Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer comfortable clothes at home”), then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar for tense and plurality, and avoid filler words. Link ideas with simple connectors like “because” or “and.”

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes at home because I like to relax. For example, I often wear loose pajamas or oversized T-shirts since they are soft and let me move freely.

제안: Answer directly and expand briefly with reasons. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid incomplete sentences. Use a linking phrase to contrast (e.g., “but when…”).

예시: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my lifestyle and are easier to move in. However, I wear smart clothes for special occasions like interviews or weddings.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and explain with one or two specific details. Correct word choice (e.g., “T-shirts” not “AT shirt”) and grammar (comparatives, word order). Mention cultural reasons succinctly if relevant.

예시: I don't often wear T-shirts; I prefer wearing long dresses because of my cultural and religious beliefs. For instance, I usually choose dresses that cover my legs and arms.

제안: Use past and present tenses correctly and make sentences coherent. Start with a direct answer, then explain the change with a linking word like “but” or “now”. Be specific about what you consider (color, design, price).

예시: I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I cared about color and design. But now I mainly check the price and buy what is affordable.

제안: Answer directly and give clear contrasting details for weekdays vs weekends. Use correct verb forms and reduce repetition. Use linking words like “while” or “whereas” to compare.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear modest smart-casual clothes for work or school, whereas at weekends I stay at home and wear very comfortable outfits like loose pajamas or tracksuits.

제안: Choose correct vocabulary (e.g., “bright colors” not “firing colors”). State preferences clearly and give one specific reason. Avoid hesitations and unnecessary repetition.

예시: I prefer bright colors such as red, orange, blue and yellow because they suit my skin tone and make me feel more energetic. I also like black for its simplicity and versatility.

× I have many kind of a clue with but at home I like to wear pajama because I want to feel more comfortable so I wearing a free size cloth or sometime I wear a a Jelly Bean.

✓ I have many kinds of clothes, but at home I like to wear pajamas because I want to feel more comfortable, so I wear free-size clothes or sometimes I wear a jelly bean.

Incorrect plural forms: 'many kind' should be 'many kinds'; 'a clue' is likely 'clothes'; 'pajama' should be plural 'pajamas'; 'cloth' should be plural 'clothes'; 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Use plural nouns for countable items and correct plural endings. Also adjust articles and hyphenation ('free-size'). Improve by learning plural rules and collocations.

× so I wearing a free size cloth or sometime I wear a a Jelly Bean.

✓ so I wear free-size clothes or sometimes I wear a jelly bean.

The verb 'wearing' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary. In simple present tense for habitual actions use base verb 'wear' (I wear). Remove progressive form unless describing an action happening now (I am wearing).

× Usually I prefer comfortable and casual clothes. This is make me a simple person and I like more to wear this clothes.

✓ Usually I prefer comfortable and casual clothes. This makes me seem like a simple person and I prefer to wear these clothes.

Subject-verb agreement: 'This is make' should be 'This makes' (third person singular). 'I like more to wear this clothes' is awkward—use 'I prefer to wear these clothes' and 'these' for plural demonstrative. Learn subject-verb agreement and correct demonstrative pronouns.

× While a smart clothes like.

✓ I don't often wear smart clothes.

Fragment and unclear structure: 'While a smart clothes like.' is incomplete. Convert to a full sentence conveying contrast: 'I don't often wear smart clothes.' Ensure subject and verb present.

× Actually I don't like to wear AT shirt more I prefer wearing a dress.

✓ Actually I don't like to wear T-shirts; I prefer wearing dresses.

'AT shirt' is incorrect; likely meant 'a T-shirt' or 'T-shirts'. Use plural 'T-shirts' for general preference. Replace 'more' with a clause or semicolon. Also article/number agreement corrected.

× The dress could be a tall at the legs because I'm a Muslim.

✓ The dress should be long to the ankles because I'm a Muslim.

Awkward adjective use: 'tall at the legs' is incorrect English. Use 'long to the ankles' or 'ankle-length' to describe dress length. 'Could be' changed to 'should be' to reflect preference or requirement.

× Before the new cycle, yes, I spending a lot of time when I choosing the cloth, I choose the color and the design.

✓ Before the new cycle, yes, I spent a lot of time choosing clothes; I chose the color and the design.

Tense errors and progressive misuse: 'I spending' should be past 'I spent' if referring to before. 'When I choosing' should be 'when I was choosing' or simply 'choosing'. Also 'cloth' should be plural 'clothes'. Match past tense consistency.

× But recently at the time, I see only the price of the cloth when I buy a.

✓ But recently, I only look at the price of the clothes when I buy them.

Wrong verb choice and article: 'I see' should be 'I look at' for examining price; 'cloth' should be 'clothes'; 'when I buy a' incomplete—use 'when I buy them'. Use simple present for current habits.

× Yes sure when we have an occasion I wear a a casual clothes but in the weekend when I stay at home I wearing only a comfortable clothes like when, when what I say before.

✓ Yes, sure. When we have an occasion I wear casual clothes, but on weekends when I stay at home I wear only comfortable clothes, like I said before.

Multiple plural and article issues: 'a casual clothes' should be 'casual clothes'; 'in the weekend' -> 'on weekends'; 'I wearing' -> 'I wear'; 'a comfortable clothes' -> 'comfortable clothes'. Correct prepositions and plural agreement.

× What colour clothes do you like? Uh, I prefer firing colors, for example, black, red, orange, blue and yellow.

✓ I prefer bright colors, for example black, red, orange, blue and yellow.

'Firing colors' is incorrect; likely 'bright colors'. Also remove redundant comma before list. Use correct adjective 'bright' to describe colors.

× Uh, this is good for my eyes and I think it's uh, uh, good or suitable for my skin. So I wearing, uh, actually like the skin.

✓ This is good for my eyes and I think it is suitable for my skin. So I wear these colors because they suit my skin tone.

'I wearing' incorrect without auxiliary; should be 'I wear'. Also clarify 'like the skin' to 'suit my skin tone'. Use present simple for general truths and habitual actions.