Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words and vary vocabulary (e.g., breathable, insulating). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I usually wear cotton in summer and wool in winter. Cotton is breathable, which keeps me cool in hot weather, while wool provides good insulation and keeps me warm in cold months.

제안: Clarify your idea and correct word choice. Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why with appropriate vocabulary (e.g., professional, confident, respectful). Avoid unclear phrases and keep to 1–2 supporting sentences.

예시: I usually prefer to wear smart clothes because they make me look more professional and confident. Dressing smart helps me create a positive impression at work and in formal situations.

제안: This answer is clear but could be slightly expanded with a brief reason. Use a linking word to connect the contrast and give a concise explanation (1–2 sentences).

예시: I like wearing T-shirts, but I prefer dresses most of the time because they feel more comfortable and suit my style for social occasions.

제안: Avoid repeating the same point. Provide one clear reason and, if possible, a brief example of what you do (e.g., try different outfits, plan looks). Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use linking words like because or so.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I am indecisive and often try several outfits. For example, I usually try on two or three combinations before I decide what to wear.

제안: Correct grammar and streamline the answer. Start with a clear topic sentence, then contrast weekdays and weekends using linking words (e.g., whereas, while). Be specific about examples of styles and keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I dress more formally and neatly for work, whereas at weekends I choose casual, colorful outfits that feel relaxed and fun.

제안: Good content but correct small grammar points and add a brief reason or a short example of how you use the color. Use one linking or explanatory phrase and keep it concise.

예시: I mostly wear pink because it has been my favorite color since I was ten. For instance, I often choose pink blouses or accessories to brighten my outfits.

× Mostly I like to wear cotton clothes during summer and woollen clothes during winter because it can help because cotton clothes can help me breathe throughout the summer and woollen clothes will keep me warm during the winter.

✓ Mostly I like wearing cotton clothes in summer and woollen clothes in winter because cotton helps my skin breathe during the summer and woollen keeps me warm in winter.

Repeated and awkward use of 'to wear' and 'can help because' caused redundancy; 'like to wear' is acceptable but 'like wearing' is more natural here (Verb + -ing). Also 'during summer' should be 'in summer' (preposition) but preposition errors are not corrected unless listed; however the main correction focuses on verb + -ing form and removing unnecessary modal 'can' and repetition. Use concise verbs: 'cotton helps my skin breathe' and 'woollen keeps me warm'. Suggestion: Prefer 'like wearing' for habitual preferences and avoid redundant phrases.

× Most of the time I prefer to wear smart clothes because I like to present myself as a passionate and mercy with woman.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to wear smart clothes because I like to present myself as passionate and polite with women.

The sentence used incorrect adjective 'mercy' (a noun) and wrong preposition 'with woman'. This is an adjective choice error (incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Replace 'mercy' with an adjective such as 'polite' or 'respectful' and use plural 'women' for general reference. Also remove the extra 'a' before 'passionate'. Suggestion: Use appropriate adjectives to describe personality traits and ensure noun/adjective forms match.

× I like wearing T-shirts, but I prefer wearing dresses more often than T-shirts.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts, but I prefer wearing dresses more often.

The repetition 'more often than T-shirts' is unnecessary and awkward. The structure 'prefer wearing dresses more often' uses the -ing form correctly to express habitual preference. Suggestion: Keep the comparative part concise and avoid repeating the contrasted item when context is clear.

× Yes, I actually do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am very indecisive about my clothes and my wardrobe is actually very messy most of the time. So yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

✓ Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am very indecisive and my wardrobe is usually very messy, so I spend a lot of time deciding what to wear.

Redundant phrasing and tense consistency: 'most of the time' and 'actually' are repetitive. The present simple 'do spend' is fine, but streamline to avoid repetition. Also 'choosing clothes' repeated; replace second instance with 'deciding what to wear' for variety. Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary repetition and use varied expressions while keeping present tense.

× Yes, I do wear different type, different styles of clothes on weekdays because I want to be look, I want to look more put together during the weekdays and in the weekends I like to look more fun and more outgoing. So.

✓ Yes, I do wear different types and styles of clothes on weekdays because I want to look more put together during the week, and on weekends I like to look more fun and outgoing.

Errors include 'different type' (singular) should be 'different types' (plural) and awkward phrasing 'be look' is incorrect verb construction (sentence structure) and repetition 'during the weekdays' better as 'during the week'. Also 'in the weekends' should be 'on weekends' (preposition) but main listed issue is singular/plural. Suggestion: Use plural 'types' when referring to multiple kinds and correct verb phrases to 'want to look'.

× Most of the time I wear pink clothes because pink is my favorite color ever since I was 10 year old.

✓ Most of the time I wear pink because pink has been my favourite color since I was ten years old.

Tense inconsistency: 'is my favorite color ever since I was' should use present perfect 'has been' to link past to present. Also '10 year old' needs plural 'years old'. Suggestion: Use present perfect for actions or states that began in the past and continue to the present and write numbers in words for ages in formal speech.