Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct collocations. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific reasons (e.g., fabric, fit, or activities). Use linking words like “because” or “so” correctly.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are breathable and fit me well. For example, in summer I usually wear loose cotton shirts and shorts so I stay cool and can move easily all day.

제안: Give a direct answer then two clear, specific reasons. Avoid fillers and unclear words. Use linking words like “because” and “for example” to structure your answer. Correct grammar: ‘lightweight, loose-fitting’ and avoid phrases like ‘so I do not have to be so panic.’

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes because they are breathable and allow easy movement. For example, I often wear lightweight, loose-fitting shirts and shorts so I can stay comfortable all day without feeling restricted.

제안: Answer directly and reduce hesitation words (uh). Give one clear reason and a brief example or comparison. Use correct comparative phrases like ‘more comfortable than’ and keep within 1–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts, especially in summer, because they are loose and more comfortable than long-sleeve shirts. For example, I usually wear a cotton T-shirt when I go out in hot weather because it keeps me cool.

제안: Give a clear present-tense answer and explain one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetitive phrasing and unclear expressions like ‘give up my best’. Say ‘I spend time choosing clothes because…’ Use linking words such as ‘because’ and ‘so’ to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I want them to suit my body shape and face. So I often try outfits on to see which combination looks best before I buy them.

제안: Provide a direct answer about weekdays vs weekends, then give one or two clear conditions (e.g., season or occasion). Use correct tense and reduce repetition. Use linking words like ‘but’ or ‘however’ to contrast weekdays and weekends if needed.

예시: Sometimes. On weekdays I usually wear casual but neat clothes for work or classes, but on weekends I prefer very relaxed outfits. However, the season matters too — in summer I choose loose, breathable clothes and in winter I wear warmer layers.

제안: Answer with a clear preference and give a short, specific reason. Avoid confusing phrasing and repetition. Use correct expressions like ‘I prefer light colours, but I also like black because…’ Provide one concise example of when you wear each colour.

예시: I prefer light colours for everyday wear because they feel fresh, but I also like black since it suits my face and looks smart. For instance, I wear light shirts in summer and choose black for formal events or evenings.

× So basically I like to wear comfortable and casual clothes as they are good for good for fitting and also they are good comfortably.

✓ So basically I like to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they fit well and are comfortable.

The original has repeated phrases and incorrect adverb/adjective order ('good for fitting', 'good comfortably'). Use 'fit well' (verb + adverb) and 'comfortable' (adjective) and remove redundancy. Place adjectives directly before the noun and adverbs after verbs for clarity.

× I can stay all the day and as currently in summers are going on so casual clothes are more comfortable for me.

✓ I can stay comfortable all day, and since it is currently summer, casual clothes are more comfortable for me.

The sentence had awkward structure and tense issues ('summers are going on'). Use 'all day' (fixed expression) and 'since it is currently summer' to express ongoing season. Keep verb forms consistent.

× Well I prefer comfortable clothes and as because they are breathable and easy to move in.

✓ Well, I prefer comfortable clothes because they are breathable and easy to move in.

Using both 'as' and 'because' is redundant. Choose one conjunction ('because') to introduce the reason. Also add commas for readability.

× Since it is summarizedly choose lightweight loose fitting shirts and shorts so I can stay comfortable all the day and also they are good for for my health for like I do not have to be so panic while wearing them in those clothes as they are easily fit able to my body as well.

✓ Therefore, I choose lightweight, loose-fitting shirts and shorts so I can stay comfortable all day; they are also better for my health because I do not feel anxious wearing them, and they fit my body easily.

Multiple issues: incorrect adverb 'summarizedly', quantifier/phrase misuse, repeated words, and awkward clauses. Replace with concise connector 'Therefore' and correct compound adjectives ('loose-fitting'), 'all day' expression, and clearer causal explanation.

× Yeah, of course I love to wear T-shirts, uh, in summers as well as, uh, they are loose and fit for, for my, for my body and they are much comfortable, uh, uh, regardless to other clothes like full sleeve shirts and all.

✓ Yeah, of course I love to wear T-shirts in summer because they are loose and fit my body, and they are much more comfortable than other clothes like long-sleeve shirts.

Use 'in summer' (not 'in summers') and 'fit my body' (verb + object). Replace 'regardless to' with comparison 'than' and use 'long-sleeve' for clarity. Remove filler words.

× So they, they give me comfort during the summer seasons as well.

✓ They give me comfort during the summer season as well.

Use singular 'season' or simply 'summer'; 'summer seasons' is redundant. Keep present simple for habitual actions.

× Yeah, actually I used to spend a lot of times while choosing clothes as because I like to give up my best in looking for for my body, for my face and like for for my overall looks.

✓ Yeah, actually I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I like to present my best for my body, face, and overall appearance.

'Used to' implies a past habit; context indicates current habit, so use present simple 'spend'. 'A lot of times' should be 'a lot of time'. Remove redundant 'for' and use 'present my best' or 'look my best'.

× That's why I used to choose. I used to select the clothes while wearing.

✓ That's why I choose carefully; I select clothes while trying them on.

Replace past-habit 'used to' with present 'choose' and clarify 'select the clothes while wearing' to 'select clothes while trying them on' to express the intended action.

× It's depend on the season or the time timing where the then on that timing I used to wear different type of clothes like on weekdays and weekends.

✓ It depends on the season or time; I wear different types of clothes on weekdays and weekends accordingly.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It depends' not 'It's depend'. Remove redundant words ('time timing', 'then on that timing'). Use 'types of clothes' plural and present simple for habitual action.

× It it totally depends on what season is going or it's either summer or so then I used to choose that type of clothes like loose clothes and if it is going on winter then I then I used to choose the winter clothes.

✓ It totally depends on the season. If it is summer, I choose loose clothes; if it is winter, I choose warm winter clothes.

Simplify structure, use present simple 'choose' for habitual actions, and correct prepositional phrases ('going on winter' -> 'it is winter'). Remove repetitions.

× Basically I used to choose light colour and even in if I'm going to if I'm going to darker than I used to choose black colour as it suits to my face cut or and overall personality.

✓ Basically I choose light colours, and if I prefer darker shades I choose black because it suits my facial features and overall personality.

Use plural 'colours' when speaking generally. Replace awkward phrasing 'face cut' with 'facial features'. Use present simple 'choose' instead of 'used to' for current preferences.

× That's why I prefer to choose black and also I use I like the colour black while while wearing so I want I I will I would like.

✓ That's why I prefer black; I like wearing black.

The original is repetitive and unclear. Simplify to a clear statement. Remove unnecessary modal verbs and repeated words.