Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise, correct mistakes ("war walks" → "long walks"), avoid filler words (uh), use one clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words. Add a specific example to show when you wear sports clothes.

예시: I prefer wearing sports clothes because they are very comfortable. For example, I often wear a tracksuit when I meet friends or go for long walks in the park, since it lets me move freely and stay relaxed.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and avoid repeating phrases. Correct grammar ("what would happened" → "what would happen", avoid conditional errors). Use linking words to explain reasons and maybe a brief example rather than hyperbole.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make it easier to get around town. For instance, walking long distances in dresses and high heels would be uncomfortable and slow me down, so I usually choose trainers and jeans instead.

제안: Be concise and fix word choice ("hygiene unhygienic" → "unhygienic"). Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a short specific detail about training routine. Avoid fillers.

예시: Yes, I wear T-shirts often because I exercise after work, so I can go straight to training without changing. However, sometimes people think this can be unhygienic, so I usually pack a clean shirt for after my workout.

제안: Make the response smoother and correct grammar ("all the items seems" → "all the items seem"). Remove fillers and add a linking word to explain pattern and a brief result. Offer a specific habit to illustrate.

예시: Yes, I spend more time than I'd like browsing online shops because I want the best option. After hours of scrolling, though, the clothes often start to look unappealing, so I usually close the app and sleep on the decision.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and keep supporting details relevant and polite. Describe briefly why sports clothes suit both weekday and weekend routines and avoid emotionally charged language like "horrible"—use milder phrasing instead.

예시: No, I usually wear sports clothes both on weekdays and weekends because they suit my active routine. My mother prefers smarter outfits, so we sometimes disagree, but I find casual wear more practical for daily activities.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and refine phrasing ("I think it's better to have one colored" unclear—say "one colored item or accent"). Remove fillers and give a reason and a specific example of how you use minimal colours in outfits.

예시: I prefer neutral colours and a minimalist style, so my wardrobe mostly contains black and white items. I usually add a single colored accessory, like a scarf or shoes, to give my outfit a subtle touch.

× Honestly, I am into sports clothes. Uh, the reason is that it is comfortable to wear on any occasion, from hanging out with friends to going on long war walks for example. And uh, I feel comfort.

✓ Honestly, I like sports clothes. The reason is that they are comfortable to wear on any occasion, from hanging out with friends to going on long walks, for example. And I feel comfortable.

Used incorrect adjective/adverb forms and wrong noun: 'sports clothes' is acceptable but 'I am into sports clothes' is informal; better 'I like sports clothes'. 'It is comfortable' refers to clothes (plural) so use 'they are comfortable'. 'War walks' is a typo; likely 'long walks'. 'I feel comfort' uses a noun where adjective 'comfortable' is needed. Suggest using correct adjective forms and matching plural agreement.

× Well, I tend to choose comfortable clothes because it's easier to move around my town and that I honestly can't imagine what would happened if I would walk around the city in dresses or in dresses and heels.

✓ Well, I tend to choose comfortable clothes because it's easier to move around my town, and I honestly can't imagine what would happen if I walked around the city in dresses and heels.

Tense and conditional form errors: 'what would happened' mixes conditional and past; correct is 'what would happen' or 'what would have happened' depending. Also avoid 'would' twice; use 'if I walked' for second conditional. Remove redundant 'in dresses or in dresses and heels'. Suggest using consistent conditional structure: 'would + base verb' with 'if' + past simple.

× Well, I wear T-shirts quite frequently because I'm really into sports and after work it's easier for me not to change my clothes and to go on my daily training in the same T-shirt.

✓ Well, I wear T-shirts quite frequently because I'm really into sports, and after work it's easier for me not to change my clothes and to go to my daily training in the same T-shirt.

Incorrect verb/preposition collocation rather than third person singular: 'go on my daily training' is unidiomatic; correct is 'go to my daily training' or 'go to my training session'. Ensure preposition 'to' is used with 'go' for activities. Sentence otherwise matches subject-verb agreement.

× Some would say that it's hygiene unhygienic.

✓ Some would say that it's unhygienic.

Redundant and incorrect word 'hygiene' placed before 'unhygienic'. Use the adjective 'unhygienic' alone. Remove extra noun to make sentence grammatical.

× Honestly, more than I would like to. I tend to scroll uh, some e-commerce apps uh, in order to choose the best option, but I always end up with nothing and uh, all the items seems horrible after hours of scrolling.

✓ Honestly, more than I would like. I tend to scroll through some e-commerce apps in order to choose the best option, but I always end up with nothing, and all the items seem horrible after hours of scrolling.

Present tense and subject-verb agreement: 'all the items seems' uses singular verb 'seems' with plural subject 'items'; correct is 'items seem'. Also use 'scroll through' (correct phrasal verb). Minor punctuation fixes improve clarity.

× To be honest, no, I always wear sports clothes because it is the most convenient style for me. And uh, actually my mother, uh, we argued a lot with her because she didn't like my style.

✓ To be honest, no, I always wear sports clothes because they are the most convenient style for me. Actually, I argued a lot with my mother because she didn't like my style.

Subject-verb and pronoun agreement: 'it is the most convenient style' refers to 'sports clothes' (plural), so use 'they are'. Sentence structure confusing: 'my mother, we argued a lot with her' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'I argued a lot with my mother' for correct subject and word order.

× What colour clothes do you like? Honestly, I am not into bright colored clothes. I like more minimalistic styles. So in my wardrobe, uh, you are most likely to find black and white clothes and uh, I think it's better to have one colored.

✓ Honestly, I'm not into brightly colored clothes. I prefer more minimalistic styles. So in my wardrobe you are most likely to find black and white clothes, and I think it's better to have one color accent.

Incorrect use of adverb/adjective forms and preposition: use 'brightly colored' (adverb modifying colored) or 'bright colors'. 'I like more minimalistic styles' replaced with 'I prefer' for naturalness. 'One colored' is unclear; likely means 'one color accent' or 'one colored item'—rephrased to 'one color accent'. Also remove unnecessary filler words.