Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more natural: state the type of clothes you prefer, give one supporting reason and a brief example. Avoid invented phrase 'all money clothes' — use specific vocabulary (e.g., tailored clothes, designer clothes). Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and keep it under five sentences.

예시: I prefer wearing tailored or designer clothes because they fit my body shape well and make me look more confident. For example, a well-fitted blazer and trousers help me feel smart at events without being uncomfortable.

제안: Good idea and structure. Improve grammar (verb forms, articles), tighten phrases and add a clearer example using linking words like 'for example' or 'because'. Replace vague phrase 'run around wearing relax' with a specific activity.

예시: I prefer casual clothes such as jeans and soft T-shirts because being comfortable boosts my productivity and keeps me relaxed. For example, when I work from home I can concentrate better wearing comfy clothes rather than formal attire.

제안: Make the answer clearer and grammatically correct. State the reason directly, use appropriate vocabulary (comfortable, practical) and avoid unclear phrases like 'when it hurt'. Keep to two or three sentences and give a concise example.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For instance, I usually wear a T-shirt to school because it is easy to move in and keeps me comfortable all day.

제안: Be precise and correct grammar: use exact time expressions and explain the method briefly. Replace vague 'three or five me' with 'three to five minutes'. Mention the app only if relevant and give a short reason why it helps.

예시: No, I don't. I usually spend only three to five minutes choosing clothes because I plan outfits in a clothing app in advance, which makes deciding quick and easy.

제안: Organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use correct vocabulary (casual, smart, formal) and grammar (articles, plural forms). Avoid repetition like 'handsome outfit to make me more handsome'; instead explain the purpose (to look nicer or for social events).

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear casual clothes such as a T-shirt and trousers for comfort and convenience at school. On weekends I usually dress smarter for social activities, for example wearing a neat shirt and jeans when I go out with friends.

제안: Be concise and precise. State the color, give one clear reason and a specific example. Avoid filler words ('you know', 'uh') and repetitive phrases. Use linking words to connect reason and example (e.g., 'because', 'for example').

예시: I prefer blue clothes because the color reminds me of the ocean and makes me feel calm. For example, I often choose a blue shirt when I want to feel relaxed before an exam or a meeting.

× I would like to wear all money clothes because all money clothes is fit with my shape of the body and when I wear it, it can make me more handsome than the normal clothes that we usually wear everyday.

✓ I would like to wear all the money clothes because all the money clothes fit my body shape, and when I wear them, they make me look better than the normal clothes we usually wear every day.

Errors: missing definite article 'the' before 'money clothes'; incorrect verb agreement 'is' should be 'fit' with plural subject; pronoun and agreement: 'it' should be 'them' and 'make me more handsome' changed to 'make me look better' for naturalness; 'everyday' (adjective) corrected to 'every day' (adverbial phrase). Suggestion: use 'the' for specific items, match plural nouns with plural verbs and pronouns, and choose correct word forms ('every day').

× Personally, I highly prefer wearing casual and comfortable clothes like jeans and soft T-shirts on most days. This is because feeling physically comfortable significantly boosts my daily productivity and keep me relaxed. For instance, when I work from home or run around wearing relax.

✓ Personally, I highly prefer wearing casual and comfortable clothes like jeans and soft T-shirts on most days. This is because feeling physically comfortable significantly boosts my daily productivity and keeps me relaxed. For instance, when I work from home or run errands, I wear comfortable clothes.

Errors: subject-verb agreement: 'boosts' correct but 'keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with singular noun phrase 'feeling ... comfortable'. The phrase 'run around wearing relax' is ungrammatical: 'run errands' is correct and 'wear comfortable clothes' is the intended meaning. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects and use common collocations (run errands, comfortable clothes).

× Yes, I personally like to wearing a T-shirt because it make me like feel normal when it hurt and it easily to go everywhere I want. For instance when I go to school I always wear a T-shirt 'cause it make me feel comfortable.

✓ Yes, I personally like wearing a T-shirt because it makes me feel normal when I'm uncomfortable, and it is easy to go everywhere I want. For instance, when I go to school I always wear a T-shirt because it makes me feel comfortable.

Errors: 'like to wearing' mixes infinitive and -ing; use 'like wearing' or 'like to wear'. 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'like feel normal when it hurt' is unclear; likely means 'makes me feel normal when I'm uncomfortable' so corrected. 'it easily to go' should be 'it is easy to go'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms after verbs of preference and ensure subject-verb agreement; express feelings with correct clauses (when I'm ...).

× No I don't I'm just spend around three or five me to choosing clothes. I am always prepare my clothes in a clothes app so it make me easily to choose the clothes when I want to wear some things.

✓ No, I don't. I just spend around three to five minutes choosing clothes. I always prepare my outfits in a clothes app so it is easy for me to choose what to wear when I want to go out.

Errors: tense and auxiliary misuse: 'No I don't I'm just spend' should be 'No, I don't. I just spend' with present simple 'spend'. 'three or five me' likely 'three to five minutes'. 'to choosing' should be 'choosing' after 'spend time'. 'I am always prepare' should be 'I always prepare' or 'I always keep' present simple. 'make me easily to choose' corrected to 'it is easy for me to choose'. Suggestion: use correct time expressions and verb forms; 'spend time + verb-ing'.

× Yes I do, I wear different style of clothes on weekday and weekends. Uh on my weekday I usually wear a normal clothes like AT shirt with a pants because it make me easily to change the clothes when I arrive the time to go to school. But on the weekend I usually wear an handsome outfit to make me more handsome.

✓ Yes I do. I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I usually wear normal clothes like a T-shirt with pants because it makes it easy to change when it's time to go to school. But on the weekend I usually wear a smart outfit to make me look nicer.

Errors: pluralization: 'different style' should be 'different styles'; 'weekday and weekends' inconsistent -> 'weekdays and weekends'; 'a normal clothes' incorrect article and number -> 'normal clothes' or 'a normal outfit'; 'AT shirt with a pants' unclear -> 'a T-shirt with pants'. 'it make me easily to change' should be 'it makes it easy to change'; 'an handsome' should be 'a handsome' but 'smart outfit' is more natural. Suggestion: ensure plural/singular consistency, correct articles, and natural collocations (T-shirt, pants, smart outfit).

× I personally prefer to wear blue clothes because I like, you know, what I like to see. So when I wear blue clothes, it remind me of what ocean. So when I uh, so when I wear it, I can feel relaxed, fresh all the time.

✓ I personally prefer to wear blue clothes because I like what I see. When I wear blue clothes, they remind me of the ocean. So when I wear them, I feel relaxed and refreshed all the time.

Errors: unnecessary filler 'you know' removed for clarity. 'it remind me of what ocean' incorrect: 'they remind me of the ocean' with plural agreement and correct preposition use. 'feel relaxed, fresh' changed to 'feel relaxed and refreshed'. Suggestion: match plural nouns with plural verbs ('clothes' -> 'they remind') and use correct prepositions/articles ('the ocean'); use 'refreshed' for the adjective describing feeling.