Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one supporting detail. Use correct articles and plural forms (e.g., “casual clothes” not “a casual clothes”).

예시: I usually wear casual clothes in my free time, but I prefer professional outfits like suits for formal occasions because they make me feel more confident and polished.

제안: Give a direct answer and streamline the explanation. Improve grammar (e.g., “because I work” and “on weekdays”) and avoid redundant phrases like “as well.” Add a linking word to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I prefer casual clothes at the weekend because they are more comfortable. However, I wear my company uniform on weekdays for work, which also helps create a sense of unity among colleagues.

제안: Be concise and correct vocabulary and word forms (e.g., “comfortable” not “comf comfort”). Use one or two specific reasons and link them with conjunctions. Avoid repeating the answer wordlessly.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and relaxing. They are also usually cheaper than other types of clothing, which makes them practical for everyday use.

제안: Answer directly and improve grammar and word order (e.g., “I don’t spend much time choosing clothes”). Provide a brief reason and avoid unnecessary qualifiers. Be specific about shopping habits.

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes. I’m quite flexible about styles, so when shopping I usually pick something affordable and practical rather than spending a lot of time deciding.

제안: Keep it brief and correct grammar (e.g., “on weekdays” and “on weekends”). Use a linking phrase to refer to your previous point. Provide one or two specific examples of weekend clothes.

예시: Yes, I do. On weekdays I wear my company uniform for work, while on weekends I usually wear casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts.

제안: Clarify your meaning and use correct vocabulary. Avoid metaphors that are unclear; if you want to associate white with qualities, state it simply and briefly. Use one clear reason for your preference.

예시: I prefer white clothing because it looks clean and simple. I like how white gives a neat, fresh appearance and is easy to match with other colours.

× I regularly wear a casual clothes, but I prefer wearing a professional clothes or some suit because I feel more confident when I wear this kind of clothes.

✓ I regularly wear casual clothes, but I prefer wearing professional clothes or a suit because I feel more confident when I wear this kind of clothing.

Use of articles and countability: 'clothes' is a plural uncountable concept so do not use 'a' before it; say 'casual clothes' or 'professional clothes'. Use 'a suit' for a single countable item. Also use 'clothing' instead of repeating 'clothes' for style and correctness.

× I definitely prefer wearing casual clothes during my weekend.

✓ I definitely prefer wearing casual clothes during the weekend.

Precision in time expressions: use 'the weekend' or 'weekends' for habitual actions. 'During my weekend' is unnatural; 'during the weekend' is correct for a habitual routine.

× However, because of working, I cannot wear casual clothes during my weekday.

✓ However, because of work, I cannot wear casual clothes during the weekdays.

Use noun form 'work' not 'working' after 'because of'. For habitual plural time use 'weekdays' rather than singular 'weekday' to indicate every working day.

× I need to wear the company uniform, which is also strengthened our unique unity as well.

✓ I need to wear the company uniform, which also strengthens our sense of unity.

Incorrect passive and word choice: 'which is also strengthened our unique unity' mixes passive and active incorrectly. Use active verb 'strengthens' to link the clause to 'uniform'. 'Sense of unity' is a natural collocation; remove redundant 'as well' and 'unique' if unnecessary.

× Yes I do, I think wearing T-shirts I feel comf comfort and relax sometimes.

✓ Yes I do. I think when I wear T-shirts I feel comfortable and relaxed sometimes.

Use correct forms: after 'I think' use a clause 'when I wear T-shirts' rather than 'wearing T-shirts I feel'. 'Comfort' and 'relax' are nouns/verbs; use adjectives 'comfortable' and 'relaxed'. Also punctuation: split into two sentences for clarity.

× T-shirts price also cheap compared to the others so in general yes.

✓ T-shirts are also cheap compared to others, so in general yes.

Subject-verb structure and quantifier: 'T-shirts price' is incorrect; use 'T-shirts are' or 'The price of T-shirts is'. 'Compared to others' is sufficient; avoid 'the others' unless specific.

× When I go shopping, I don't think I spend too much time for selecting any kind.

✓ When I go shopping, I don't think I spend too much time selecting anything.

Preposition and word order: don't use 'for' after 'time' here; use 'spend time doing something' pattern. 'Any kind' is vague—use 'anything' to mean any item.

× Of course, I am a person who can wear any type of clothes actually, so I will pick the cheapest one first.

✓ Of course, I am the kind of person who can wear any type of clothes, so I usually pick the cheapest one first.

Style and determiner: 'a person who' is acceptable but 'the kind of person who' is more natural. Add 'usually' to indicate habitual behavior. 'Any type of clothes' is a bit awkward but acceptable; kept for meaning.

× Definitely yes, because as I mentioned earlier that my weekday I need to work so I need to wear company uniform.

✓ Definitely yes, because as I mentioned earlier, on weekdays I need to work so I need to wear the company uniform.

Time expression and article: use 'on weekdays' for habitual time and include 'the' before 'company uniform'. Remove the unnecessary 'that' after 'earlier'.

× During weekend I can wear any kind of clothes that I prefer to wear such as jeans or T-shirt.

✓ During the weekend I can wear any kind of clothes that I prefer, such as jeans or a T-shirt.

Use 'the weekend' and add article 'a' before 'T-shirt'. Avoid repeating 'wear' twice; 'clothes that I prefer' suffices.

× I like white cross is reflect my integrity and transparency, so it should have no corruption at all with each design of the white color.

✓ I like white because it reflects my integrity and transparency, and it suggests absence of corruption in each design that uses white.

Sentence had multiple preposition and conjunction errors. Use 'because' to link reason. 'Reflects' subject-verb agreement needed. 'Absence of corruption' is clearer than 'should have no corruption'. Rephrase 'each design that uses white' for clarity.