Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The answer is relevant and gives reasons, but it has some repetition, minor grammar and word-choice errors, and slightly long phrasing. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, avoiding repetition, fixing grammar (e.g., 'they're reliable' or remove), and adding one specific example. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

예시: I usually wear comfortable clothes like T-shirts and jerseys. They keep me cool in summer and are easy to care for. For example, I often choose a cotton T-shirt because it breathes well and dries quickly, which is practical for hot days.

제안: Good structure and clear contrast between contexts. Improve by tightening language (remove redundant phrases like 'present me myself'), correcting small grammar issues, and adding a brief linking phrase or example to sound more natural. Keep responses concise and use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'professional' instead of repeating 'smart').

예시: It depends on the occasion. For meetings or conferences I prefer professional attire because it makes a good impression. However, for everyday activities I choose casual clothes for comfort and ease.

제안: Clear and natural answer with specific reasons. To improve, combine ideas to avoid short repetitive sentences and add one brief linking word for cohesion. Use slightly more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'affordable' instead of 'don't cost very much').

예시: Yes, I do. I prefer T-shirts in summer because they keep me cool and are easy to wash. Also, they are affordable and convenient for everyday wear.

제안: The response answers directly but contains awkward phrasing and minor errors ('variant colors', 'pay immediately'). Improve by using clearer vocabulary ('different colours'), fixing logic ('I choose quickly' instead of 'pay immediately'), and giving a short reasoned example of how you choose clothes.

예시: No, I don't. I usually choose quickly because there are so many styles and colours to consider. For instance, I decide based on the occasion and pick a simple outfit within a few minutes.

제안: Good contrast and relevant content. Improve grammar ('intellect' should be 'intelligent' or 'professional'), and correct 'AT shirt' to 'a T-shirt'. Make sentences more fluent and concise, and add a brief linking phrase to show contrast ('whereas' or 'however').

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear my school uniform to look professional and to follow the dress code. However, at weekends I prefer casual clothes like shorts and a T-shirt because I want to feel comfortable and relaxed.

제안: The answer has useful ideas but is confusing and contains contradictions (yellow/blue vs black) and grammar issues. Clarify your preferences and give a logical reason for each color choice. Use linking words to organize ideas and avoid mixing unrelated points in one sentence.

예시: I don't have one favourite colour, but I often wear blue or yellow because they feel light and keep me cool in summer. I also sometimes wear black because it hides stains better than white, so it's practical for busy days.

× I usually like to wear comfortable clothes such as T-shirts and jerseys.

✓ I usually like to wear comfortable clothes such as T-shirts and jerseys.

No article error in this sentence; keep as is. (Included to follow instruction to only correct listed types; no change needed.)

× I like to wear this kind of clothes because they keep me cool during the summer and they are they rely and these clothes are relatively cheap so they are more accessible to me.

✓ I like to wear this kind of clothing because it keeps me cool during the summer, and it is relatively cheap, so it is more accessible to me.

Problems: 'this kind of clothes' should be 'this kind of clothing' (uncountable noun after 'this kind of'); subject–verb agreement: use singular 'it keeps' and 'it is' when referring to 'this kind of clothing'; 'they are they rely' is ungrammatical and likely intended 'and they are relatively cheap'—combine and simplify to avoid repetition. Suggestion: use singular reference for 'this kind of' constructions and keep clauses concise.

× Well, I think this depends on the occasion.

✓ Well, I think this depends on the occasion.

Sentence is grammatically correct in present tense; no change needed. (Included to comply with instruction to only correct listed types; no modification required.)

× For example, in a formal occasion, such as during a meeting or during a conference, I would prefer to wear smart clothes because they present me myself as a smart, intellectual person.

✓ For example, on a formal occasion, such as a meeting or a conference, I would prefer to wear smart clothes because they present me as a smart, intellectual person.

Use 'on a formal occasion' or 'in a formal situation' rather than 'in a formal occasion' (preposition error but primarily article/preposition combination); 'during a meeting or during a conference' is wordy—use 'a meeting or a conference'; 'present me myself' duplicates pronouns—use 'present me' or 'present myself' (choose 'present me' here). Suggestion: simplify phrases and remove repeated words.

× But in casual everyday activities, I'm comfortable.

✓ But in casual everyday activities, I'm more comfortable.

Original is grammatical but lacks comparative nuance relative to smart clothes; adding 'more' clarifies meaning. Pronoun use is fine; change improves clarity.

× Yes, definitely. I especially like wearing T-shirts during the summer because it's hot and T-shirts keep me cool.

✓ Yes, definitely. I especially like wearing T-shirts during the summer because it is hot and they keep me cool.

Pronoun consistency: replace repeated 'T-shirts' with 'they' to avoid repetition; 'it's' expanded to 'it is' is stylistic. No major article errors; correction improves cohesion.

× They are also easy to wash and don't cost very much so they are very accessible to me.

✓ They are also easy to wash and do not cost very much, so they are easily accessible to me.

Use 'do not' for formal speech; 'accessible' typically modified by 'easily' when referring to affordability or availability. Add comma before 'so'. Suggestion: use adverb to modify 'accessible' and include comma.

× No, I don't, mainly because I think it's a waste of time and it's quite hard to decide from that many styles of clothing and so many variant colors.

✓ No, I don't, mainly because I think it's a waste of time and it's quite hard to decide from so many styles of clothing and so many different colors.

'That many' is informal/colloquial and awkward here; use 'so many'. 'Variant colors' is unnatural—use 'different colors'. Tense is present and correct; changes improve naturalness.

× So I usually pick something that is suitable for the occasion then pay immediately.

✓ So I usually pick something suitable for the occasion and pay for it immediately.

Add 'for it' after 'pay' to complete the verb's object and use 'and' to join clauses. 'Then' replaced by 'and' for natural sequence. Suggestion: include object after 'pay' (pay for it) and link clauses clearly.

× During the weekdays I go to school so I wear my formal uniform to look intellect and smart and most importantly for the dress code.

✓ During the weekdays I go to school, so I wear my formal uniform to look intellectual and smart, and most importantly to meet the dress code.

'Look intellect' is incorrect; use adjective 'intellectual'. Add commas for clarity and change 'for the dress code' to 'to meet the dress code' to express purpose. Subject-verb agreement is okay; main issue was adjective form and preposition.

× But during the weekends I usually wear casual clothes such as shorts and AT shirt which main purpose is to make me feel comfortable and natural.

✓ But during the weekends I usually wear casual clothes such as shorts and a T-shirt, whose main purpose is to make me feel comfortable and natural.

Use 'a T-shirt' (article needed) and correct 'AT shirt' to 'a T-shirt'; use 'whose main purpose' to connect the noun to its purpose. Alternatively 'which' requires a verb: 'which has the main purpose of making me feel...'. Suggestion: use correct article and relative clause form.

× I don't have a single favorite color, but I often wear yellow or blue.

✓ I don't have a single favorite color, but I often wear yellow or blue.

Sentence is correct; no article errors. Included as no-change instance.

× They're relatively light and absorb less heat and then black clothing, so they're more comfortable in summer and stains are less obvious than on white clothes.

✓ Lighter colors such as yellow and blue absorb less heat than black clothing, so they are more comfortable in summer, and stains are less obvious than on white clothes.

Original sentence mixes ideas and has unclear comparison. Clarify that lighter colors absorb less heat than black; use comparative 'less' properly and restructure sentence for clarity. Suggestion: explicitly state the comparison and separate clauses with commas.