Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, avoid repetition, and follow a clear structure: give a direct topic sentence, then one or two supporting details. Use correct articles and plural agreement, and avoid filler words.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes, such as T-shirts and jeans, because they are easy to wear and practical. However, I sometimes choose fancier outfits for special occasions to look more polished.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Reduce hesitations and correct word choices (e.g., 'bad work' unclear). Use linking words to contrast preferences for everyday vs special occasions.

예시: I usually prefer comfortable casual clothes for everyday activities because they are practical. However, when I go to work or attend a party, I choose smart clothes to make a better impression.

제안: Give a direct answer, avoid repetition, and provide one specific reason or example. Use proper verb forms and remove filler sounds.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I often wear a cotton T-shirt when I study or go out with friends.

제안: Be concise and organized: start with a clear statement, then give one or two brief supporting reasons. Remove repeated words and hesitations.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer a simple, comfortable style. I usually pick familiar items like shorts and a T-shirt, so I can get dressed quickly.

제안: Clarify the contrast between weekdays and weekends. Use linking words to explain when and why you change styles, and avoid vague phrases.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes for work, but at weekends I wear shorts and a jacket because they are comfortable and suit outdoor activities.

제안: Use clear vocabulary to name colors and give a concise reason. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. State one or two favorite colors and explain why they suit you.

예시: I prefer navy blue and peach because navy looks smart and professional, while peach gives a warm, friendly appearance. These colors suit my skin tone and make me feel confident.

× As usually I prefer a comfortable clothes and then a fancy clothes.

✓ As usual I prefer comfortable clothes and sometimes fancy clothes.

Incorrect use of article 'a' with plural 'clothes' and incorrect adverb 'As usually'. Use 'As usual' and no article before plural noun 'clothes'. Also 'then' is not appropriate; use 'sometimes' to indicate contrast.

× I usually like to wear a T-shirt and jeans pants because it is it is it is comfortable to wear and I prefer to choose fancy clothes than I prefer to choose comfy clothes.

✓ I usually like to wear a T-shirt and jeans because they are comfortable to wear, and I prefer fancy clothes to comfy clothes.

'Jeans' or 'jeans pants' should be 'jeans'; treat as plural so use 'they are' not 'it is'. Use 'prefer X to Y' structure rather than 'prefer X than'. Remove repeated words and redundant 'to choose'.

× As I prefer to wear, uh, comfortable casual clothes for most of the days.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable casual clothes on most days.

Incorrect preposition 'for most of the days' — use 'on most days'. Also omit filler 'As I' at sentence start; keep present simple 'I prefer'.

× But when I'm going to a bad work, I know uh, and attend to a party, uh, and I prefer to choose, uh, like gentle clothes, like smart clothes and to be look.

✓ But when I'm going to work or attending a party, I prefer to wear smart clothes and look presentable.

'Going to a bad work' is ungrammatical; use 'going to work'. 'Attend to a party' should be 'attending a party'. 'Prefer to choose' is wordy — 'prefer to wear' or 'prefer' suffices. 'To be look' is incorrect; use 'look presentable'.

× As I like to wear T-shirt because uh, it makes me comfortable.

✓ I like to wear a T-shirt because it makes me comfortable.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'T-shirt'. Keep 'I like to wear a T-shirt' for grammatically correct noun phrase.

× It is easy to wear and it suits me and it feels comfortable now every time and it is looks decent on me.

✓ It is easy to wear, suits me, feels comfortable, and looks decent on me.

Redundant and incorrect verb forms: 'it is looks' is wrong; use 'looks'. Remove unnecessary 'now every time'. Combine parallel predicates with commas for clarity.

× Uh, I don't spend much time choosing, uh, choosing, choosing clothes because I prefer a comfortable, uh, comfortable too.

✓ I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer comfortable styles.

Remove repeated words. 'Prefer a comfortable, comfortable too' is incorrect; use 'prefer comfortable styles' and no article for plural 'clothes'.

× I will uh, comfortable, comfortable style because I like to wear comfortable shorts and I don't most time to.

✓ I prefer a comfortable style because I like to wear comfortable shorts and I don't spend much time choosing clothes.

Fragmented and missing verbs: add 'prefer' and 'spend' to complete meaning. Use 'spend much time' correctly and specify 'choosing clothes'.

× Yes, uh, I prefer to wear uh, shorts, I know, and a jacket because, uh, it suits on me and it is easy to find everywhere and it looks me good in all looking.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear shorts and a jacket because they suit me, are easy to find everywhere, and look good on me.

Incorrect preposition 'suits on me' should be 'suit me'. 'Looks me good' should be 'look good on me'. Use plural pronoun 'they' for 'shorts and a jacket'.

× I usually prefer a Navy blue Anna Anna Peach color because it, uh, it shoots me, uh, I'm in a, I'm a fight and it suits me, uh, in in by invoice, my caller also, and it looks like a gentleman.

✓ I usually prefer navy blue and peach colors because they suit me and make me look more gentlemanly.

Numerous errors: unnecessary 'a' before color names (use 'navy blue and peach colors' or 'navy blue and peach'), 'shoots me' is incorrect word choice; likely 'suits me' or 'suits my style'. 'Looks like a gentleman' should be 'make me look more gentlemanly'. Simplify and correct vocabulary and agreement.

× So I chose bees and on every blue.

✓ So I choose blues and navy blue.

'Chose' is past tense but context is habitual; use 'choose'. 'Bees' and 'on every blue' are incorrect — intended 'blues' and 'navy blue'. Ensure plural noun agreement for colors.