Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and correct grammar, remove hesitations and redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, avoid repeating words and filler sounds, and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "casual outfit," "formal occasions").

예시: I usually wear casual clothes, such as a black T-shirt, black trousers and sneakers. However, for special occasions I prefer to wear more formal outfits like a shirt and dress shoes. This lets me feel more professional and comfortable at events.

제안: Use correct noun forms and avoid filler words. Begin with a direct answer, then give one specific reason and a contrast using a linking word like "however." Mention an example of a special occasion. Keep sentences concise and natural.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are more practical and let me move easily. However, I wear smart clothes for special events such as interviews or weddings to look more presentable.

제안: Remove fillers and improve sentence structure. Give a direct answer, then provide a specific detail such as why T-shirts suit the climate or activities. Use clear vocabulary like "breathable" or "lightweight."

예시: Yes, I have about ten T-shirts in different colours to match my outfits. I especially wear them in hot weather because they are lightweight and breathable, which keeps me comfortable.

제안: Finish your thoughts and avoid trailing off. Answer directly, then give two contrasting situations using linking words like "if" and "however." Be specific about how long you spend and what you consider when choosing clothes.

예시: It depends. If I am in a rush I choose something quickly, usually within five minutes. However, if I have time I may spend twenty to thirty minutes planning an outfit based on the weather and the occasion.

제안: Use precise adjectives and avoid repetition. State the main difference in one sentence, then give a specific example for each (weekday and weekend) using linking words like "on the other hand" or "whereas."

예시: Yes. On weekends I wear casual, comfortable clothes such as jeans and sneakers so I can move freely. On weekdays I choose smarter, more presentable outfits like chinos and a neat shirt when I go out with friends.

제안: Avoid incorrect word choices ("tearful") and fillers. Answer directly, then explain with specific colour examples and a linking word such as "in contrast" or "however." Mention reasons (e.g., temperature, style).

예시: It depends on the season. In spring and summer I prefer light colours like white, beige and pastel shades because they feel cooler. In autumn and winter I usually choose darker colours such as navy, brown and black because they look warmer and more suited to the season.

× Will I usually wear wear whatever comes in my hand?

✓ I usually wear whatever comes to hand.

The original uses future auxiliary 'Will' incorrectly and repeats 'wear'. The sentence should be present simple for habitual action ('I usually wear'). 'Comes in my hand' is awkward; use 'comes to hand' or 'I have on hand'. Remove duplicate word and use correct tense and phrasing.

× So I always wear a typical outfit like a black T-shirt and black trousers with sneakers.

✓ I usually wear a typical outfit, such as a black T-shirt, black trousers, and sneakers.

Use 'such as' to introduce examples and commas to separate items. 'Like' is acceptable but 'such as' is clearer; change 'So' to remove unnecessary discourse marker and keep consistent adverb 'usually' used earlier.

× But in special occasions I prefer to wear more formal clothes.

✓ But on special occasions I prefer to wear more formal clothes.

The correct preposition is 'on' with 'occasions' (preposition error). The verb 'prefer' is fine in present tense for habitual preference.

× I prefer to wear a comfortable clothes because they are more practical and convenient.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they are more practical and convenient.

'Clothes' is plural and does not take the indefinite article 'a'. Remove 'a' to match plural noun usage.

× Whenever I go, I find myself flexible and more active because I'm not wearing tight clothes.

✓ Whenever I go out, I feel more flexible and active because I'm not wearing tight clothes.

'Find myself flexible' is awkward; use 'feel' for states. Add 'out' after 'go' for clarity. This improves natural collocation.

× So uh, but for smart collectors, I like to wear them whenever I'm having a special.

✓ But for smart clothes, I like to wear them when I have a special occasion.

'Collectors' is incorrect; context refers to 'clothes'. Replace with 'clothes'. 'Whenever I'm having a special' is incomplete; add 'occasion'. Also remove redundant conjunctions 'So uh, but' for clarity.

× Yes, I have got, uh, ten of them with different colors in order to match each, uh, pair of clothes I have, especially, uh, in the hot weather, uh, I like to wear something that is, uh, will free me from heat.

✓ Yes, I have ten of them in different colors to match each pair of clothes I have. Especially in hot weather, I like to wear something that will keep me cool.

Remove unnecessary filled pauses. Use 'in different colors' rather than 'with different colors'. 'Will free me from heat' is unnatural; use 'will keep me cool'. Also split into two clearer sentences.

× Uh, well, it depends on, uh, if I am in a rush or I have a great, uh, period of time to think about what I'm going to wear.

✓ It depends on whether I am in a rush or have plenty of time to think about what I'm going to wear.

Use 'whether' for two alternatives and 'plenty of time' instead of 'a great period of time' for natural phrasing. Remove filler 'uh' and extra 'I' for concise structure.

× So if I am running late and in a rush, I don't take too much time choosing clothes. However, if I am having enough time, I.

✓ If I am running late, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. However, if I have enough time, I do.

'Take too much time choosing clothes' is acceptable but 'spend much time' is more natural. 'If I am having enough time' is wrong; use 'if I have enough time'. Complete the second clause with 'I do' to avoid sentence fragment.

× Well, yes, I prefer to wear on weekends something which is more, uh, flexible and let me move easily.

✓ Yes, on weekends I prefer to wear something that is more flexible and lets me move easily.

Place 'on weekends' in natural position at start of clause. Use 'that' for defining relative clause and 'lets' (third person singular) to agree with 'something'. Remove filler words.

× However, on weekdays, I like to wear something more, umm, more catchy, more presentable, uh, especially when I'm hanging out.

✓ However, on weekdays I like to wear something more catchy and presentable, especially when I'm out.

Avoid repeating 'more'. Combine adjectives with 'and'. 'Hanging out' is informal; 'out' is sufficient. Remove fillers for clarity.

× It depends actually on the season, since I like to wear light, uh, more tearful colors in summer and spring.

✓ It actually depends on the season, since I like to wear light, more cheerful colors in summer and spring.

'Tearful' is the wrong adjective; 'cheerful' is correct for bright colors. Move 'actually' for natural word order.

× However, I like to wear dark colors during winter and autumn.

✓ However, I like to wear dark colors in winter and autumn.

Use 'in' with seasons ('in winter', 'in autumn') rather than 'during' for simple seasonal preference.