Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. Say why you prefer casual clothes and give one specific example. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and allow me to move freely. For example, I often wear jeans and a soft sweater when I go out, which makes walking and commuting much easier.

제안: Start with a clear direct answer, avoid repeating the same reason, and give one additional specific reason or example. Use a linking phrase like 'also' or 'because' correctly.

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they are more comfortable and practical. Also, when I wear sneakers and a T-shirt I can move quickly during my busy day, which is important for me.

제안: Provide a concise direct answer, correct minor grammar (singular/plural), and finish the supporting detail with a specific situation. Use one linking word for clarity.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are simple and allow me to move easily. For example, I wear them when I exercise or run errands because they are light and comfortable.

제안: Answer directly and improve grammar (phrases like 'it needs me a lot of time' and 'I'm a picky'). Give a concrete detail about when you take time and a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I'm picky about comfort. For instance, I try on several outfits before work to make sure I can move easily during long shifts.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and organize reasons with linking words. Correct repetition and finish the sentence. Mention both the uniform and personal preference concisely.

예시: No, I usually wear the same style during the week because I work in a hospital that requires a uniform. Also, I'm not very interested in fashion, so I prefer simple, consistent outfits on weekends.

제안: Be concise and grammatically correct. State your preference in one clear sentence and give a specific, coherent reason or example. Avoid repeating the same phrase.

예시: I love pink and choose to wear it often because it makes me feel cheerful and confident. For example, I wear a pink blouse or accessories almost every day to brighten my mood.

× I like to wear casual clothes because it makes me move really, which makes me comfortable.

✓ I like to wear casual clothes because they allow me to move easily, which makes me comfortable.

The subject 'casual clothes' is plural, so the verb should agree ('they allow' not 'it makes'). 'Make me move really' is ungrammatical and vague; use 'allow me to move easily' to express ability. Also use 'which makes me comfortable' to link the clause correctly.

× I prefer to use casual clothes because I am used to it and aside from I am used to it, I am also comfortable with it because I can easily move around.

✓ I prefer casual clothes because I am used to them; besides, I am comfortable in them because I can easily move around.

Use present simple 'prefer' correctly and do not use 'use' with clothing here. 'Casual clothes' is plural so use the pronoun 'them' not 'it'. 'Aside from I am used to it' is awkward; use 'besides' and combine ideas with clearer structure. Use 'comfortable in them' rather than 'comfortable with it.'

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirt because it is simple and and free enough for me to move easily, especially when I'm going.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are simple and roomy enough for me to move easily, especially when I'm going out.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are'. 'Free' is incorrect here; use 'roomy' or 'loose'. 'When I'm going' is incomplete—use 'going out.' Also remove the doubled 'and.'

× Yes, lately I noticed that it really needs me a lot of time when choosing clothes because I'm a picky and I always want clothes that are comfortable enough for me to easily move.

✓ Yes, I've noticed lately that choosing clothes takes me a lot of time because I'm picky and I always want clothes that are comfortable enough for me to move in easily.

Use present perfect 'I've noticed' for recent observation. 'It really needs me a lot of time' is ungrammatical; use 'choosing clothes takes me a lot of time.' 'I'm a picky' is incorrect; use 'I'm picky.' Place 'easily' after the verb phrase 'move in' for natural adverb placement.

× No, I usually wear the same clothes every day, same color every day because I am not that passionate in picking clothes and also I I also work in a hospital where it requires a uniform so.

✓ No, I usually wear the same clothes and the same color every day because I'm not very interested in choosing clothes, and I also work in a hospital where a uniform is required.

Avoid repetition 'I I also'. Use 'interested in choosing clothes' instead of 'passionate in picking clothes.' 'It requires a uniform' incorrectly uses 'it'; use 'a uniform is required' or 'my job requires a uniform.' Maintain subject-verb agreement and clear clause order.

× I really not think that I really love pinks. I really love pink. I really love pink. I really love being that it made me choose to wear pink everyday.

✓ I don't really think so; I really love pink and it makes me choose to wear pink every day.

'I really not think that' is incorrect; use 'I don't really think so.' Avoid repetitive sentences; combine ideas. 'Pinks' is unnecessary—use 'pink.' 'Being that it made me choose' is ungrammatical; use 'it makes me choose.' 'Everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverb): use 'every day.'