Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Reduce filler words (umm, uh) and correct subject-verb agreement and countable/uncountable forms.

예시: I usually wear modest clothes because I'm Muslim. I prefer long-sleeved shirts and loose jeans, often with graphic prints or decorative details that express my style.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence then one or two clear reasons with linking words. Remove repetitions and filler sounds; correct verb forms and pronouns.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to express myself and feel at ease. For example, casual shirts are more comfortable for walking around and spending time with friends and family.

제안: Be precise and avoid repeating words. Use correct vocabulary (lightweight, breathable) and finish the thought. Give one clear reason tied to context (climate) and one short example.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because Indonesia's hot climate makes lightweight, breathable fabrics more comfortable. For instance, a cotton T-shirt keeps me cool when I hang out with friends.

제안: Start with a clear yes/no and give two organized reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, odd phrase 'white cake') and be specific about what 'good fit' or 'specific style' means.

예시: Yes, I spend time choosing clothes because I want a good fit and a style that suits me, such as plain white shirts. I also compare prices and try items on before buying to make sure I get a good deal.

제안: Answer directly, then contrast weekdays and weekends with linking words (because, whereas, so). Fix tense and redundant words and keep to two supporting details.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear my school uniform, whereas at weekends I usually wear casual clothes that let me express my personal style and feel comfortable when I go out with family or friends.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence naming the colour, then two concise reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, redundant words) and avoid trailing off; end with a complete sentence.

예시: I prefer red because it suits my skin tone and gives a bold, mature appearance. Also, red clothing is easy to find in many stores, so it's convenient to buy.

× Clothes that I like to wear is umm, because I'm Muslim, I need some clothes that are covering my body and my hair.

✓ The clothes that I like to wear are, umm, because I'm Muslim, I need clothes that cover my body and my hair.

Subject 'Clothes' is plural so verb should be 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'some clothes that are covering my body' is awkward; use the infinitive/relative clause 'that cover my body' for habitual preference. Remove unnecessary 'some' and duplicate 'clothes'. Suggestion: Match plural subject with plural verb and use 'that cover' for general descriptions.

× So probably a long sleeve shirt and some baggy jeans.

✓ So probably a long-sleeved shirt and some baggy jeans.

Compound adjective 'long-sleeved' requires hyphenation and the adjective form 'long-sleeved' rather than 'long sleeve'. Use correct adjective form before noun. Suggestion: Use 'long-sleeved' when describing a shirt.

× And I love when my uh, shirt has like some graphic on it and I love a jeans that really have something like some decoration.

✓ And I love when my shirt has a graphic on it, and I like jeans that have some decoration.

'My uh, shirt' is fine but 'a jeans' is incorrect because 'jeans' is plural or a pair; use 'jeans' without article or 'a pair of jeans'. Subject-verb agreement: 'jeans that really have' fits with plural 'jeans'. Also remove filler words and redundant 'some'. Suggestion: Say 'jeans that have decorations' or 'a pair of jeans that has decoration'.

× I prefer to use a, a casual shirt because I think I can express myself more with that style and I think it give you like the comfiest, uh, when you're like walking around or when you're, uh, getting out and play with your friends or family.

✓ I prefer to wear a casual shirt because I think I can express myself more with that style, and I think it gives you the most comfort when you're walking around or going out to play with your friends or family.

Use 'prefer to wear' not 'prefer to use' for clothing. Subject-verb agreement: 'it gives' (third-person singular). 'the comfiest' as a noun is awkward; use 'the most comfort' or 'the comfiest feeling'. Also streamline gerunds: 'going out to play' or 'hanging out'. Suggestion: Use correct verb collocations with clothing and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I do really love wearing T-shirt, especially because I live in Indonesia because of the weather and I think I, I actually prefer wearing something like more lightweight and brittable because, uh, it's, uh, so I'm not that sweaty and I think, uh, when you're going out with your friend and family, uh, it's just like a very good things and you can.

✓ Yes, I really love wearing T-shirts, especially because I live in Indonesia and because of the weather I prefer wearing something more lightweight and breathable so I'm not too sweaty. When you go out with your friends and family, it's just a very good choice.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements. 'brittle' is wrong word; likely 'breathable'. 'friend and family' should be 'friends and family' (plural). 'a very good things' mix of singular/plural: use 'a very good choice' or 'very good things' consistently. Also remove filler and fix conjunctions. Suggestion: Use plural for general habits and choose correct adjectives ('breathable').

× Yes because I like when the clothes is have a really good fit on my body and I love like the specific style for me like a white cake.

✓ Yes, because I like when clothes have a really good fit on my body, and I like a specific style, like white sneakers.

'the clothes is have' is ungrammatical: use 'clothes have' (plural) and correct verb 'have' without 'is'. 'white cake' seems incorrect in context; likely 'white cap' or 'white sneakers'—I suggested 'white sneakers' as a plausible clothing item. Ensure noun-verb agreement and appropriate vocabulary. Suggestion: Match plural subject with plural verb and confirm intended item (replace 'cake' with correct clothing word).

× And I always check the prices before I buy it and I always try it before too.

✓ And I always check the prices before I buy them, and I always try them on first.

When referring to 'clothes', use plural pronoun 'them' not 'it'. Use the correct phrasal verb 'try them on' rather than 'try it before'. Suggestion: Use plural pronouns with plural nouns and standard collocations for clothing.

× Yes because on weekdays I usually have school so I always wear the uniform and for a weekends I always going out with my family or my friends so I can more express myself more on clothing.

✓ Yes, because on weekdays I usually have school so I always wear the uniform, and on weekends I always go out with my family or my friends so I can express myself more through clothing.

Use 'on weekends' not 'for a weekends'. Use base form 'go out' not 'going out' after 'I always'. 'express myself more on clothing' should be 'express myself more through clothing'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions with time expressions and correct verb forms after adverbs like 'always'.

× So yes for weekends I usually wearing like a casual things and something that makes me comfortable when I'm going out with them.

✓ So yes, on weekends I usually wear casual things and something that makes me comfortable when I'm going out with them.

Use 'wear' (base form) not 'wearing' after subject. 'a casual things' mixes singular and plural; use 'casual clothes' or 'casual things'. Suggestion: Keep number agreement and correct verb forms.

× The colors I like when I'm wearing clothes is red because it really suit my skin tone the best and red.

✓ The color I like to wear is red because it really suits my skin tone best.

Use singular 'color' when naming a favorite color. 'is red' matches. Verb agreement: 'it suits' (third-person singular). Remove redundant 'and red' and unnecessary words. Suggestion: Use concise phrasing and correct subject-verb agreement.

× I think it's give you like more mature look and it's very bold, which which I like and red is uh, you can see it a lot in every store, so it's very easy to buy it and.

✓ I think it gives you a more mature look and it's very bold, which I like. Red is common in many stores, so it's very easy to buy.

Use 'gives' (third-person singular). 'more mature look' needs article 'a'. Remove duplicate 'which'. 'you can see it a lot in every store' is awkward; use 'Red is common in many stores'. End sentence cleanly. Suggestion: Ensure verb agreement, include appropriate articles, and simplify sentence structure.