Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be slightly more concise and add a specific example or brief reason to enrich content. Avoid repeating ideas (comfortable and practical; easy to move in and match...). Use one linking word to connect points.

예시: I prefer casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans because they’re comfortable and practical; for example, I wear them to go shopping or meet friends since they let me walk around easily and match different shoes.

제안: Clear structure and relevant details — keep it but tighten wording to avoid minor redundancy (e.g. ‘comfortable casual clothes’ and ‘feel relaxed’ are similar). Add a short linking phrase to compare the two choices.

예시: I prefer comfortable casual clothes for everyday activities because they let me move freely and feel relaxed; however, I wear smart clothes for formal events or meetings with my boss because they look more professional.

제안: Correct pronunciation/typing errors and improve sentence clarity. Keep answer to one or two sentences and use a linking word to combine reasons. Provide a brief specific example of a color or design.

예시: Yes, I do. T-shirts are easy to wear and pair well with jeans or sneakers, and because they come in many colors—like blue or grey—I can choose one to suit my mood.

제안: Clarify meaning (likely meant ‘tidy’ or ‘particular’) and avoid vague phrasing. Explain briefly how you spend the time (e.g., compare outfits, check combinations) and use one linking reason.

예시: Yes, I do, because I’m quite particular about my appearance; I usually try on a couple of outfits and check which shoes and accessories match before going out.

제안: Avoid repetition and tighten sentences. Use linking words to contrast weekdays and weekends, and give a concise example of a weekday outfit and a weekend outfit.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smarter clothes for class—for example, a button-up shirt and trousers—whereas on weekends I prefer casual outfits like a T-shirt and jeans.

제안: Good content and a clear example; correct small grammar issues (‘short shirt’ → ‘short-sleeved shirt’) and avoid repeating ‘smart and simple’. Be specific about occasions and fabrics if possible.

예시: I prefer black and white because they’re easy to match and always look stylish. For work I often wear a white short-sleeved shirt with black trousers because it looks smart and neat.

× I prefer wearing comfortable casual clothes for everyday activities because they let me move freely and feel relaxed.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes for everyday activities because they let me move freely and feel relaxed.

The verb phrase 'prefer' can be followed by either the gerund or the infinitive, but 'prefer to' is more natural when stating a general preference; additionally, a comma is needed between coordinate adjectives 'comfortable' and 'casual'. Use 'prefer to wear' for clearer, more formal expression and add the comma to separate adjectives.

× Yes I do T chefs are easy to wear and pair well with jeans or sneakers and I like them because they come in many colors so I can choose one to suit my mood.

✓ Yes, I do. T-shirts are easy to wear and pair well with jeans or sneakers, and I like them because they come in many colors, so I can choose one to suit my mood.

The original sentence has a typo ('T chefs' should be 'T-shirts') and punctuation/run-on problems. Add commas after 'Yes' and between clauses to separate ideas. Use 'T-shirts' as the correct noun. Proper punctuation prevents run-on sentences and clarifies meaning.

× Yes I do because I'm a tired person who wants to have the best appearance before going outside.

✓ Yes, I do because I'm a tidy person who wants to have the best appearance before going outside.

The original used 'tired' which likely is a typo for 'tidy' given context about appearance. Add a comma after 'Yes'. If 'tired' was intended, explain why tired relates to choosing clothes; otherwise 'tidy' fits the meaning. Correct word choice and punctuation improve clarity.

× On weekdays I usually have to attend a class so I will choose smart clothes.

✓ On weekdays I usually have to attend classes, so I choose smart clothes.

The original uses 'a class' and 'will choose' which creates awkwardness. Use the plural 'classes' for general routine and present simple 'choose' to express habitual action. Add a comma before 'so' to connect clauses properly.

× But on weekends when I have free time and stay at home I will. I will wear casual clothes like T-shirt for example.

✓ But on weekends when I have free time and stay at home, I wear casual clothes, for example T-shirts.

The original includes an incomplete sentence ('I will.') and unnecessary future tense. For habitual weekend actions, use present simple 'I wear'. Combine clauses into one coherent sentence, add commas, and use plural 'T-shirts'. Eliminating the stray 'I will.' fixes sentence fragmentation.

× I prefer black and white clothes because they are easy to match and always look stylish.

✓ I prefer black and white clothing because it is easy to match and always looks stylish.

'Clothes' is plural and leads to plural verbs ('they are'), which is acceptable, but 'black and white clothing' with singular 'it' is more natural when speaking collectively. Either form can be correct; this correction makes subject-verb agreement consistent and sounds more natural.

× For example, I often wear short shirt with black trousers to work since it feels smart and simple.

✓ For example, I often wear a short shirt with black trousers to work since it looks smart and simple.

Add the article 'a' before 'short shirt'. Use 'looks' instead of 'feels' because appearance is being described. These changes correct article usage and verb choice to match meaning.