Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples of expressive or bold items and a brief reason. Avoid repetition ("express"/"show" twice) and fix grammar (e.g., "that type of clothes" → "clothes that are").

예시: I prefer clothes that express my personality. For example, I often wear bold patterned jackets and statement accessories because they reflect my creative style and help me stand out.

제안: Provide a direct answer then briefly explain with a clear reason and specific example. Remove filler words like "umm" and correct awkward phrasing (e.g., "one of the art" → "an art"). Keep it to two sentences.

예시: I prefer smart clothes because I see dressing as an art that reflects my creativity. For instance, I like tailored shirts with interesting patterns that look professional but still show my personality.

제안: Answer directly and give a concise, grammatical explanation. Avoid excessive wording and ensure subject-verb agreement (e.g., "it makes my physique look bigger"). Mention a specific alternative and reason.

예시: No, I usually avoid T-shirts because they make my frame look bulkier. I prefer sleeveless tops because they highlight my shoulders and create a slimmer silhouette.

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear "Yes" then one sentence explaining why, using correct phrasing (e.g., "I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I value how I present myself"). Give one concrete habit if possible.

예시: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing everyday outfits because I believe my appearance reflects who I am. For example, I plan my outfits the night before to make sure they match my activities the next day.

제안: Use present tense and be specific about differences. Give a clear contrast with linking words ("On weekdays... whereas on weekends..."). Correct vocabulary errors ("bald clothes" unclear; probably "bold" or "formal"). Keep to two sentences.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart, practical outfits like blazers and tailored trousers for work, whereas on weekends I prefer comfortable casual clothes such as jeans and hoodies for relaxing with friends.

제안: Begin with a clear statement then give one or two specific colors you often choose and why. Avoid repetition and fix grammar ("I don't have a specific color"; "diverse clothing").

예시: I don't stick to one color; I wear a variety depending on my mood. For example, I often choose neutral tones like navy and gray for work, and brighter colors such as mustard or teal for weekends to feel more energetic.

× I like to wear clothes that clearly express or show my personality, and that type of clothes is something expressive or bold kind of design as it is look like me.

✓ I like to wear clothes that clearly express my personality, and those clothes are expressive or have bold designs because they reflect me.

Pronoun reference and agreement were incorrect: 'that type of clothes' should be 'those clothes' to match the plural noun 'clothes'. 'Express or show my personality' is redundant; use 'express my personality'. 'It is look like me' is ungrammatical and unclear; use 'because they reflect me'. Use plural forms and clear pronoun references to match nouns. Suggestion: Use consistent plural pronouns ('those') with 'clothes' and simplify redundant phrases.

× I prefer smart clothes since dressing or umm showing my personality in kind of dressing is one of the art in where you can express yourself or show umm your creativity.

✓ I prefer smart clothes because dressing to show my personality is an art where you can express your creativity.

Article and preposition issues: 'one of the art' should be 'an art' because 'art' is a noncount noun here used generally and needs the indefinite article. 'in where you can' is incorrect; use 'where you can'. Also awkward phrasing 'show my personality in kind of dressing' simplified to 'dressing to show my personality'. Suggestion: Use 'an art' and simplify the clause to 'dressing to show my personality'.

× No, I don't like wearing T-shirts because it makes my physique looks bigger than it actually looks like and that's why I prefer sleeveless as it show the curves of my body.

✓ No, I don't like wearing T-shirts because they make my physique look bigger than it actually is, and that's why I prefer sleeveless tops since they show the curves of my body.

Subject-verb agreement and form errors: 'it makes my physique looks' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'T-shirts' and uses wrong verb form 'looks'. Use 'they make' to match plural 'T-shirts' and bare infinitive 'look'. 'Actually looks like' is redundant; 'actually is' is correct. 'As it show' should be 'since they show' to match plural noun 'sleeveless tops'. Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree in number and use correct verb forms (base form after make/let).

× Yes, I very much spend a lot of time choosing clothes for everyday as I value the way I dress because I believe the way you dress is also the way you want how you want to show who you are.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes every day because I value the way I dress; I believe the way you dress shows who you are.

Tense and word order issues: 'I very much spend a lot of time' is awkward; use 'I spend a lot of time'. 'For everyday' should be 'every day' (two words). The clause 'the way you dress is also the way you want how you want to show who you are' is ungrammatical and repetitive; simplify to 'the way you dress shows who you are'. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions and concise clauses to avoid redundancy.

× Yes, I wore different styles of clothes whenever on weekdays or weekend.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

Tense error and incorrect temporal expression: The question asks about a habitual routine, so use present tense 'wear' not past 'wore'. Also 'whenever on weekdays or weekend' is ungrammatical; use 'on weekdays and weekends'. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual routines and correct time prepositions ('on weekdays').

× Since weekdays they all often go outside and I spend my time on going outside with my with my friends.

✓ On weekdays I often go out and spend time going out with my friends.

Pronoun and word choice errors: 'Since weekdays they all often go outside' is unclear and uses unnecessary pronoun 'they all'; better to speak from personal perspective 'On weekdays I often go out'. 'Spend my time on going outside' is unidiomatic; use 'spend time going out'. Suggestion: Use clear subjects (I) and idiomatic verbs ('go out', 'spend time doing something').

× That's why I prefer bald clothes and on weekends I just stay at home. So casual and casual clothes is.

✓ That's why I prefer smart clothes, and on weekends I just stay at home and wear casual clothes.

Word choice and sentence fragment: 'bald clothes' is likely intended as 'bold clothes' or 'smart clothes'; context indicates 'smart' earlier, so use 'smart clothes'. The phrase 'So casual and casual clothes is' is a fragment and ungrammatical. Combine into a complete sentence 'and wear casual clothes'. Suggestion: Choose correct adjective ('bold' vs 'smart') and avoid sentence fragments; ensure subject and verb are present.

× I don't have specific color that I wear since every day is a different outfit and different style and that's why I wear a diverse clothes, diverse color of clothes.

✓ I don't have a specific color that I wear because every day I wear a different outfit and style, so I wear a variety of colors.

Pronoun and article errors: 'specific color' needs the indefinite article 'a'. 'A diverse clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural; use 'a variety of colors' or 'diverse colors'. Also simplify redundant phrases 'every day is a different outfit and different style' to 'every day I wear a different outfit and style'. Suggestion: Use 'a specific color', match singular/plural forms, and prefer 'a variety of colors' for natural expression.