Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more natural: give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid fragments, and add one short supporting reason. Use linking words if adding details. Also limit to 3–4 sentences. Correct vocabulary (e.g., “T‑shirt” instead of “AT shirt”).

예시: I usually prefer casual clothes, such as T‑shirts and jeans, because they are comfortable. For example, I can move easily in them when I meet friends or do chores. They also suit my everyday style.

제안: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, “because” or “so”). Replace unclear phrases like “handle this dress” and “household choices.” Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they are practical. For example, I wear jeans and a T‑shirt when I go out with friends or do household chores because they are easy to wash and comfortable.

제안: Keep it concise and correct grammar: use a clear subject and verb agreement, and add a brief reason. Use one linking word (because) and provide a short example to support the claim.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they suit my personality and are very comfortable. For instance, I often choose a T‑shirt for casual outings as it keeps me relaxed.

제안: Give a direct answer and a specific reason or example. Avoid vague phrases; explain what makes you passionate (colour, style, occasion). Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words such as “because” or “so”.

예시: Yes, I do spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I care about colours and styles. For example, before an event I compare different outfits to make sure they suit the occasion.

제안: Be more specific and grammatically accurate. State the general pattern first, then give a clear condition or example using linking words like “but” or “however” and correct verb forms (e.g., “it depends”). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Usually I wear casual clothes during weekdays, such as jeans and shirts. However, on weekends I sometimes wear traditional clothes if I visit family or attend a celebration because they are more appropriate.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and two concise, specific reasons using linking words (for example, “because” and “also”). Correct grammar and phrasing (e.g., “it reminds me of the ocean” and “it reflects my personality”). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer light blue clothes because the colour is soothing and reminds me of the ocean. It also reflects my calm personality, so I feel relaxed wearing it.

× I usually prefer. Casual dress like AT shirt and jeans because I can easily handle this and I feel comfortable when I hung for.

✓ I usually prefer casual clothes like a T-shirt and jeans because they are easy to manage and I feel comfortable when I go out.

The original has sentence fragments and incorrect word choice. 'Prefer.' is a fragment; 'Casual dress' should be 'casual clothes'; 'AT shirt' likely 'a T-shirt'; 'this' is vague and should be 'them' or 'they'; 'hung for' is incorrect and should be 'when I go out'. Suggestion: combine fragments into one complete sentence, use correct nouns and pronouns, and use simple present for habitual actions. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× I prefer casual dress like AT shirt and jeans because I can easily handle this dress when I go with my friend outside and when I specially do my household choices.

✓ I prefer casual clothes like a T-shirt and jeans because they are easy to manage when I go out with my friends and when I do household chores.

Incorrect phrasing and word choice: 'casual dress' -> 'casual clothes'; 'AT shirt' -> 'a T-shirt'; 'handle this dress' -> 'manage them'; 'go with my friend outside' -> 'go out with my friends'; 'specially do my household choices' -> 'do household chores'. Use plural pronouns for clothes and correct collocations. Keep present simple for habitual actions. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× Yes I do wearing T-shirt because it suit my personality and it is comfortable for me.

✓ Yes, I do wear T-shirts because they suit my personality and are comfortable for me.

Mix of forms: 'do wearing' is incorrect; use 'do wear' or simply 'I wear'. 'T-shirt' should be plural for general statement: 'T-shirts' and 'it suit' should be 'they suit' for subject-verb agreement. Also use 'are comfortable' to agree with plural subject. Suggestion: use base verb after auxiliary 'do' and match pronoun number with noun. Grammar Problem Type ID: 2

× Of course, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am very passionate about my dresses and outfit.

✓ Of course, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am very passionate about my dresses and outfits.

Mostly correct tense, but 'outfit' should be plural 'outfits' to match 'dresses' and general plural reference. Ensure consistent plural forms when talking generally. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× Usually I wear casual dress but on weekend I prefer some traditional dresses because it's depend upon where I spend my weekend.

✓ Usually I wear casual clothes, but on weekends I prefer traditional dress because it depends on where I spend my weekend.

Errors: 'casual dress' -> 'casual clothes' for general habit; 'on weekend' -> 'on weekends' (habit) or 'at the weekend'; 'some traditional dresses' -> 'traditional dress' or 'traditional clothes' depending on meaning; 'it's depend upon' -> 'it depends on' (subject-verb agreement and correct preposition). Suggestion: use plural/singular consistently and correct verb agreement. Grammar Problem Type ID: 27

× I do like light blue color. There are lot of reason because uh first of it's soothing my eyes, it remind me ocean and it's roots my personality.

✓ I like light blue. There are a lot of reasons because, first, it soothes my eyes, it reminds me of the ocean, and it reflects my personality.

Several issues: 'I do like' is acceptable for emphasis but unnecessary; 'light blue color' -> 'light blue' or 'the color light blue'; 'There are lot of reason' -> 'There are a lot of reasons' (missing article 'a' and plural noun); 'it's soothing my eyes' -> 'it soothes my eyes' (use simple present, not continuous); 'it remind me ocean' -> 'it reminds me of the ocean' (third person singular + preposition 'of'); 'it's roots my personality' -> 'it reflects my personality' ('roots' incorrect verb). Suggestion: use correct articles, plural nouns, simple present for general truths, correct verbs and prepositions. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22}]}