoid filler words (‘uh’, ‘somehow’). Provide a complete contrasting example of when you would wear smart clothes. Keep responses limited to 2–3 well-formed sentences.

예시: I prefer wearing comfortable clothes to fashionable ones because they help me relax during my daily routine. However, it depends on the occasion; for example, I would wear smart clothes to a formal party or a business event.

제안: Remove hesitation and repetition: say the idea once and use specific situations. Replace vague phrases (‘other stuff’) with concrete examples. Keep answer compact (1–2 sentences).

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable. I usually wear them for quick errands like grocery shopping or meeting friends casually.

제안: Be concise and avoid unclear fragments. Use correct tense and clear examples: explain typical quick choices and contrast with special occasions when you spend more time. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I usually don't spend much time choosing clothes because I pick simple outfits for daily activities. But if I have a party or an important event, I spend more time deciding on a suitable outfit.

제안: Avoid repetition and correct grammar (singular/plural, article use). Present a clear contrast in one or two sentences using linking words (e.g., 'whereas', 'but').

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear formal clothes for work, whereas on weekends I prefer casual outfits because they help me relax.

제안: Correct word choice and avoid generalizations: use ‘wear’ instead of ‘bear’, 'black clothes' (no article) and avoid statements like ‘meant for a man's’. Explain why you like black with specific reasons. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

예시: I like wearing black clothes because the color suits me and is easy to match with other items. I also find black looks smart and hides stains well.

× I prefer to wearing casual clothes because it makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable in a daily life.

✓ I prefer wearing casual clothes because they make me feel more relaxed and comfortable in daily life.

Use of 'prefer' should be followed directly by the -ing form (prefer wearing), not 'to wearing'. Also 'casual clothes' is plural so use 'they make' not 'it makes'. Remove the article 'a' before 'daily life' because 'daily life' is an uncountable general phrase. Suggestion: say 'I prefer wearing casual clothes because they make me feel more relaxed and comfortable in daily life.'

× For example, I wear jeans and T-shirt to meet my friends.

✓ For example, I wear jeans and a T-shirt to meet my friends.

Countable singular noun 'T-shirt' requires an article 'a'. Also use parallel number: 'jeans' (plural) and 'a T-shirt' (singular) is fine. Suggestion: include 'a' before singular clothing items: 'a T-shirt.'

× I absolutely prefer to wearing a comfortable clothes instead of, uh, fashionable clothes because comfortable clothes makes me feel relaxed in a daily life routine.

✓ I absolutely prefer comfortable clothes instead of fashionable clothes because comfortable clothes make me feel relaxed in my daily routine.

'Prefer' should not use 'to' before an -ing form; remove 'to' and use 'prefer comfortable clothes' or 'prefer wearing comfortable clothes'. 'A comfortable clothes' is wrong because 'clothes' is plural; drop 'a'. Subject-verb agreement: 'comfortable clothes' (plural) requires 'make', not 'makes'. 'Daily life routine' is redundant; use 'daily routine' and add 'my' for clarity. Suggestion: 'I absolutely prefer comfortable clothes instead of fashionable clothes because comfortable clothes make me feel relaxed in my daily routine.'

× But somehow in some point it depends on the occasion.

✓ But it depends on the occasion.

The phrase 'somehow in some point' is ungrammatical and redundant. Simplify to 'But it depends on the occasion.' This keeps the meaning clear and grammatically correct. Suggestion: avoid redundant filler phrases and use concise expressions.

× Let's say if I have a some kind of party invitation, so I will wear.

✓ Let's say if I have some kind of party invitation, I will dress up.

Combine clauses properly: do not use both 'let's say' and 'if' awkwardly with extra articles. 'A some kind of' is incorrect; use 'some kind of' or 'a kind of'. Also 'I will wear' needs an object; use 'dress up' or 'wear something more formal.' Suggestion: 'If I have some kind of party invitation, I will dress up.'

