Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more concise and natural. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and correct small grammar errors (e.g. “streetwear” not “street wearers”, and simplify “gain visual” to “see” or “visualize”).

예시: I usually wear streetwear and sportswear. For example, I like brands such as Stussy and Urban Outfitters for casual outfits, and Adidas or Nike for the gym. I often choose tank tops and leggings when I exercise because they help me move comfortably and let me see my form.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence and then give a clear reason using correct subject–verb agreement and more natural phrasing. Avoid vague phrases like “in any way.”

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes most of the time. The main reason is that I have sensitive skin, so tight or rough smart clothes can irritate me; I only wear formal attire for meetings.

제안: Make the timeline and grammar clearer. Give one concise reason and avoid repetition. Correct tense and singular/plural errors and remove confusing phrasing about living in a country.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts. I lived in Saudi Arabia for ten years, so I’m used to hot weather; breathable T-shirts, especially sports ones, keep me cool and comfortable.

제안: Open with a direct answer and give specific details without repeating phrases. Use plural/singular correctly (e.g. “five sets of sportswear” or “five sports outfits”) and avoid redundant clauses.

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes. Since I mainly wear a school uniform, I only own about ten shirts and three pairs of pants for school, plus five sports outfits for exercise.

제안: Be concise and organize the answer: topic sentence then examples. Correct grammar (e.g. “attire” not “attires”) and avoid repeating words like “on weekdays” twice.

예시: Yes. On weekdays when I have school I usually dress smart-casual, like a Uniqlo long-sleeve top and long pants. On weekends I prefer tank tops, shorts, or jeans for a more relaxed look.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and one brief example. Avoid long repetitive matching descriptions and use smoother linking phrases.

예시: I prefer black and white clothing because they’re simple and easy to match. For example, I often pair a white top with dark pants and white shoes for a casual, coordinated outfit.

× I love wearing a street wearers such as from Stussy or Urban Outfitters and I also love sportswear such as Adidas, Nike, and I like tank tops and I like leggings, especially when I'm working out in the gym because it really helps me to gain visual, like to visualize how I look when I'm working out.

✓ I love wearing streetwear from brands such as Stussy or Urban Outfitters, and I also love sportswear from Adidas and Nike. I like tank tops and leggings, especially when I'm working out in the gym, because they really help me visualize how I look when I'm exercising.

The original sentence uses 'a street wearers' which mixes singular article with a plural/uncountable noun and misuses 'wearers'. Use the uncountable noun 'streetwear' and 'brands such as' to show examples. 'It really helps me to gain visual, like to visualize' is ungrammatical; replace with 'they really help me visualize' and change the vague noun 'it' to 'they' referring to tank tops and leggings. Also split into shorter clauses for clarity and parallel structure.

× And this is because I have sensitive skin all over my body, so the friction that smart clothes cause don't really help me in any way.

✓ This is because I have sensitive skin all over my body, so the friction that smart clothes cause doesn't really help me at all.

Subject-verb agreement with 'the friction' (singular) requires 'doesn't' not 'don't'. Also 'in any way' is better expressed as 'at all' for naturalness. Remove the conjunction 'And' at the sentence start for formality.

× I love wearing T-shirts because the country I'm from will have been living in Saudi Arabia for 10 years.

✓ I love wearing T-shirts because I have been living in Saudi Arabia for 10 years.

The original sentence misplaces 'the country I'm from' and uses an incorrect future perfect continuous ('will have been living') which does not fit. Use the present perfect continuous 'have been living' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also remove 'the country I'm from' which makes the clause confusing.

× Because due to the hot weather, T-shirts really help me keep off the sweat.

✓ Because of the hot weather, T-shirts really help me stay cool and reduce sweating.

The phrase 'Because due to' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'Because of' or 'Due to' alone. 'Keep off the sweat' is awkward; use 'stay cool' or 'reduce sweating' for clarity and natural English.

× And especially sports T-shirts, they really helps me cool.

✓ Especially sports T-shirts really help me cool down.

'They' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. Also add 'down' after 'cool' for natural phrasing. Remove the unnecessary comma and 'And' at the start.

× I don't think I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because first of all, I don't have that many clothes because my school uniforms are always the same.

✓ I don't think I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because, first of all, I don't have that many clothes; my school uniforms are always the same.

The sentence is understandable but repetitive with two 'because's; restructure with a semicolon or separate clauses to improve flow. Tense is fine (present simple) to describe habitual actions.

× I have the same 10 shirts and three pairs of pants that I just wear on consecutive days.

✓ I have the same ten shirts and three pairs of pants that I wear on rotation.

Use 'ten' (written consistently) and 'wear on rotation' is a more natural phrase than 'wear on consecutive days'. The original 'just' is unnecessary.

× Other than that, I only have 5 sportswear that I just wear from time to time.

✓ Other than that, I only have five items of sportswear that I wear from time to time.

'Sportswear' is an uncountable noun; use 'items of sportswear' or 'five sportswear items'. Write numbers consistently ('five'). Remove 'just' which is redundant.

× Yes I do wear different styles on weekdays and weekends because on weekdays on the days that I have school I have to wear a smart casual or formal attires and this consists of Uniqlo top, long sleeves and long pants.

✓ Yes, I do wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On school days I have to wear smart-casual or formal attire; this usually consists of a Uniqlo top, long sleeves, and long pants.

'Attires' is incorrect; 'attire' is usually uncountable. Use 'smart-casual' with a hyphen and 'a Uniqlo top' (or 'a Uniqlo long-sleeve top') for clarity. Add punctuation to separate ideas. 'Long sleeves' should be 'a long-sleeve top'.

× But then on weekends I usually wear just tank tops and like shorts or even just jeans.

✓ On weekends I usually wear tank tops and shorts, or sometimes just jeans.

Remove filler 'But then' and 'like' which is conversational and vague. Use parallel structure 'tank tops and shorts' and include 'sometimes' for optionality. This corrects informal pronoun-like fillers.

× I honestly love white and black clothes because I think they're the simplest and they always match the shoes that I'm wearing because my shoes are usually black or white.

✓ I honestly love white and black clothes because I think they're the simplest, and they always match the shoes I wear since my shoes are usually black or white.

'The simplest' is vague but acceptable; adjust to natural phrasing and remove repeated 'because'. Use 'shoes I wear' instead of 'shoes that I'm wearing' for general preference.

× So when I'm wearing white top I would match it with white pants or dark pants with white shoes or dark shoes and these are the most casual ones that I have.

✓ So when I wear a white top I match it with white pants, or I wear dark pants with white or dark shoes; these are the most casual items I own.

Use 'a white top' (article), prefer simple present 'I wear' for habitual actions instead of 'I'm wearing' and 'would match' is conditional/unnecessary. 'Ones that I have' is better as 'items I own'. Split into clearer clauses.