Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear. Start with a topic sentence stating the type of clothes you prefer (e.g., casual, formal), then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Use simple linking words (because, so, and) and avoid unnecessary filler phrases like “thank you for a question.” Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I often wear T-shirts and jeans when I go shopping or meet friends because they let me move freely and stay cool.

제안: Answer directly: pick one option and give clear reasons. Reduce hesitations and repeated words. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) and give a specific situation when you wear smart clothes.

예시: I prefer smart clothes because they make me look professional and confident. For instance, I wear a shirt and trousers when I go to interviews or formal events because they give a neat appearance and make a good impression.

제안: Give a clear yes/no statement then explain why with a specific detail. Avoid single short fragments; expand to one or two supporting sentences using linking words (because, so).

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For example, when I exercise or relax at home, a T-shirt helps me feel more comfortable and confident.

제안: State clearly how much time you spend and give a reason with a specific example. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use a linking word to expand (for example, because, so).

예시: Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I care about my appearance. For example, I often pick a formal shirt and matching trousers when I have meetings to look smart and professional.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence describing the difference, then add a specific example for each (weekday vs weekend). Use linking words like whereas or while to compare.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear smart clothes like shirts and trousers for work, whereas on weekends I wear casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts to relax.

제안: Answer with one or two preferred colours and give a clear reason or example. Avoid unclear past tenses and fillers. Use linking words (because, for example) and correct simple grammar (I like green and red because...).

예시: I like green and red clothes. For example, I often wear a green T-shirt because it suits my skin tone and makes me feel lively, and I choose red when I want to stand out at social events.

× Thank you for a question, ma'am.

✓ Thank you for the question, ma'am.

Use of articles: English requires the definite article 'the' before a specific noun when referring to a particular thing (the question just asked). Replace 'a' with 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× Do I have a different kind of clothes in our market, but I'm choice shot and pen, it's very comfortable for me and.

✓ We have different kinds of clothes in our market, but I choose shorts and pants because they are very comfortable for me.

Pronoun and noun agreement plus word choice: 'Do I have' is incorrect for stating existence in the market; use 'We have'. 'Clothes' is plural and 'different kinds' matches. 'I'm choice shot and pen' is incorrect structure and words; use 'I choose shorts and pants'. Also use plural verb 'are' for 'they are very comfortable'. This fixes subject-verb and pronoun misuse and clarifies meaning.

× Yes, I prefer to work compatible, uh smart school because, uh it's uh, it's uh, looks very handsome and uh, it's very beautiful uh, for everything. Uh, so I'm prefer about this cloth, uh smart clothes. It's very firm.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear smart clothes because they look nice and suitable for many occasions. So I prefer smart clothes; they are neat.

Multiple issues: 'prefer to work compatible' is wrong word choice; use 'prefer to wear'. 'Smart school' likely intended 'smart clothes'. Use plural pronoun 'they' for clothes and the verb 'look' (present tense plural). 'Handsome' is typically for people; 'nice' or 'neat' fits clothing. 'It's very firm' is unnatural for clothes; 'neat' or 'well-fitted' is better. This corrects verb use, agreement, and vocabulary.

× This T-shirt is very help me, uh, more confident.

✓ This T-shirt helps me feel more confident.

Verb form and structure: Use 'helps' (third person singular) not 'is help'. Follow with infinitive 'feel' or gerund to express effect: 'helps me feel more confident'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement ('T-shirt helps').

× Umm, I spent a lot of time, uh, actually I like, uh, formal formal pen shirt, uh, because it's looks great, handsome, uh, when, uh, I'm going to.

✓ I spend a lot of time choosing clothes. Actually, I like formal shirts because they look great when I go out.

Tense and verb agreement: Mixing past 'spent' with present preferences is confusing; use present simple 'I spend' to answer habitual actions. 'Formal pen shirt' is incorrect; use 'formal shirts'. Use plural 'they look' for shirts. 'When I'm going to' is incomplete; use 'when I go out' or specify destination. This corrects tense, number, and completes the idea.

× Yes, I are different style of clothes one week and weekends.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice: 'I are' is incorrect; use 'I wear'. 'Different style' should be plural 'different styles'. Use correct preposition 'on weekdays and weekends'. This fixes verb form and noun number.

× I like to green color, uh, beside Lee, uh, I like red color because, uh, when I was weird, uh, green color T-shirt that's look very beautiful and handsome me.

✓ I like the color green. Besides, I also like red, because when I wore a green T-shirt, it looked very nice on me.

Prepositions and verb forms: Use 'the color green' or 'the color' with definite article. 'Beside Lee' is incorrect; use 'Besides' to add information. 'When I was weird' is a mis-speech for 'when I wore'. Use past tense 'wore' and past 'looked'. 'That's look very beautiful and handsome me' should be 'it looked very nice on me'—use 'on me' for clothing and appropriate adjective 'nice'. This corrects preposition, verb tense, and pronoun reference.