Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Correct minor grammar (use plural/singular agreement) and avoid fillers like “yes.” For example, say you prefer comfortable sportswear and mention situations you wear it (e.g. exercise, leisure). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes, especially sporty items like dry-fit shorts and breathable T-shirts. I usually wear them for exercising or when I’m relaxing at home because they let me move easily and stay cool.

제안: Start with a direct answer (comfortable or smart), then give one clear reason with a specific example. Fix grammar (use consistent noun forms) and remove confusing personal statements like “homesick” unless you explain them. Use a linking word to connect reason.

예시: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because I value ease of movement and low maintenance. For example, I often choose jeans and sneakers for work and weekends since they’re practical and comfortable.

제안: Answer directly then give a specific reason and an example. Correct vocabulary (e.g. “dry-fit” not “drive it” or “try fit”). Use a linking word to connect idea to reason. Keep sentences concise.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially dry-fit ones because they wick sweat away. For example, I wear dry-fit T-shirts when I play tennis because they keep me comfortable during long matches.

제안: Give a clear answer about time spent and explain with a specific habit or routine. Avoid unclear phrases (“sing my favorite”, “my IT”) and correct grammar. Mention how you manage time as a positive point.

예시: Yes, I sometimes spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look neat. However, I manage this by picking outfits the night before, which saves time in the morning.

제안: Answer directly whether you change styles, then give one specific example of weekday vs weekend outfits. Avoid vague and negative phrasing; use linking words to clarify contrast.

예시: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. For example, on weekdays I wear smart-casual clothes like a shirt and chinos for work, but on weekends I prefer more relaxed outfits like jeans and a hoodie for going out.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the colors, then give a specific reason (e.g. skin tone, versatility) and an example of when you wear them. Correct tense and phrasing (“suit me” is fine).

예시: My favorite colors to wear are brown and black because they suit my skin tone and are easy to match. For instance, I often choose a black jacket for evenings and brown accessories for daytime outfits.

× I like clothes when I'm comfortable with it, and I like sport clothes like dry fit shorts. Yes.

✓ I like clothes that are comfortable, and I like sports clothes such as dri-fit shorts.

The sentence uses incorrect pronoun reference ('it') for 'clothes' and incorrect relative structure. Use 'that are' to refer to clothes (plural) and replace 'it' with correct clause. Also 'sport clothes' should be 'sports clothes' and 'dry fit' is commonly 'dri-fit' or 'dry-fit'. Ensure plural agreement with 'clothes'. Suggestion: Use 'that are' for describing nouns and keep plural forms consistent.

× Yes, I like to wear comfortable clothes and I'm a fan of it, but casual clothes is not, umm, not necessary because I'm a homesick girl and smart clothes. I'm not a fan because I'm a homesick.

✓ Yes, I like to wear comfortable clothes and I'm a fan of them, but casual clothes are not necessary because I'm a homebody and I'm not a fan of smart clothes.

Pronoun for plural 'clothes' should be 'them' (not 'it'). Verb agreement: 'casual clothes are', not 'is'. 'Homesick' is incorrect for someone who prefers staying at home; use 'homebody' or 'home-loving'. Also clarify negation: 'not a fan of smart clothes.' Suggestion: Match pronouns and verbs to plural nouns and choose correct descriptive noun ('homebody').

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, but what kind of T-shirts? Umm, I'm a fan of T-shirt like drive it like it's comfortable to wear, like sport wear. Yes like because I'm playing long tennis I like try fit T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I prefer T-shirts that are comfortable, like sportswear. Because I play long tennis matches, I like performance-fit T-shirts.

Use plural 'T-shirts' consistently and describe them with 'that are comfortable' rather than 'drive it like it's'. 'Sportswear' is one word; 'try fit' likely intended 'performance-fit' or 'athletic fit'. Also use 'I play' (present simple) for habits and 'matches' for clarity. Suggestion: Use clear relative clauses and correct vocabulary for sports clothing.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but I know how to manage my time to sing my favorite and comfortable clothes. But wearing makeup is my weaknesses because it's too longer and my IT is wasting my time.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but I know how to manage my time to pick my favorite and most comfortable clothes. However, applying makeup is a weakness for me because it takes too long and wastes my time.

'Sing' is incorrect here; use 'pick' or 'choose'. 'My weaknesses' should be 'a weakness for me'. 'Too longer' is ungrammatical; use 'takes too long'. 'My IT is wasting my time' is unclear; likely 'it wastes my time'. Maintain present simple for habits. Suggestion: Use appropriate verbs ('pick', 'take') and noun phrases ('a weakness for me').

× Weekdays and weekends is my favorite day because. Go out and wear a different style is my favorite because I don't want to go out not wearing style and ugly.

✓ Both weekdays and weekends are my favorite, because I like going out and wearing different styles; I don't want to go out looking unstylish or ugly.

Subject-verb agreement: 'Weekdays and weekends are' (plural). The original has sentence fragments ('because.' with nothing after). Combine ideas into a complete sentence. 'Not wearing style and ugly' is ungrammatical; use 'looking unstylish or ugly.' Suggestion: Ensure complete sentences, correct verb agreement, and use proper adjectives for appearance.

× My favorite color to wear is brown and black because that was my color analysis and suit me.

✓ My favorite colors to wear are brown and black because that was the result of my color analysis and they suit me.

Number agreement: 'color' should be 'colors' and verb 'are' for plural. 'That was my color analysis' is awkward; say 'that was the result of my color analysis.' 'Suit me' needs plural subject 'they suit me'. Suggestion: Match plural nouns with plural verbs and use clearer phrasing for cause and effect.