× I love to wear T-shirts because it, it's these, uh, T-shirts are very comfortable to wear in a daily life and, uh, some occasions when I go outside for a grocery and other stuff, I always prefer to wear T-shirts.

✓ I love wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable for daily life and for some occasions when I go out to get groceries and other things; I always prefer to wear T-shirts.

Prefer 'love wearing' or 'love to wear' consistently; 'it's these, uh,' is disfluent and ungrammatical—use 'they are'. 'Daily life' should not have 'a'; use 'for daily life'. 'Go outside for a grocery' is wrong: use 'go out to get groceries'. 'Other stuff' is informal; 'other things' is better. Suggestion: 'I love wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable for daily life and for some occasions when I go out to get groceries and other things.'

× I usually don't take too much time to choose the clothes to wear, but sometimes it depends on the situations.

✓ I usually don't take too much time to choose the clothes to wear, but sometimes it depends on the situation.

'Situations' is plural but the sentence refers to the general concept; 'the situation' or simply 'the situation' is more natural. Alternatively, remove 'the' and say 'depends on the situation.' Suggestion: '...but sometimes it depends on the situation.'

× Like if I got a party invitation I'm going to somewhere, some event, then it takes more time to choose which outfit I will wear for that.

✓ If I get a party invitation or am going to some event, then it takes more time to choose which outfit I will wear for it.

Tense consistency: 'got' (past) should be 'get' (present) to match habitual or future contexts. 'I'm going to somewhere' is incorrect; use 'am going to some event' or 'going to an event'. 'For that' is vague—use 'for it.' Suggestion: 'If I get a party invitation or am going to some event, it takes more time to choose which outfit I will wear.'

× But if it's for the groceries, the stuff or a time or 2m.

✓ But if it's just for groceries or running errands, I choose quickly.

Original is fragmented and unclear ('the stuff or a time or 2m' makes no sense). Provide a clear concise replacement that fits the meaning: frequent quick trips do not need much choosing. Suggestion: 'But if it's just for groceries or running errands, I choose quickly.'

× I wear a different type of clothes at the weekend because on the weekdays I have a job I have to wear a formal clothes for a work.

✓ I wear different types of clothes at the weekend because on weekdays I have a job and I have to wear formal clothes for work.

'A different type of clothes' mixes singular 'type' with plural 'clothes'—use 'different types of clothes' or 'a different type of clothing'. 'On the weekdays' should be 'on weekdays'. 'A formal clothes' is incorrect; 'formal clothes' (plural) or 'a formal outfit' is correct. 'For a work' should be 'for work.' Suggestion: 'I wear different types of clothes at the weekend because on weekdays I have a job and I have to wear formal clothes for work.'

× But on the weekends I I prefer to wear a casual clothes that makes me more relaxed and comfortable on the weekends and and it will work.

✓ But on weekends I prefer to wear casual clothes that make me feel more relaxed and comfortable.

Remove duplicate words ('I I', 'and and'). 'A casual clothes' is wrong—'casual clothes' (plural) or 'a casual outfit' is correct. Use plural verb 'make' to agree with 'clothes'. Remove unnecessary repetition 'on the weekends' and vague 'it will work.' Suggestion: 'But on weekends I prefer to wear casual clothes that make me feel more relaxed and comfortable.'

× I love to bear a black clothes because black is my favorite color and it suits me especially and I believe black color is meant for a man's.

✓ I like to wear black clothes because black is my favorite color and it suits me, and I believe black is suitable for men.

'Bear' is the wrong verb; use 'wear'. 'A black clothes' mixes article with plural—use 'black clothes' or 'a black piece of clothing'. 'It suits me especially' is awkward; use 'it suits me' or 'it especially suits me'. 'Black color is meant for a man's' is ungrammatical and awkward; say 'black is suitable for men' or 'black is often worn by men.' Suggestion: 'I like to wear black clothes because black is my favorite color and it suits me, and I believe black is suitable for men.'