Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers, correct small grammar ("depends on the season", "mini shirts" unclear). Give one or two specific examples and a brief reason. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I wear different kinds of clothes depending on the season. For example, in summer I usually wear T-shirts and lightweight shirts because they keep me cool, while in winter I prefer sweaters and jackets for warmth.

제안: Provide a clear direct answer then support with a concise reason. Fix grammar ("I prefer to wear comfortable clothes", "they are uncomfortable", "I have to wear"). Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' briefly. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes. However, I have to dress smartly at work or university sometimes, because those environments require a more formal appearance.

제안: Answer directly and give one or two clear supporting points. Remove hesitation and repetition. Correct phrasing ("you can wear T-shirts in different seasons"). Add a brief example to show variety.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For instance, I wear light cotton T-shirts in summer and layer them under jackets in winter.

제안: Be concise and avoid redundant words. State who you choose clothes with and why, and give one specific detail (e.g., comparing outfits or checking trends). Fix word order and unnecessary words.

예시: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I enjoy the process. I usually shop and decide outfits with my sister, comparing styles and trying different combinations to find what looks best.

제안: Give a clear direct answer plus a short explanation and an example contrasting weekday and weekend if applicable. Correct grammar ("oversized" not "oversizes", "styles" not "stylists"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Not really — my style is usually oversized or streetwear, so I tend to wear similar clothes both on weekdays and weekends. For example, I often wear baggy hoodies and relaxed jeans whether I'm at work or out with friends.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence naming the colours, then give specific examples of garments and reasons. Avoid repetition and hesitations. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

예시: I prefer blue and white. For example, I often wear white T-shirts because they look clean and match everything, and blue jeans because they are comfortable and versatile.

× I wear diff uh, I wear different kinds of clothes.

✓ I wear different kinds of clothes.

Remove filler 'diff uh' which is not needed; sentence already plural 'kinds of clothes' is correct.

× It depends off season, uh, umm, in summer I like to wear a mini shirts and uh, T-shirts, umm, and then.

✓ It depends on the season. In summer I like to wear mini shirts and T-shirts.

Use preposition 'on' with 'depends on'. Add article 'the' before 'season'. 'Mini shirts' is plural so keep plural form. Split into two sentences for clarity and remove fillers.

× I prefer a wear and comfortable clothes because casual clothes and smart clothes for me is uncomfortable but I must to wear these clothes if I were at work or at university so I prefer comfortable clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because casual or smart clothes are uncomfortable for me, but I have to wear them if I am at work or at university, so I prefer comfortable clothes.

Replace 'a wear' with 'to wear' (infinitive). Use plural subject-verb agreement: 'casual or smart clothes are'. 'Must to' is incorrect; use 'have to' or 'must' + base verb. Use present tense 'am' for real situations. Add commas and split for clarity.

× Yes, I like wearing the shirt because they are so comfortable and uh, you can't wear T-shirts, uh, different, uh, seasons, uh, even it's uh, summer or winter. So I often wear T-shirts and they are so stylish.

✓ Yes, I like wearing shirts because they are so comfortable, and you can wear T-shirts in different seasons, whether it is summer or winter. So I often wear T-shirts and they are stylish.

Use plural 'shirts' not 'the shirt' when speaking generally. 'You can't' contradicts intended meaning; use 'you can'. Use 'in different seasons' and 'whether it is' for contrast. Remove fillers and redundant 'so'.

× Usually I do it with my sisters of siblings and I like do it together. Honestly, I like wearing stylish and beautiful clothes so it needs a lot of time Shoes.

✓ Usually I do it with my sisters; I like doing it together. Honestly, I like wearing stylish and beautiful clothes, so it takes a lot of time.

'Sisters of siblings' is incorrect; use 'sisters' or 'siblings'. Use gerund 'doing' after 'like'. 'Needs a lot of time' should be 'takes a lot of time'. Remove stray 'Shoes'.

× Honestly, now I don't often wear different styles of clothes because my style is oversizes or street styles. So these two stylists for me is comfortable. So yeah.

✓ Honestly, I don't often wear different styles of clothes because my style is oversized or street style. These two styles are comfortable for me.

Use 'oversized' (adjective) and singular 'street style' or plural 'styles'. 'Stylists' is wrong word; use 'styles'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'These two styles are'.

× Usually I prefer two colors is blue and white. In white color color umm, I wear uh, white, uh, T-shirt shirts and in blue color I wear jeans and I like missed these colors.

✓ Usually I prefer two colors: blue and white. For white, I wear white T-shirts, and for blue, I wear jeans. I like these colors a lot.

Use colon or restructure to list colors. 'Prefer two colors is' is ungrammatical; use 'I prefer two colors:'. 'T-shirt shirts' redundant—use 'T-shirts'. 'I like missed these colors' incorrect; use 'I like these colors a lot'.