Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating what you like, then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar and short cohesive sentences. For example, say the clothing types (e.g., T-shirts, jeans) and why they are comfortable. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: I prefer casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable. For instance, soft cotton T-shirts are breathable and jeans are durable for daily activities. Because comfort matters to me, I often choose clothes that allow easy movement.

제안: Answer directly (state preference), then give a clear reason and one brief example. Avoid unrelated comments. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and ensure grammatical sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed. For example, I usually wear a casual coat and jeans when I go out, since they are practical and easy to move in.

제안: Provide a direct response and expand with a relevant, grammatically correct reason or example. Use linking words to make it coherent. For instance, mention occasions when you wear T-shirts and why they suit those activities.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and suitable for exercise. For example, I often wear a cotton T-shirt when I go jogging since it is breathable and light.

제안: Clarify whether you spend much time choosing clothes and give specific reasons (weather, mood, events). Use correct verbs and concise linked sentences. Mention a typical routine or example to support your answer.

예시: I sometimes spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I consider the weather and my mood. For example, on cold days I pick a warm coat and layers, while when I feel cheerful I choose bright, colorful clothes.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence saying yes or no, then explain differences with specific examples and linking words. Correct unclear phrases and keep sentences short and coherent.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear simple, work-appropriate clothes like shirts and chinos, but on weekends I choose casual outfits such as hoodies and jeans for comfort.

제안: State your favorite colour clearly and give specific reasons (e.g., matches easily, looks smart, hides stains). Use complete sentences and link reason to the preference. Avoid asking the examiner questions back in Part 1.

예시: I prefer black clothes because black is easy to match with other colours and always looks neat. For example, a black jacket goes well with different shirts and makes outfits look more polished.

× Just impossible for me. Sock pants. Kind of clothes. Find comfortable in.

✓ It's just impossible for me. Socks and pants are the kind of clothes I find comfortable.

The original contains sentence fragments and incorrect word order. Combine fragments into a complete sentence and use plural nouns 'socks' and 'pants.' 'Find comfortable in' is wrong order; use 'I find comfortable.' Ensure subject and verb present for clarity.

× I'm going to wear casual coat. To comfortable for me in power. Online looks so pretty.

✓ I usually wear a casual coat. It's comfortable for me and looks pretty online.

Original mixes future 'I'm going to' with intended habitual meaning. Use simple present 'I usually wear' for habits. 'Casual coat' needs article 'a.' 'To comfortable for me in power' is ungrammatical; correct to 'It's comfortable for me.' Keep logical order and clear subjects.

× I like wearing T-shirts. Like exercise I. Why not? It feels nice to wear.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts, especially when I exercise. Why not? They feel nice to wear.

'Like exercise I' is incorrect word order; change to 'when I exercise.' 'It feels' should agree with plural 'T-shirts' -> 'They feel.' Combine sentences for flow.

× I spend a lot of time producing clothes because sometimes I wear cold. If I'm more happy, I wear so colorful.

✓ I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because sometimes I feel cold. If I'm happier, I wear more colorful clothes.

'Producing clothes' is wrong verb; use 'choosing clothes.' 'Wear cold' should be 'feel cold.' Comparative 'more happy' -> 'happier.' 'I wear so colorful' -> 'I wear more colorful clothes.' Maintain subject-verb correctness and correct adjective forms.

× I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends. By weekdays I wear simple clothes, gas warming and weekends I.

✓ I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear simple, warm clothes, and at weekends I dress differently.

'By weekdays' incorrect preposition; use 'On weekdays.' 'Gas warming' is unclear—likely 'warm' or 'warm clothes.' Sentence fragment 'and weekends I' needs completion; provide clear contrasting clause 'and at weekends I dress differently.' Ensure prepositions and sentence completion.

× I like black color. Do you know why? Because the color black and matching can mix and make.

✓ I like the color black. Do you know why? Because black matches with many things and goes well with other colors.

Use article 'the' with 'color black' -> 'the color black.' Original final clause is fragmentary and ungrammatical; clarify meaning with 'matches with many things' and 'goes well with other colors.' Ensure verbs complete the thought.