Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence stating the kind of clothes you like, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and correct small grammatical errors (e.g. "I don't have any special clothes for work" not "especially to work"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer simple, casual clothes. For example, I usually wear T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and suit the hot weather where I live.

제안: Give a clear direct answer first, then support it with one or two specific reasons. Correct common mistakes: use "prefer" not "preserve," and keep sentences shorter. Use a linking phrase like "because" or "so" to show cause and effect.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed and improve my mood. If I wear uncomfortable clothes, I get distracted and find it hard to focus on my work.

제안: Answer directly and avoid unclear words. Fix vocabulary errors ("diction", "Haiti", "engines") and give a simple reason or example. Keep to one or two supporting sentences and use linking words like "especially when".

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially when the weather is hot. I also choose T-shirts for informal events because they are casual and comfortable.

제안: Give a clear and grammatically correct response: say how often you spend time choosing clothes, then explain briefly why with a specific detail (mood, occasion). Use linking words like "because" or "depending on" and avoid unclear phrases.

예시: Not usually. I only spend time choosing clothes sometimes, depending on my mood or the occasion. For example, if I feel happy I might choose brighter colors, but I usually pick black or blue for everyday wear.

제안: Start with a clear statement about the difference, then give one or two specific examples. Remove repetitions and correct vocabulary ("uniform" not "strip"). Use linking words like "but" or "however" to contrast weekday and weekend styles.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear my university uniform, but at the weekend I wear whatever I like. For example, I might wear jeans and a jacket when I go out with friends.

제안: Answer clearly and avoid repetition. Say which colours you like and give a brief reason or example. Remove unclear phrases like "broken blood." Keep it to one or two concise sentences.

예시: My favorite colours are blue and black because they look neat and are easy to match. I have liked these colours since I was a child, so I often choose clothes in blue or black.

× What type of clothes? I don't have any type of clothes especially to work but I like simple like usually I wear T-shirt and jeans because it's comfortable for me and make my life easier because of the the weather.

✓ What type of clothes? I don't have a specific type of clothes for work, but I like simple clothes. Usually I wear a T-shirt and jeans because they are comfortable for me and make my life easier in this weather.

The sentence has multiple structure problems: missing articles, incorrect phrase order, and run-on sentences. Change 'any type of clothes especially to work' to 'a specific type of clothes for work' to fix preposition and article use (Article errors/Incorrect use of prepositions). Separate ideas into shorter sentences and use plural agreement ('T-shirt and jeans' -> 'a T-shirt and jeans' with 'they are') to fix subject-verb agreement and pluralization. Use 'in this weather' instead of 'because of the the weather' to correct preposition and remove duplicate word 'the'.

× It will depend on the weather shortly.

✓ It depends on the weather.

'Will depend' suggests future but the speaker means a general present habit. Use simple present 'depends' to match habitual context (Present tense issue/Modal verb usage). Remove 'shortly' because it is unnecessary and unnatural here.

× I preserve wearing comfortable clothes because I'm the one who wear it and it will make it will change directly my mood when I wear the clothes.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable clothes because I am the one who wears them and they directly change my mood when I wear them.

'Preserve' is incorrect; use 'prefer'. Pronoun agreement: 'the one who wear it' should be 'the one who wears them' (third person singular verb and plural pronoun). Remove duplicated 'it will make it will change' and use 'they directly change my mood'. This fixes third person singular, pronoun number, and sentence structure.

× If I'm not comfortable it I will make my life difficult and I can say it make it simple.

✓ If I'm not comfortable, it makes my life difficult; if I am comfortable, it makes my life easier.

Original is confusing and contains tense and agreement errors. Use clear conditional structure and consistent present simple for general truths ('it makes' not 'it will make' when speaking about habitual effects). Fix subject-verb agreement ('it make' -> 'it makes') and remove extra pronouns.

× Yes, I do like wearing diction, especially what the weather is Haiti and when I go in some not formal event T-shirt engines is my preference for that today.

✓ Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts, especially when the weather is hot, and when I go to informal events a T-shirt and jeans are my preference.

Many words are incorrect: 'diction' should be 'T-shirts'; 'Haiti' likely intended 'hot'. Use 'when the weather is hot' (correct adjective) and 'go to informal events' (correct preposition and adjective order). Use plural agreement 'T-shirt and jeans are my preference' and correct word order.

× Occasionally no, I don't know it's fan time if chosen flowers because it's about my mood that I wear clothes like I am happy today and I will black or blue.

✓ Occasionally no. It depends on my mood when I choose clothes; for example, if I am happy today I will choose black or blue.

Original mixes tenses and contains many incorrect words. Use present simple 'it depends' for habitual action and 'choose clothes' instead of 'chosen flowers'. Clarify the conditional 'if I am happy' and use 'choose black or blue'. This fixes tense, word choice, and sentence structure.

× It's really depend on the situation.

✓ It really depends on the situation.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'depend' should be 'depends' to match singular subject 'it'. This is a present tense/subject-verb agreement correction.

× Yes, as a student I wear the the clothes that the the the university strip us.

✓ Yes, as a student I wear the clothes that the university requires us to wear.

Remove repeated 'the' and replace 'strip us' (wrong verb) with 'requires us to wear' to convey meaning. Fix article repetition and verb choice to correct sentence structure.

× But on the weekend I can prefer whatever clothes I want.

✓ But on the weekend I can wear whatever clothes I want.

'Can prefer' is unnatural here; 'prefer' is a state verb and doesn't pair with 'can' in this context. Use 'can wear' to indicate ability/permission. This fixes verb usage and sentence clarity.

× I can wear some pants or some jacket during the weekend because we don't have any classes.

✓ I can wear pants or a jacket during the weekend because we don't have any classes.

Remove unnecessary 'some' before countable nouns and use the article 'a' before 'jacket'. This corrects article and quantifier usage and makes the sentence natural.

× The color that I really like the most is blue and black.

✓ The colors that I like the most are blue and black.

Use plural 'colors' and plural verb 'are' to agree with two items (singular/plural issue and subject-verb agreement).

× This is kind of uniform that I really enjoy.

✓ These are the kinds of colors/uniform I really like.

Original is unclear: 'This is kind of uniform' doesn't match context. If referring to colors as a uniform style, rephrase for clarity. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun choice.

× When I was a child until now, When I when I had been a child until now.

✓ From when I was a child until now, I have preferred these colors.

Use present perfect 'have preferred' to express a preference continuing from childhood to present. Remove repeated fragments and incorrect past perfect 'had been' which is unnecessary here.

× I prefer broken blood.

✓ I prefer dark blue.

'Broken blood' is incorrect vocabulary. Likely intended 'dark blue' or 'navy blue'. Replace with correct color adjective+noun and ensure it aligns with earlier stated colors.