Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法ミスや不自然なフレーズ（例: "When I hang on with friends"）、断片文（"When I hang on..."）があり、文のつながりや語彙の幅が不足しています。より自然な表現にするために、接続詞を使って文をつなぎ、具体的な色や場面を一つ追加して内容を豊かにしてください。5文以内に収め、冗長さを避けましょう。

예시: I usually wear T-shirts in my favourite colours because they are comfortable and easy to style. For example, I often choose a blue T-shirt when meeting friends because it looks casual but neat, and it goes well with jeans. This combination is my go-to for relaxed family meals or outings.

제안: 全体的に答えは明確で自然ですが、現在進行形の誤用（"when I running around"）や少し単調な語彙があります。接続語（for example のほかに "so" や "therefore"）を使って理由と例をより論理的に結びつけ、動詞の形を確認してください。具体的な場面や頻度を一つ加えるとさらに良くなります。

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move easily and feel relaxed during the day. For example, I usually wear jeans and soft T-shirts when I'm running errands or meeting friends on weekends, so I can stay comfortable all day.

제안: 答えは直接的ですが、文がやや冗長で同じ理由を繰り返しています（動きやすさ、快適さ）。代わりに一つの強い理由を述べ、短い具体例を付け加えて自然さを出しましょう。発音や主語一致に注意してください（"that's"→"they're"など）。

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they're comfortable and let me move freely. For instance, I often wear them when I go to casual restaurants with my family because they keep me relaxed.

제안: 文法の誤り（時制の不一致、二重の接続詞 "but but"、不自然な表現 "spend a little time to choosing"）が目立ちます。まず時制を整理し、過去と現在を明確に分けて述べてください。接続詞で理由と結果を論理的に結び、自然な動詞形（spend time choosing）を使いましょう。

예시: I didn't spend much time choosing clothes when I was a child, but now it's more important because I often meet friends or go to restaurants with family. Therefore, I usually spend a short time selecting an outfit that looks neat and comfortable.

제안: 意味は伝わりますが、文の結びつきが不自然です（"On weekdays because of school roles, so..."）。まずトピックセンテンスをはっきり述べ、次に理由を述べてください。単数複数や冠詞（"the T-shirts"→"T-shirts"）に注意し、語順を自然に整えましょう。

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear my school uniform because of school rules, but at the weekend I usually wear T-shirts since they are more comfortable than the uniform.

제안: 文法と語順に問題があります（"Not only... but also" の使い方、複数扱い、冠詞）。具体的に好きな色を明確にし、理由やどの色をよく着るかを付け加えると良いです。短くシンプルな構造で答え、文法に注意してください。

예시: I like both white and black for my T-shirts because they are simple and easy to match with jeans. I often choose white in summer and black in cooler weather.

× I prefer wearing T-shirts in my favorite colors because they are comfortable.

✓ I prefer to wear T-shirts in my favorite colors because they are comfortable.

Using 'prefer' can be followed by either 'to' + base verb or verb+ing, but in this context 'prefer to wear' sounds more natural and consistent with later uses. Use 'prefer to wear' for habits or choices. Suggestion: Use 'prefer to wear' when stating a habitual preference.

× When I hang on with friends or go to restaurant with my family.

✓ When I hang out with friends or go to a restaurant with my family, I think that's a good choice because T-shirts are casual and easy to match with jeans.

This was a sentence fragment missing a main clause and contains wrong phrasing 'hang on' and missing article before 'restaurant'. Use 'hang out' for spending time with friends and 'a restaurant' as singular countable noun. Suggestion: Combine clauses into a complete sentence and use correct verbs and articles.

× For example, I usually wear jeans and soft T-shirts when I running around or meeting friends.

✓ For example, I usually wear jeans and soft T-shirts when I am running around or meeting friends.

After 'when' a present continuous action needs auxiliary 'am/is/are' plus present participle. 'When I running' is missing 'am'. Suggestion: Include the appropriate auxiliary verb for present continuous: 'I am running'.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because that's comfortable and can let me move easily, and I think that's a good choice to hang out with your friends or go to restaurants with my family.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and let me move easily, and I think they are a good choice for hanging out with my friends or going to restaurants with my family.

Pronoun 'that' is singular and doesn't agree with plural 'T-shirts'; use 'they'. Also 'can let me' is unnatural; use 'let me'. 'Your friends' is inconsistent with speaker perspective; use 'my friends'. Use gerunds after 'a good choice for'. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns agree in number and maintain consistent perspective ('my' not 'your'). Use natural verbs like 'let' and gerunds after 'for'.

× When I was a child, I didn't spend any time on choosing clothes but but I need to hang out with my friend or go to restaurant with my family.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't spend any time choosing clothes because I needed only to hang out with my friends or go to restaurants with my family.

Tense inconsistency: 'didn't spend' (past) should be matched with 'needed' (past), not 'need' (present). Also remove extra 'but' and correct plural nouns and articles: 'friends' and 'restaurants'. 'Spend time choosing' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: Keep verbs in the same past tense and fix plurals and articles.

× So I think choosing clothes is become more important in my life.

✓ So I think choosing clothes has become more important in my life.

The structure 'is become' is incorrect. Use present perfect 'has become' to show a change from past to present. Suggestion: Use present perfect for changes that have relevance now: 'has become'.

× So I will spend a little time to choosing clothes.

✓ So I will spend a little time choosing clothes.

After 'spend time' the verb should be in -ing form without 'to'. 'To choosing' is incorrect. Suggestion: Use 'spend time' + verb+ing: 'spend time choosing'.

× On weekdays because of school roles, so I wear the school uniform every day, and at the weekend I usually wear the T-shirts because that's more comfortable than the school uniform.

✓ On weekdays I wear the school uniform every day because of school rules, and at the weekend I usually wear T-shirts because they are more comfortable than the school uniform.

The original had awkward connectors 'because... so' and 'school roles' is incorrect; use 'school rules'. Also remove unnecessary 'the' before 'T-shirts' and correct pronoun agreement: 'they are'. Suggestion: Use one reason connector ('because') and correct vocabulary and pronoun agreement.

× Not only white but also the black is my favorite colors with my T-shirts.

✓ Not only white but also black are my favorite colors for my T-shirts.

Subject-verb and number agreement: 'colors' is plural so use 'are'. 'the black' is unnatural; use 'black'. Also 'with my T-shirts' should be 'for my T-shirts' to show preference of colors. Suggestion: Match plurality and use correct preposition 'for'.