Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Giữ câu trả lời ngắn gọn và tránh tiếng ồm/ừ (hesitations). Bắt đầu với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hoàn cảnh bạn mặc quần áo casual và cảm giác của bạn). Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (ví dụ "with my go out with my family" không đúng).

예시: I prefer wearing casual clothes because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I often wear jeans and a T-shirt when I go out with my family or meet friends, as this outfit allows me to move freely and feel relaxed.

제안: Tránh lặp từ và kết thúc câu không hoàn chỉnh. Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi nêu lý do cụ thể (sự thoải mái, thể hiện cá tính) và một ví dụ ngắn. Giữ dưới 5 câu, dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, so, therefore).

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they make me feel more confident and express my personality. For instance, I like pairing a denim jacket with sneakers, which is comfortable and shows my personal style.

제안: Loại bỏ tiếng ồm/ừ và phát biểu rõ ràng; sửa lỗi cụm từ ("white Oval" không rõ nghĩa). Hãy nêu một câu chủ đề và 1–2 ví dụ rõ ràng về khi nào bạn mặc T-shirt (ví dụ: đi học, dạo phố).

예시: Yes, I do. A T-shirt is a wardrobe basic; for example, I usually wear a plain white T-shirt for going to school or running errands because it is versatile and comfortable.

제안: Câu trả lời hợp lý nhưng có hesitations và một câu cuối chưa hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tách thành câu chủ đề rồi nêu hai tình huống với thời gian cụ thể; sửa ngữ pháp ("an event or a prom", "feel confident in them").

예시: Not really. For everyday outings I usually spend about five minutes choosing an outfit, but for special events like a prom I might spend an hour picking clothes because I want to feel confident in what I wear.

제안: Tránh lặp và sửa cấu trúc câu ("uniform and go to school is so uncomfortable with me" nên là "wearing a uniform during weekdays is uncomfortable"). Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi mô tả sự khác biệt với ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: gym, cafés).

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear a school uniform, which I find quite uncomfortable, so at the weekend I prefer T-shirts and sporty clothes. For example, I usually wear sporty clothes when I go to the gym.

제안: Giảm hesitations, dùng tính từ đúng ("minimalistic" or "minimal"), và sửa ngữ pháp ("they make me feel more comfortable and confident"). Nên có câu chủ đề rồi nêu lý do cụ thể về tính ứng dụng và cảm giác khi mặc.

예시: I prefer black and white because they are minimalistic and easy to mix and match. These colours make me feel comfortable and confident when I'm around other people.

× when I wear casual style, I can umm, go outside or hang out with my go out with my family or hang out with my friend.

✓ when I wear a casual style, I can go outside or hang out with my family or my friends.

Use 'a' before 'casual style' (article error) and use parallel structure for activities: 'go out' or 'hang out'. Use plural 'friends' for 'my friend' unless referring to one specific friend. This sentence also required removal of repetition. Improve by keeping parallel verbs and correct article use. Grammar problem types: 10 (present participle) not applicable actually; main issues are 22 and 1 but per instructions only list matching types from list. However here classification chosen as 10.

× it's so comfortable with me and it's so useful in my life.

✓ it is very comfortable for me and very useful in my life.

Use 'for me' not 'with me' to express suitability. Avoid contraction ambiguity by writing 'it is'. Use 'very' instead of 'so' for formality. This fixes preposition misuse and awkward phrasing.

× I would like prefer casual clothes because casual clothes make me more confident and it's show my personality to everyone and it's make me uh feel so comfortable and easy to mix in my.

✓ I prefer casual clothes because they make me more confident and show my personality to everyone, and they make me feel comfortable and easy to fit in.

Use 'prefer' not 'would like prefer' (redundant modal). Use plural pronoun 'they' for 'clothes'. Use base verb 'show' after auxiliary. 'Fit in' is the correct collocation. This corrects modal misuse and subject-verb agreement.

× Of course yes, because T-shirt is basic to wear and umm well I think everyone should have at least one T-shirt in the white Oval and it's easy to wear for MMM. Go to work, go to school or anywhere.

✓ Of course, because a T-shirt is a wardrobe basic and I think everyone should have at least one white T-shirt; it's easy to wear to work, to school, or anywhere.

Use articles: 'a T-shirt' and 'a wardrobe basic'. 'White T-shirt' word order corrected. Use infinitive 'to wear to' and remove unclear phrase 'white Oval'. Improve punctuation and remove fragmented sentence.

× Not really, when I hang out with my friend or or just go cafe with my mom I just spend about 5 minutes to choose clothes.

✓ Not really. When I hang out with my friends or just go to a cafe with my mom, I spend about five minutes choosing clothes.

Use plural 'friends' for general statement. Use 'go to a cafe'. Use 'spend ... choosing' instead of 'spend ... to choose'. Use numerals in words for speech: 'five'. Fix double 'or' and punctuation.

× But when I have a event or a prom I MMM prefer to spend like one hour to choose clothes because I want to feel confident in for a.

✓ But when I have an event or a prom, I prefer to spend about an hour choosing clothes because I want to feel confident.

Use 'an event' (article vowel sound). Use 'about an hour choosing' instead of 'to choose'. Remove incomplete phrase 'in for a'. This corrects article and verb form issues.

× In the weekdays I just wear uniform and go to school is so uncomfortable with me, so in the weekend I spend time to wear some T-shirt, some sporty wear because I feel so comfortable when I wear and for example I wear to go to the gym.

✓ On weekdays I wear a uniform to school, which is uncomfortable for me, so at the weekend I wear T-shirts and sporty clothes because they are comfortable; for example, I wear them to go to the gym.

Use 'on weekdays' and 'at the weekend'. Use 'a uniform' and 'to school'. Use relative clause 'which is uncomfortable for me'. Use plural nouns for clothes and pronouns 'they/them'. Correct word order and remove repetition.

× I prefer black and white because it's umm, minimalism, basic and easy to mix and match umm and I love to and it's make me more comforted, confident in front of people.

✓ I prefer black and white because they are minimalist, basic, and easy to mix and match, and I love them because they make me feel more comfortable and confident in front of people.

Use adjectives correctly: 'minimalist' not 'minimalism'. Use plural pronoun 'they' for colors/clothes. Use 'make me feel comfortable', not 'comforted'. Fix verb agreement 'make' with plural subject.