Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response grammatically correct, more concise, and clearer. Start with a topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so). Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g., ‘Thai clothes’ seems unintended).

예시: I usually wear simple clothes such as T-shirts and jeans. I prefer them because they are comfortable and not too tight, so I can move freely and stay cool.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason. Reduce hesitation words and avoid repeating ideas. Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’ to connect reason and result.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because if my clothes are too tight I can't concentrate, so my whole day feels worse.

제안: Give a concise, structured reply: a clear yes/no statement then a brief specific detail. Remove filler words and unclear phrases (e.g., ‘recycle to school’). One or two sentences only.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts and I wear them almost every day. The only exception is when I have to wear a school uniform.

제안: Respond directly, then give a specific reason using clear language. Avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g., ‘stole’). Keep to two sentences and use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’.

예시: Not usually, but sometimes I spend time choosing clothes because I haven’t done the laundry. So I may borrow my sister’s clothes or look for alternatives.

제안: Structure the answer: state whether you wear different styles, then give specific examples contrasting occasions. Correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘formal’ instead of ‘tie clothes’, ‘gym clothes’), and reduce hesitations.

예시: Yes, I do. For formal places or nicer restaurants I wear smarter clothes, but for quick trips to local markets I usually wear a T-shirt and casual or gym clothes.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence listing preferred colours, then briefly explain why with correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid unclear phrases (‘our colourful Co colour’, ‘I'm pants’). Keep it to two sentences max and use linking words like ‘because’.

예시: I prefer white, blue and black clothes because those colours suit my skin tone. However, I don't mind wearing brighter colours sometimes if they look good.

× The clothes that I like to wear is a simple and simple clothes like T-shirt and Jean or pants.

✓ The clothes that I like to wear are simple, like T-shirts and jeans or pants.

Subject 'The clothes' is plural, so verb must be 'are' not 'is'. Also use plural nouns 'T-shirts' and 'jeans' for general statements and remove redundant words. Suggestion: match plural subject and plural noun forms (e.g., 'The clothes ... are simple, like T-shirts and jeans').

× I like to wear that type of clothes because it make me comfy and it really like not too tight because I'm type of person who don't like to wear Thai clothes and it's really good have air in it.

✓ I like to wear that type of clothing because it makes me comfortable and I really prefer it not to be too tight because I'm the type of person who doesn't like to wear tight clothes and it's good to have air in them.

Verbs must agree with subjects: 'make' -> 'makes' for 'it' and 'don't' -> 'doesn't' for 'who' referring to 'the type of person'. Also 'clothes' -> 'clothing' or 'clothes' consistent, 'comfy' -> 'comfortable', and pronouns/plurals adjusted ('air in them'). Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent noun forms; use 'doesn't' for third-person singular and 'makes' for singular subject 'it'.

× I prefer to be a comfortable clothes because it is really important, uh, for your closing, like if you wear something that is tight, too tight or you don't feel comfortable on it.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes because it is really important for your clothing; if you wear something that is too tight or you don't feel comfortable in it,

Incorrect article 'a' with uncountable/plural 'clothes' should be omitted: use 'comfortable clothes'. 'Closing' is wrong word; correct is 'clothing'. Preposition 'on' should be 'in' for clothing. Suggestion: don't use 'a' before plural 'clothes', use correct noun 'clothing', and use 'in' when talking about wearing garments.'

× So your day is really a bad day. So I really like to be comfortable.

✓ So your day can be a bad day, so I really like to be comfortable.

Context refers generally to possibility; use modal 'can be' or simple present for habitual result. Also 'like to be comfortable' is acceptable but 'prefer to be comfortable' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'can be' to indicate possible outcome and 'prefer' for general preference.

× Yes I do. I do like wearing T-shirt. Uh, I wear it almost every day except uh, I go to school because I need to wear uniform to school and recycle to school.

✓ Yes, I do. I like wearing T-shirts. I wear them almost every day except when I go to school because I need to wear a uniform to school and when I commute to school.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for habitual actions. 'Except I go to school' needs a subordinating conjunction 'when' and 'recycle to school' is incorrect; likely 'travel/commute to school'. Also pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to match plural. Suggestion: use 'when' for exceptions, correct verbs for travel, and match pronoun number.

× I usually wear, I always wear T-shirt and especially I go to my English class.

✓ I usually wear, I always wear T-shirts, especially when I go to my English class.

Missing preposition 'when' to indicate time; plural 'T-shirts' and adverb placement improved. Suggestion: place time phrases at end or use 'when' to link actions to occasions.

× Umm not really but sometime I do uh because sometime I not doing laundry yet so I need to uh find other clothes or a Thai clothes to wear instead of that day because I am not yet doing laundry and sometimes stole or borrow my sister clothes.

✓ Not really, but sometimes I do because sometimes I haven't done the laundry yet so I need to find other clothes to wear that day; sometimes I steal or borrow my sister's clothes.

Use 'sometimes' (adverb), present perfect 'haven't done' for unfinished action, possessive 'my sister's clothes', and correct verb forms 'steal' or 'borrow' with appropriate tense. Also remove article 'a' before plural 'clothes'. Suggestion: use present perfect for actions not yet completed and add possessive 's' for ownership.

× Umm, from based on the place where I go, if I go to supermarket or the luxury place, I usually wear a tie clothes instead and also uh, elegant clothes.

✓ Based on the place where I go, if I go to a supermarket or a fancy place, I usually wear dressier and more elegant clothes.

Remove redundant 'from', use articles 'a supermarket', 'fancy place' instead of 'luxury place', and replace 'a tie clothes' (nonsense) with 'dressier' or 'more elegant clothes'. Suggestion: use 'based on' alone and correct collocations like 'dressier clothes'.

× But for uh, I goes to just a small market like that, I sometime only wear T-shirt and gym to that place.

✓ But if I just go to a small market like that, I sometimes only wear a T-shirt and gym clothes to that place.

Subject-verb agreement: 'I goes' -> 'I go'. 'Sometime' -> 'sometimes'. 'T-shirt and gym' should be 'a T-shirt and gym clothes'. Suggestion: ensure correct verb forms for present simple and pluralization of clothing nouns.

× Uh, the colour, the colours that I like is white colour, blue colour and black colour and sometime our colourful Co colour because I'm type of person who don't care about the colour of the clothes.

✓ The colours that I like are white, blue and black, and sometimes colorful ones, because I'm the type of person who doesn't care much about the colour of clothes.

Subject 'the colours' is plural so verb 'are' required. Remove repetitive 'colour' after each colour name. Use 'sometimes colorful ones' for variety, and 'doesn't' for third-person singular. Suggestion: avoid repeating 'colour' and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct negation 'doesn't'.

× But uh, if I have a choice, I would wear a white, black and blue clothes because it fit my skin colour because I'm pants.

✓ But if I have a choice, I would wear white, black and blue clothes because they fit my skin colour and suit me.

Remove article 'a' before list of colours + 'clothes' (plural). 'It fit' should be 'they fit' to agree with plural 'clothes'. 'Because I'm pants' is meaningless; replace with 'and suit me' or 'they suit my complexion'. Suggestion: match pronouns to plural nouns and use clear phrasing like 'suit my complexion'.