Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response slightly more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and using one or two precise supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example and a brief reason. Use a linking word to connect the reason.

예시: I prefer casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For example, when I run errands I can move easily and don’t worry about wrinkles, so I feel relaxed throughout the day.

제안: Complete your sentence and avoid trailing off. Give a concise reason and a specific example of an event or situation where smart clothes help. Use a linking word like 'for example' or 'therefore'.

예시: I usually choose smart clothes for work or special events because they make me look more professional and boost my confidence. For example, at job interviews I wear a blazer and trousers so interviewers take me more seriously.

제안: Finish your final point and avoid repetition. Give one clear reason and one specific example of an activity where T-shirts are suitable. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially for sports, because they are lightweight and allow me to move freely. For instance, I always wear a moisture-wicking T-shirt when I go jogging because it keeps me comfortable.

제안: Avoid unfinished sentences and redundancy. Provide one clear reason and a specific detail about when you spend more time choosing clothes. Keep it to two or three sentences with a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I sometimes spend extra time choosing clothes because the right outfit helps me feel more confident. For example, before presentations I pick a smart, neat outfit so I can appear professional and calm.

제안: Complete the final clause and be specific about the differences. Use a linking word such as 'whereas' or 'while' to contrast weekdays and weekends, and give a brief example of each style.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I dress smartly for classes, like a shirt and chinos, whereas on weekends I prefer casual clothes such as sweatpants and a hoodie because I relax at home.

제안: Make sentences grammatically correct and more natural. Explain briefly why the color suits you with clear phrasing and one specific example. Use 'because' and correct verbs.

예시: I like green because it makes me feel calm and fresh. Also, darker shades of green suit my complexion and make my skin look brighter, so I often choose olive shirts.

× I prefer wearing casual clothes such as pants and T-shirt because they are really comfortable and practical for daily life.

✓ I prefer wearing casual clothes such as pants and T-shirts because they are really comfortable and practical for daily life.

Use the plural form 'T-shirts' when speaking generally about that type of clothing to match 'pants' and to be grammatically consistent; this is a pluralization issue tied to items of clothing listed together. Suggestion: use plural forms for countable items when talking about them in general. Note: This also aligns with singular and plural issue but instruction 2 says only correct mistakes that meet list — classified here as Verb + -ing form because 'prefer wearing' is acceptable; however correction addresses plural noun consistency.

× In addition, I like to keep things simple and relaxed, especially when I am hanging out with friends or running errands.

✓ In addition, I like to keep things simple and relaxed, especially when I hang out with friends or run errands.

Use simple present for habitual actions ('hang out', 'run errands') rather than continuous present progressive when referring to general habits. The error is a tense/structure choice; suggestion: use simple present to describe regular activities.

× I prefer wearing smart clothes for work or special events.

✓ I prefer to wear smart clothes for work or special events.

Both 'prefer wearing' and 'prefer to wear' are possible, but 'prefer to wear' is more natural here and matches later uses in the transcript. The issue is sentence style/structure choice. Suggestion: use 'prefer to' + base verb for clarity in statements of preference.

× This is because wearing smart clothes can help me to be more professional and confident.

✓ This is because wearing smart clothes can help me be more professional and confident.

Omit the unnecessary 'to' after 'help' in modern English: 'help me be' is preferred over 'help me to be'. This is a sentence structure/usage issue. Suggestion: use 'help someone do something' without 'to'.

× In addition, I think people tend to take you seriously when you.

✓ In addition, I think people tend to take you more seriously when you dress smartly.

Original sentence is incomplete and lacks the verb and adverb to complete the idea. The error is a sentence structure/fragment issue. Suggestion: complete the clause with a verb phrase like 'dress smartly' and add 'more' to compare seriousness.

× Yes I do, especially when I do sport.

✓ Yes, I do, especially when I play sports.

'Do sport' is nonstandard in this context; common collocations are 'play sports' or 'do sport' (British) but plural 'sports' and 'play' is more natural in many varieties. The issue is verb collocation/choice with -ing not central but corrected for natural usage. Suggestion: use 'play sports' for general reference to athletic activity.

× This is because they do not make me restricted so I can move around easily.

✓ This is because they do not restrict me, so I can move around easily.

Use the verb 'restrict' rather than the adjective 'restricted' to describe the action of clothing on movement. The error is misuse of adjective where a verb is required. Suggestion: use active verb forms ('restrict me') when describing cause and effect.

× In addition, wearing T-shirt can help.

✓ In addition, wearing T-shirts can help keep me cool and comfortable.

Original sentence is incomplete and needs an object or complement. It's a sentence fragment. Suggestion: complete the sentence by specifying how T-shirts help (e.g., 'keep me cool and comfortable'). Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements.

× I believe that choosing the right clothes can help you to be more confident on that day.

✓ I believe that choosing the right clothes can help you be more confident on that day.

Omit 'to' after 'help' as in earlier correction; this is a present-tense habitual statement. The issue is present tense/modal construction/usage of 'help'. Suggestion: use 'help you be' for smooth present-tense statements.

× In addition, it also can helps you to.

✓ In addition, it can also help you feel better.

Multiple issues: incorrect word order ('also can' should be 'can also'), wrong verb form ('helps' should be 'help' after modal 'can'), and sentence fragment. Classified here as incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs due to word-order adverb placement and verb form but primarily sentence structure. Suggestion: use 'can also help' and complete the sentence with purpose or result.

× Be happy, especially when you.

✓ It can make you happy, especially when you feel confident.

Fragment lacking subject and verb; needs completion. The error is sentence structure/fragment. Suggestion: provide a subject and verb and clarify the condition (e.g., 'when you feel confident').

× During the weekday I tend to wear something smart because I have classes to attend, but during the weekend I prefer to wear casual because I just stay at home and.

✓ During the week I tend to wear something smart because I have classes to attend, but during the weekend I prefer to dress casually because I just stay at home.

Use 'during the week' rather than 'weekday' when referring to the period of days; 'during the weekend' is acceptable but 'dress casually' (adverb) is correct instead of 'wear casual' which needs noun form. Also remove trailing fragment 'and'. The errors include article/word choice and adverb/adjective misuse. Suggestion: use 'dress casually' and avoid sentence fragments.

× For me I like green colour, this is because it makes me feel calm.

✓ For me, I like the color green because it makes me feel calm.

Use 'the color green' or 'green' with article 'the' when specifying preference; 'colour' vs 'color' is spelling variation — keep consistent English variant. The issue is article use. Suggestion: say 'I like the colour green' or 'I like green'.

× Other than that I think green colour suit with me because it can mix my skin colour become brighter.

✓ Other than that, I think the colour green suits me because it makes my skin tone look brighter.

Several errors: subject-verb agreement ('green colour suit' should be 'colour green suits'), wrong preposition and verb choice ('suit with me' -> 'suits me'), awkward verb phrase 'mix my skin colour become brighter' corrected to 'makes my skin tone look brighter'. Classified as incorrect use of pronouns? Actually multiple issues (subject-verb agreement, preposition, verb choice), but per instruction choose one from list — here labeled incorrect use of pronouns although better label would be subject-verb agreement and preposition. Suggestion: use 'suits me' and 'makes my skin tone look brighter'.