Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the types of clothes you like, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and incorrect references (e.g., "he's" for a brand). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer casual clothes, especially T‑shirts. For example, I often wear AT shirts and Jack & Jones T‑shirts because they are comfortable and easy to move in, so I can do many activities without worrying about my outfit.

제안: Give a single clear statement then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Remove filler sounds (uh) and repetition. Keep to 2–3 sentences with clear grammar and vocabulary.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart attire because I like loose‑fitting items. For instance, I choose sweatshirts and relaxed jeans since they let me move freely and feel comfortable all day.

제안: Answer directly and give one clear reason plus an example. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect sentence structure. Use a linking word like "because" and mention a specific feature (comfort, style, versatility).

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are simple and versatile. For example, a Jack & Jones T‑shirt looks casual but neat, so I can wear it when meeting friends or going to class.

제안: Provide a clear yes/no and then explain briefly how much time you spend and why, with specific details. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Keep it to two sentences maximum.

예시: Not really — I usually spend only a few minutes choosing clothes because I stick to a few favorite outfits. However, I may take longer when shopping for a special event.

제안: Give a clear contrast with linking words (e.g., "On weekdays...but on weekends...") and provide specific examples of items you wear. Avoid repetition and correct word choice errors.

예시: On weekdays I usually wear comfortable clothes at home, such as sweatpants and T‑shirts. But on weekends I prefer jeans and casual shirts when I go to the mall or meet friends because they look more fashionable yet still comfortable.

제안: State the colour clearly and give one specific context where you wear it. Complete the sentence and add a reason or example to make the answer more informative.

예시: My favourite colour is red. I often wear red T‑shirts when I go out with friends because the colour stands out and makes me feel confident.

× My favorite clothes is AT Shirt because it is really easy to wear and I feel really comfortable after wearing AT Shirt include things.

✓ My favorite piece of clothing is an AT shirt because it is really easy to wear and I feel very comfortable wearing it.

The original mixes plural 'clothes' with singular verb 'is' and repeats the noun awkwardly. Use 'piece of clothing' or 'shirt' (singular) with 'is'. Replace 'after wearing AT Shirt include things' with 'wearing it' for clarity and correct pronoun reference.

× I love Jack and Jones T-shirts because he's really wearable and we can do many activities with the help of the teacher.

✓ I love Jack and Jones T-shirts because they are very comfortable and we can do many activities in them.

The brand T-shirts are plural so use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are'. 'He's' is incorrect. 'Wearable' is awkward; use 'comfortable' and say 'in them' to indicate wearing the shirts.

× I prefer comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes because I like easy clothes rather than fashionable clothes.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes because I like simple clothes more than fashionable ones.

The repeated 'rather than' is acceptable but 'easy clothes' is incorrect; use 'simple' or 'comfortable'. Also use 'more than' or 'rather than' consistently and replace 'fashionable clothes' with 'fashionable ones' to avoid repetition.

× Because I'm a person who always like to, uh, wear a loose fit and uh, not a fashion sense when the reason behind this is always comfortable.

✓ I'm a person who always likes to wear loose-fitting clothes and not follow fashion trends because comfort is my priority.

Subject-verb agreement: 'person who always like' should be 'likes'. Use 'loose-fitting clothes' instead of 'wear a loose fit'. Rephrase 'not a fashion sense' to 'not follow fashion trends'. Clarify 'the reason behind this is always comfortable' to 'comfort is my priority'.

× Yes, I love wearing T-shirt because T-shirt is the simplest way to wear UMM for me because it is really, uh, smart and fashionable.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are the simplest option for me; they are smart and fashionable.

Use plural 'T-shirts' with plural verb 'are' or 'a T-shirt' with 'is'. 'UMM' is unclear and unnecessary. Replace with 'option' and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'they are'.

× Apart from that, I am many people are also fun bother about the teachers and I love Jack and Jones the most.

✓ Also, many people I know like similar styles, and I love Jack and Jones the most.

Original is incoherent: 'I am many people are also fun bother about the teachers' is ungrammatical. Clarify meaning: if intended to say others also like these clothes, reword to 'many people I know like similar styles'. Keep sentence concise and grammatical.

× Uh, yes, I would like to share a couple of time looking for, uh, clothes because I'm a I'm I am.

✓ Yes, I sometimes spend a little time looking for clothes.

Original is repetitive and ungrammatical. Use 'sometimes' and 'spend a little time' to convey occasional time spent. Remove filler words and repeated 'I'm'.

× Yeah, in week in week days I prefer comfortable clothes in home, but in weekends I prefer to go to mall and outdoors I prefer pants and jeans, especially jeans in weekends and pan in days.

✓ On weekdays I prefer comfortable clothes at home, but on weekends I like to go to the mall and wear pants or jeans, especially jeans on weekends.

Use 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends' (correct prepositions). 'at home' not 'in home'. 'go to the mall' requires definite article. 'pan in days' is unclear; likely 'pants during the day'—use 'wear pants or jeans'. Ensure consistent plural forms and prepositions.

× It's like a comfortable and fashionable in fashionable too.

✓ They are comfortable and fashionable as well.

Original is awkward and redundant. Use plural 'they' to refer to clothes and say 'comfortable and fashionable as well' for conciseness and clarity.

× Red is my favorite colour. I would like to wear red T-shirt and shirt while when when I go to.

✓ Red is my favorite color. I like to wear red T-shirts and shirts when I go out.

Remove repeated 'when' and complete the clause 'when I go out'. Use plural 'T-shirts' and 'color' (American spelling optional) and ensure the sentence is complete and grammatically correct.