Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and minor grammar errors. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I usually prefer comfortable clothes. For example, I choose loose-fitting shirts and stretchy trousers so they aren’t tight and allow me to move freely.

제안: Start with a direct answer, correct tense and avoid filler words. Add a brief reason using a linking word (because/so) and one specific example of smart clothing.

예시: It depends, but for work I usually wear smart clothes because they make me look professional; for example, I often wear a blazer and tailored trousers to meetings.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and vague phrasing. Provide a concise specific reason or example and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I like T-shirts because they’re comfortable and versatile. For instance, I often pair a plain T-shirt with jeans for a quick, casual outfit.

제안: Remove conversational fillers and organize into a topic sentence plus 2 specific reasons. Use clearer vocabulary (e.g., 'shopping for new clothes', 'stylish', 'unique') and linking words (because, and, so).

예시: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time shopping for new clothes because I’m picky: I want items that are comfortable and well designed, and I prefer stylish pieces that aren’t too common.

제안: Answer directly, avoid hesitations, and explain briefly with specific details. Use clearer phrasing for body concerns (e.g., 'to flatter my figure' or 'to hide areas I’m self-conscious about').

예시: No, I usually wear the same general style. I choose clothes that flatter my figure because I want to hide areas I’m self-conscious about, so I opt for cuts that suit my body shape.

제안: State your preference clearly, use correct adjective forms (light-coloured), and give a concise reason with one specific effect. Avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer light-coloured clothes, such as white and pale pink, because they make me look fresher and more energetic.

× Normally I prefer wearing the clothes that are comfortable, like it's not very tight and to let me feel that I can breathe.

✓ Normally I prefer wearing clothes that are comfortable, not very tight, and that let me feel I can breathe.

The original mixes infinitive and clauses incorrectly. 'Prefer' is followed by a gerund (wearing) which is fine, but 'the clothes that are comfortable, like it's not very tight and to let me feel' is ungrammatical. Use parallel relative clauses: 'clothes that are comfortable, not very tight, and that let me feel I can breathe.' This keeps gerund/relative structures consistent and improves clarity.

× It depends. Like when I when I'm at work I prefer to wear smart clothes because that made me look more professional and make me like I'm ready to be at work.

✓ It depends. When I'm at work I prefer to wear smart clothes because that makes me look more professional and makes me feel ready to be at work.

The sentence mixes past tense 'made' with present context 'when I'm at work' and incorrect verb agreement 'make me like'. Use present simple 'makes' to match habitual action and add 'feel' for natural expression: 'makes me feel ready.' This fixes tense consistency and subject-verb agreement.

× Yeah, definitely T-shirt. They are always loose and then they and they are very easy to go like you can't go wrong with any of it.

✓ Yeah, definitely T-shirts. They are usually loose and very easy to wear; you can't go wrong with them.

Use plural 'T-shirts' to match 'they.' 'Easy to go' is incorrect collocation — use 'easy to wear.' 'Any of it' should be 'them' to agree in number. Also remove repeated 'and they' for clarity.

× Like for pursing some new clothes, for choosing them. I spend quite a lot of time because I'm quite picky.

✓ When pursuing new clothes and choosing them, I spend quite a lot of time because I'm quite picky.

'Pursing' is a misspelling; correct form is 'pursuing.' Combine fragments into one sentence and use gerund phrases correctly: 'When pursuing new clothes and choosing them...' This fixes word choice and sentence structure.

× I want the clothes like be comfortable and have a good design.

✓ I want clothes that are comfortable and have a good design.

The original omits 'that' and uses 'be' incorrectly after 'like'. Use a relative clause: 'clothes that are comfortable and have a good design.' This provides correct clause structure and verb form.

× And then also they need to be like fashionable. They can't like be like, you can see it everywhere.

✓ They also need to be fashionable; they shouldn't be so common that you can see them everywhere.

Avoid filler 'like' and correct adjective/adverb use. 'Can't be like, you can see it everywhere' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'shouldn't be so common that you can see them everywhere' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Umm, no. Normally I just wear two types of clothes. Like wear because like because of the body limited, I wanted to hide some drawbacks of my body.

✓ No. Normally I just wear two types of clothes because of my body shape; I want to hide some imperfections.

The original is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'Body limited' is incorrect — use 'body shape' or 'body type.' Use present tense 'want' to match habitual action and 'hide some imperfections' is a clearer idiomatic expression. Combine fragments into a coherent sentence.

× So I always choose the uh, type of clothes that suits my body.

✓ So I always choose the type of clothes that suit my body.

Subject-verb agreement with 'type of clothes' can take plural verb 'suit' because 'clothes' is plural and the relative clause refers to 'clothes.' Alternatively, rephrase 'type of clothes that suits my body' could be acceptable but 'suit' is more natural here. Remove filler 'uh.'

× Normally I prefer wearing the clothes that are light color, like the white and then the light pink.

✓ Normally I prefer wearing clothes that are light-colored, like white and light pink.

Use the adjective form 'light-colored' and omit 'the' before color names when speaking generally. 'The white' is unnatural here; use 'white' and 'light pink.' This fixes adjective formation and article use.

× And yeah, because I feel like they make me look like more, have more, more energetic.

✓ And yeah, because I feel they make me look more energetic.

Remove redundant 'like' and repeated words. 'Make me look more energetic' is concise and grammatically correct. The original had repetition and improper comparative structure.