Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be concise and add a small specific detail to enrich the answer. Use a clear topic sentence then one supporting detail. Avoid redundancy.

예시: I like to wear comfortable clothes, such as pants and T-shirts. For example, I usually choose soft cotton T-shirts and loose jeans because they let me move freely all day.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with concise language. Fix grammar (relaxed, work in a relaxed way) and avoid repeating similar ideas.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and help me focus. For instance, I often wear a sweater and chinos when I study or work at a café.

제안: Clarify the intended meaning and correct word errors (probably meant 'casual' or 'day-to-day'). Keep it short and specific: say when and why you wear T-shirts, and avoid confusion between T-shirts and shorts.

예시: Yes, I wear T-shirts every day because they are comfortable and easy to wash. For example, I wear a T-shirt most mornings for errands or when I meet friends informally.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one concise supporting detail explaining how you keep clothes organized. Fix repetitions and incomplete sentence endings.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I organize my wardrobe by type and color. As a result, I can quickly pick an outfit in a few minutes.

제안: Correct vocabulary mistakes (probably 'shirt and pants' not 'salt'), remove filler words, and give one clear contrast sentence with specific examples for weekday vs weekend clothing.

예시: On weekdays I usually wear a shirt and trousers for college because they look neat, while on weekends I prefer informal clothes like shorts and T-shirts for comfort.

제안: Respond directly and add a brief reason or example to make the answer more informative. Keep it concise and grammatically smooth.

예시: I own many colors, but I mainly wear black because it matches everything and hides stains. For example, most of my coats and trousers are black.

× I prefer to wear clothes that feels comfortable to me such as pants and T-shirt.

✓ I prefer to wear clothes that feel comfortable to me, such as pants and T-shirts.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'clothes' is plural, so the relative clause must use plural verb 'feel' not 'feels'. Also use plural 'T-shirts' to match general meaning and add a comma before the example for clarity.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes as it feels very relaxed and I can work under relax mode.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because they feel very relaxing and I can work in a relaxed mode.

Pronoun and verb agreement: 'clothes' is plural, so use 'they' and plural verb 'feel'. Word choice and form: use adjective 'relaxing' to describe clothes, and the phrase 'in a relaxed mode' is more natural than 'under relax mode'.

× Also I feel very simple and down to earth mode.

✓ Also I feel very simple and down-to-earth.

Wrong word form: 'mode' is unnecessary and awkward here. Use the adjectival phrase 'down-to-earth' and omit 'mode'. Hyphenate 'down-to-earth' as it modifies 'I feel'.

× Definitely, I like to wear T-shirts in my daily life.

✓ Definitely, I like to wear T-shirts in my daily life.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.

× I mainly wear dessert and if I have to do some other works and informal works that time I you I prefer to you where T-shirts over shorts.

✓ I mainly wear T-shirts, and if I have to do some other informal work, at that time I prefer to wear T-shirts over shorts.

Multiple problems: 'dessert' is wrong word choice (should be 'T-shirts'); awkward repetition and wrong pronouns 'I you I prefer to you where' resulted from typing errors. Use singular 'work' for uncountable or 'works' replaced by 'work' and reorder to a coherent sentence. Ensure correct verb 'wear' and preposition 'over' to compare.

× No, no I don't. Where I don't spend too much time on selecting my clothes, I I have arranged my clothes in such a way that I can easily get anyone randomly and wear it.

✓ No, I don't. I don't spend much time selecting my clothes; I have arranged them so that I can easily grab any item and put it on.

Remove extraneous 'Where' and duplicate words. Use natural verbs: 'grab' and 'put it on' instead of 'get anyone randomly and wear it'. Use plural pronoun 'them' for 'clothes' and simplify 'selecting' usage. Punctuation clarified with semicolon.

× So I believe I can simply wear the.

✓ So I believe I can simply wear them.

Missing object: 'the' is incorrect and incomplete. Replace with pronoun 'them' referring to clothes.

× Uh, during weekdays I prefer to wear salt and pants as I have to attend classes in my college whereas on weekends I prefer to wear little bit informal clothes such as shorts and uh, T-shirts.

✓ During weekdays I prefer to wear shirts and pants because I have to attend classes at my college, whereas on weekends I prefer to wear slightly informal clothes such as shorts and T-shirts.

Word choice errors: 'salt' should be 'shirts'; use 'because' rather than 'as' for clarity. Use 'at my college' for correct preposition. 'Little bit informal' should be 'slightly informal' or 'a bit informal'. Removed filler 'uh' for clarity.

× I have multiple color clothes available with me, but I mainly wear clothes that are of black color.

✓ I have clothes in various colors, but I mainly wear black clothes.

Awkward phrasing: 'multiple color clothes available with me' should be 'clothes in various colors' or 'many colored clothes'. 'That are of black color' is wordy; use 'mainly wear black clothes'. Improved word order and concision.