Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural and specific: start with a clear topic sentence, mention why cotton is suitable, and add a brief specific example. Avoid grammatical errors (use "it is" or "this is").

예시: I prefer wearing cotton clothes in summer because they are lightweight and breathable. For example, I often wear cotton shirts and shorts when the temperature is high, as they keep me cool and comfortable.

제안: Expand slightly with a reason and a contrast using a linking word to sound more complete. Keep it brief and natural.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I value ease of movement and practicality. However, I sometimes wear smart clothes for important events or work.

제안: This is a good direct answer; improve by adding a specific detail or example and a linking word to make it more informative.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For instance, I often wear a plain T-shirt with jeans when I go out with friends.

제안: Correct grammar and clarify your meaning. Start with a clear topic sentence about how much time you spend, then give a reason and an example. Use linking words for coherence.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I shop quickly. Since I prefer comfortable items, I usually pick practical pieces like cotton shirts and simple jeans without browsing for long.

제안: Be specific and correct word choice (e.g., "dresses mostly" not "medis"). Use a linking phrase to contrast weekdays and weekends and provide a brief example of each.

예시: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. For example, on weekdays I wear casual, comfortable clothes like jeans and T-shirts, while on weekends I mostly wear dresses or slightly smarter outfits for outings.

제안: Fix small grammar issues and expand with a reason or example. Begin with a topic sentence, then explain why black suits you and when you usually wear it.

예시: I prefer black clothes because they match my personal style and are easy to coordinate. For instance, I often wear a black jacket or dress to look neat and confident.

× I prefer cotton clothes because it's a summer season.

✓ I prefer cotton clothes because it is summer.

The phrase 'it's a summer season' is unnatural and uses an unnecessary article. Use 'it is summer' to indicate the current season. Also 'it is' contracts to 'it's' in speech, but the sentence is clearer without 'a'. Suggestion: say 'It is summer' or 'Because it's summer'.

× I use quickly for shopping because I like to wear comfortable clothes, so I buy comfortable clothes.

✓ I shop quickly because I like to wear comfortable clothes, so I buy comfortable items.

The original uses 'use quickly for shopping' which is ungrammatical. 'Shop' is the correct verb. Also repeating 'comfortable clothes' is redundant; 'comfortable items' or simply 'them' is better. Suggestion: 'I shop quickly because I like to wear comfortable clothes, so I buy them.'

× Yes, I wear different style of clothes on weekends and weekdays.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekends and weekdays.

The noun 'style' should be plural ('styles') to agree with 'different'. Use 'different styles of clothes' to express variety. Suggestion: 'different styles'.

× On weekends I wear dresses medis and on weekdays I wear casual and comfortable clothes.

✓ On weekends I wear dresses and on weekdays I wear casual, comfortable clothes.

The word 'medis' is unclear or misspelled. Likely intended 'midi dresses' or simply 'dresses'. Remove the unclear term and add a comma between 'casual' and 'comfortable' for correct adjective listing. Suggestion: if 'midi' was intended, use 'midi dresses'.

× I like black color clothes because it suits on my personality.

✓ I like black clothes because it suits my personality.

Do not use 'color' after 'black' when describing clothes; 'black clothes' is correct. Also 'suits on my personality' is incorrect: use 'suits my personality' (no 'on'). Suggestion: 'black clothes' and 'suits my personality'.