Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be a bit more concise and correct small grammar points. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (e.g., typical items or colours). Avoid vague labels and keep within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I like feminine, polished and elegant clothes. For example, I often choose simple midi dresses and tailored coats that feel timeless. I also like neutral colours and minimalist details because they look effortless yet put-together.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence then one concrete example of how you balance comfort and style. Use linking words (however, for example) to make the idea flow and correct small phrasing errors.

예시: I prefer a balance between comfort and smartness. For example, I often wear neat trousers and a soft knit sweater so I feel comfortable at work but still look professional.

제안: Correct odd word choices and be more concise. Replace unclear phrases and avoid repetition. Give one or two specific details about styles or how you wear them.

예시: Yes, I love T-shirts and they make up most of my tops. I have plain cotton T-shirts for everyday wear and a few printed ones for casual weekends because they are comfortable and versatile.

제안: Clarify meaning and fix vocabulary mistakes (e.g., 'crime' is wrong). State a clear topic sentence, explain why briefly, and give one specific consequence or habit. Use linking words like 'because' correctly.

예시: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I often feel like I have nothing suitable to wear. As a result, I sometimes plan outfits the night before to avoid wasting time in the morning.

제안: Fix unclear phrases (e.g., 'my stars') and correct contradictions (weekdays vs weekends). Start with a clear comparison, then give specific examples for each time (weekday vs weekend). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: My style doesn't change drastically, but I do dress differently. On weekdays I wear casual, modest outfits like jeans and simple tops for school, while on weekends I choose brighter dresses or skirts for social events.

제안: Correct grammar and spelling, and be specific about favourite colours. Start with a clear statement, then list a few colours with brief reasons. Avoid vague or repeated words.

예시: I'm mainly a monochrome person, but I also like occasional pops of colour. For instance, I prefer navy and teal for everyday wear, and I add bright yellow or soft pastels when I want a cheerful look.

× I prefer girly, polished but at the same time elegant clothing.

✓ I prefer girly, polished, but at the same time elegant clothing.

Missing comma before coordinating conjunction 'but' in a list of adjectives. Add the comma to separate items clearly and improve readability.

× Recently I've been into Stockholm style, which is a mix of classy, timeless and effortless.

✓ Recently I've been into Stockholm style, which is a mix of classy, timeless, and effortless.

Missing serial comma between list items. Adding the comma clarifies the list of adjectives describing the style.

× Some say that is important to find the golden middle and I stand by that because I want to be comfortable every day, but at the same time keep it classy and beautiful.

✓ Some say that it is important to find the golden mean, and I stand by that because I want to be comfortable every day, but at the same time keep things classy and beautiful.

Missing subject 'it' after 'say that'. 'Golden middle' is nonstandard; 'golden mean' or 'middle ground' is better. Also add comma before 'and' to join independent clauses and clarify 'keep it classy' -> 'keep things classy' to match referent.

× I absolutely love wearing T-shirts.

✓ I absolutely love wearing T-shirts.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× I think most of my tops in my wardrobe eat T-shirts.

✓ I think most of the tops in my wardrobe are T-shirts.

Incorrect verb 'eat' used in place of 'are'. Also improve noun phrase order: 'most of my tops in my wardrobe' -> 'most of the tops in my wardrobe'.

× I have them in different colors with different prints with different tags on them from different brands.

✓ I have them in different colors, with different prints and tags from different brands.

Run-on repetition 'with different' is clumsy. Use commas and coordinate 'prints and tags' to make the sentence concise and grammatically smooth.

× I really am a fan of T-shirts.

✓ I really am a fan of T-shirts.

Grammatically correct; natural emphatic word order. No change needed.

× I really do and it's a problem I struggle with in a way.

✓ I really do, and it's a problem I struggle with in a way.

Missing comma before coordinating conjunction joining two independent clauses. Add comma to correct sentence structure.

× I start my mornings with crime because I have nothing to wear and choices too difficult.

✓ I start my mornings with crisis because I have nothing to wear and the choices are too difficult.

Word 'crime' is incorrect; context requires 'crisis'. Also 'choices too difficult' lacks verb; add 'are'. Include definite article 'the' for specificity.

× I think my stars don't contrast too much.

✓ I think my styles don't contrast too much.

Word 'stars' is incorrect in context; likely intended 'styles'. Replace with appropriate noun to match meaning.

× However, in school on weekdays I just be more casually and a bit more modest, and on weekdays I like to wear outgoing dresses, skirts and just fun clothing.

✓ However, at school on weekdays I am just more casual and a bit more modest, and on weekends I like to wear outgoing dresses, skirts, and fun clothing.

Verb form 'be' is incorrect; use 'am'. 'Casually' is an adverb but adjective 'casual' is needed to describe 'I'. 'On weekdays' repeated incorrectly; second clause should be 'on weekends'. Add commas in list and before conjunction for clarity.

× To be honest and more of a monochrome person have a I love pops of color like teal, Navy, writing, bright yellow, and all of these near and bright and sometimes pastel colours.

✓ To be honest, I'm more of a monochrome person, but I love pops of color like teal, navy, white, bright yellow, and sometimes pastel colours.

Original sentence has word order and extra words errors: insert subject and verb 'I'm', replace 'have a' with 'but', correct 'writing' to 'white', lowercase 'navy', remove duplicate/unclear phrases 'near and bright'. Add commas for clarity and natural flow.