Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be concise, and add one brief reason or example. Use a topic sentence and one supporting detail. Avoid redundancy.

예시: I prefer to wear simple, comfortable clothes because they let me move easily. For example, I often choose cotton T-shirts and loose trousers for daily activities.

제안: Correct grammar (remove extra words), give a clear topic sentence, and add a short reason using a linking word. Keep it to one or two supporting sentences.

예시: I prefer to wear casual clothes because they are more comfortable and practical. For instance, casual outfits like jeans and a T-shirt suit my everyday routine.

제안: Give a complete sentence that directly answers and add one specific detail or example to make it more informative. Use linking words if needed.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash. I usually wear them at home or when I meet friends.

제안: Fix grammar and reduce repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific time frame and reason using a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I usually spend about five to ten minutes choosing clothes at the mall because I find it hard to decide which style suits me best.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and one concise supporting reason with a linking word. Avoid repeating phrases and make the reason specific (work, routine, comfort).

예시: No, I don't change my style between weekdays and weekends because my daily routine is similar and comfort is my priority.

제안: Remove filler words, give a clear topic sentence, and add a brief reason or example to be more informative. Keep it concise.

예시: I like pink and black, and my favorite is pink because it feels cheerful and suits my skin tone.

× I prefer to wear a simple and comfortable clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear simple and comfortable clothes.

The noun 'clothes' is plural and does not take the singular article 'a'. Remove 'a' to match plural noun usage. Suggestion: use 'a' only with singular countable nouns (e.g., a shirt) or use plural without an article (e.g., clothes).

× I prefer to wear is casual clothes because it's comfortable for me.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes because they're comfortable for me.

The filler 'is' is incorrect and should be removed. Also 'clothes' is plural, so use the plural pronoun 'they' and contraction 'they're' instead of 'it's'. Ensure subject and pronoun agree in number. Alternatively: '...because it is comfortable for me' would work if referring to 'style' or 'the style is comfortable'. Use clear noun reference.

× Yes, I like.

✓ Yes, I do.

The short answer 'Yes, I like.' is incomplete because 'like' typically requires an object (what do you like?). In response to 'Do you like wearing T-shirts?' the correct short-form answer uses the auxiliary verb: 'Yes, I do.' This provides a complete predicate.

× Yes, when I'm going to mall I I'm giving myself a time to choose my clothes like 5 to 10 minutes because I can't decide what I want to buy.

✓ Yes, when I'm going to the mall I give myself about 5 to 10 minutes to choose my clothes because I can't decide what I want to buy.

Errors: missing article 'the' before 'mall'; redundant 'I' and incorrect progressive 'I'm giving' — use simple present or present continuous appropriately ('I give myself' is habitual so simple present). Use 'about' to indicate approximate time and put the time phrase in a natural position. Also remove extra 'I'. Suggestion: 'when I go to the mall' is also acceptable.

× No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because every day it's a normal day for me. No need to wear different clothes or style.

✓ No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because every day is a normal day for me. There is no need to wear different clothes or styles.

Use full clause 'every day is' instead of contraction 'it's' to match formality and clarity; 'No need to...' is a fragment — supply subject and verb: 'There is no need...'. Also 'style' should be plural 'styles' to match 'clothes' and the idea of variety. Maintain consistent sentence structure.

× Umm, I'd like pink and black, but my favorite color is pink.

✓ Umm, I like pink and black, but my favorite color is pink.

'I'd like' implies desire to have or want something now; for preferences use simple present 'I like'. Change to 'I like' to express general preference. Also keep 'color' consistent (American spelling) — original is acceptable otherwise.