Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and give one specific supporting detail. Correct grammar (e.g., 'most of the time I wear sarees' and 'praise my appearance').

예시: I enjoy wearing different clothes, but I most often wear sarees. The saree is our traditional dress, and when I wear one people often compliment my appearance, especially at family gatherings.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with a coherent reason using linking words. Fix grammar and avoid repetition (e.g., 'relaxing' not 'feel you relaxed').

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed and reduce stress. For example, on weekends I usually choose loose trousers and a soft top so I can move freely.

제안: Provide a concise answer with correct tense and clearer reasons. Remove hesitations and use a linking phrase to add a specific example.

예시: Yes, I often wear T-shirts at home and when I sleep because they are comfortable. For instance, I usually wear a cotton T-shirt and shorts when I relax with friends.

제안: Answer directly then explain with a clear example. Correct tense and remove fillers. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast regular practice and exceptions.

예시: Not usually; I don't spend much time choosing clothes. However, when I go on vacation I am more selective and plan outfits in advance so I have suitable clothes for different activities.

제안: Make a clear contrast sentence, use correct vocabulary (formal/informal), and give a specific example of what you wear on each day. Avoid repetition and filler words.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear formal clothes, such as a blouse and skirt, because I work as a teacher. At weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts for comfort when I meet friends.

제안: Start with a direct statement about your preference, then give specific evidence and correct grammar (e.g., 'people compliment me when I wear red or white'). Keep it brief and precise.

예시: I don't have a single favourite colour, but people often compliment me when I wear red or white. I think white suits me best, so I wear it often for special occasions.

× I like to wear many types of clothes, but most of the clothes I like to wear the saree.

✓ I like to wear many types of clothes, but most of the time I like to wear the saree.

The original sentence mixes plural noun phrases and an incorrect structure 'most of the clothes I like to wear the saree.' This is a sentence structure and plurality issue; 'most of the time' is the correct phrase to express frequency. Use 'the saree' (singular) when referring to that garment as a category; place 'like to wear' after the frequency phrase for correct word order.

× The saree is our traditional dress and whenever I wear saree, everyone, uh, praise me about my looking.

✓ The saree is our traditional dress, and whenever I wear a saree, everyone praises me about my appearance.

Problems: missing article before 'saree' ('a saree' when speaking generally), subject-verb agreement ('everyone praises'), and awkward noun 'looking' should be 'appearance.' Also add a comma before 'and' joining independent clauses. This corrects pronoun/article and verb agreement usage.

× Obviously I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because it's not only a stress out you but also feel you relaxed.

✓ Obviously I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because they not only reduce your stress but also make you feel relaxed.

Original uses incorrect pronouns and verb forms and mixes idioms. 'Clothes' requires plural reference 'they.' Use 'reduce your stress' and 'make you feel relaxed' for correct present tense and collocations. This fixes present tense and pronoun reference.

× So casual dresses are actually in formal places casual.

✓ So casual dresses are not appropriate in formal places.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Rephrase to express the intended contrast: 'not appropriate in formal places.' This corrects sentence structure and clarity.

× Yes, I wear T-shirts in home, uh, whenever I uh, went to sleep.

✓ Yes, I wear T-shirts at home, especially when I go to sleep.

Use preposition 'at home' not 'in home' (preposition error). Also the clause should be present/simple ('when I go to sleep') rather than past 'went' to match habitual action. This corrects article/preposition and tense.

× Most of the time I wear it and whenever I go outside with my friends I usually wear it uh, as it uh, fill me relaxed.

✓ Most of the time I wear it, and whenever I go out with my friends I usually wear it because it makes me feel relaxed.

Use 'go out' not 'go outside' for social outings; 'make' requires third-person singular 'makes' when the subject is 'it.' Also use 'feel relaxed' rather than 'fill me relaxed.' This fixes present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Not really why I will spend the, uh, my time on choosing clothes, but yeah, whenever I went, uh, for any vacation, then I am quite choosy about my dresses and I, uh, always speak different types of clothes so that, uh, it.

✓ Not really; I usually do not spend time choosing clothes. However, whenever I go on vacation, I am quite choosy about my outfits and I always pick different types of clothes for different occasions.

The original is a run-on with tense inconsistencies and unclear phrases ('speak different types of clothes'). Correct mistakes by using simple present for habitual actions ('do not spend'), present for vacations ('go on vacation'), and appropriate verbs 'pick' or 'choose' for clothes. This fixes sentence structure and tense errors.

× Yeah, I usually wear different types of clothes in weekdays and weekends.

✓ Yes, I usually wear different types of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

Use preposition 'on' with 'weekdays/weekends' not 'in.' Also 'Yes' is more natural than 'Yeah' in formal responses. This corrects preposition usage and register.

× In weekdays I wear formal umm, dresses like umm as I am a teacher so I have to go to my office informal dress up and when weekdays, uh, weekends I use.

✓ On weekdays I wear formal clothes because I am a teacher and I have to go to my office; on weekends I wear more casual clothes.

Original has mixed phrases and incorrect word order ('informal dress up') and unclear ending. Rephrase into two clear clauses with correct prepositions and vocabulary: 'formal clothes' for work and 'casual clothes' for weekends. This fixes sentence structure and word choice.

× I don't have any specific color clothes for of liking but people say or compliment when I were red dress and white dresses most of the time so I think white dress suits me a lot.

✓ I don't have any specific favorite color, but people often compliment me when I wear red or white dresses, so I think white suits me a lot.

Fix pronoun and article errors: 'favorite color' is natural; 'compliment me when I wear' uses present tense and correct verb. Use 'dresses' or just the color 'white' — 'white suits me' is idiomatic. Correct subj/verb forms ('wear' not 'were') and remove redundant words. This addresses pronoun, article, and tense issues.