Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but a little long and repetitive. Keep sentences concise (max 5) and use a topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' logically and correct small errors (e.g. 'white jeans' not 'white leg jeans').

예시: I prefer oversized clothes in neutral colours because they make me feel comfortable and low‑key. For example, I often wear a plain white T‑shirt and light‑wash jeans when I'm out casually.

제안: Good structure with contrast, but watch repetition and small pronunciation/transcription errors (e.g. 'Luke 1'). Be succinct: one topic sentence, one supporting reason, and a brief example. Use linking words correctly: 'however' or 'but' for contrast.

예시: I usually prefer casual clothes for everyday comfort, but I choose formal attire for meetings or events to appear more professional. For instance, I might wear a shirt and blazer to an interview.

제안: Answer is relevant but contains unclear phrases and mistakes ('AT shirt', 'blows'). Avoid unclear words and reduce redundancy. Give one clear reason and a brief example. Use correct collocations: 'go without wearing a shirt' doesn't fit — say 'I rarely not wear a T‑shirt'.

예시: Yes, T‑shirts are essential to my wardrobe because they are comfortable and versatile. I usually wear a plain T‑shirt daily, but for formal meetings I would choose a smart shirt or a dress.

제안: The idea is natural but speech is filled with hesitations and filler words. Practice fluent, concise replies: one clear topic sentence and one specific condition when you would spend more time choosing clothes. Remove fillers like 'uh', 'like', 'you know'.

예시: No, I usually decide quickly because my wardrobe is quite simple. I only spend more time choosing an outfit for special occasions, such as a friend's wedding or a birthday party.

제안: Your answer attempts to contrast periods but has tense and phrasing errors ('As it snow summer'). Stick to a clear present‑tense contrast: weekdays versus weekends, and give a specific example. Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

예시: These days I mostly wear casual clothes all the time, but when I was at school I had to dress more formally on weekdays. Now, for example, I wear jeans and a T‑shirt at the weekend and a smarter shirt if I have a formal meeting.

제안: Clear preference expressed but the answer trails off and repeats ideas. Finish sentences and avoid repetition. Provide one concise reason and a short example of favourite colours or a combination you wear.

예시: I prefer neutral tones because bright colours feel too attention‑grabbing. For example, I often wear black, white or grey because they are easy to match and feel calming.

× I usually wear something like basic T-shirt, white one and white leg jeans.

✓ I usually wear something like a basic T-shirt, a white one and white leg jeans.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before singular countable nouns 'basic T-shirt' and 'white one'. Use 'a' to refer to one item of a countable noun when it is not specific. Suggestion: add 'a' before each singular countable noun.

× On daily basis I would wear some basic casual clothes as it it's more comfortable and no need to wear something fashionable.

✓ On a daily basis I wear basic casual clothes as it's more comfortable and there is no need to wear something fashionable.

Use present simple to describe regular habits ('I wear' rather than 'I would wear'). Also add the article 'a' in the phrase 'on a daily basis' and use 'there is' for the impersonal clause 'there is no need'. Remove the extra 'it' in 'it it's'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and include necessary articles.

× But on events or or meetings I would wear something more formal, some formal attire to be more business like Luke 1.

✓ But at events or meetings I wear something more formal, some formal attire to be more business-like.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'events' and 'meetings' rather than 'on'. Remove the duplicated 'or'. Use present simple for habitual behaviour ('I wear'). 'Business-like' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. The trailing 'Luke 1' appears to be an error and has been removed. Suggestion: use 'at events or meetings' and present simple for habits.

× I can go without wearing AT shirt anywhere as only if I'm going to some more formal meeting I might wear blows or maybe a dress, but on everyday basis I wear only T-shirts.

✓ I can go without wearing a shirt anywhere; only if I'm going to a more formal meeting might I wear blouses or maybe a dress, but on an everyday basis I wear only T-shirts.

Several article errors: use 'a shirt', 'a more formal meeting' and 'an everyday basis'. 'AT' was capitalised incorrectly. 'Blows' is likely a typo for 'blouses'. Move 'might' to follow inversion 'might I' is optional; here 'I might wear' is also acceptable. Suggestion: correct articles, fix typos and use clear word order for modal verbs.

× I don't even have such a like, you know, overloaded, uh, wardrobe to think for hours what to choose.

✓ I don't even have an overloaded wardrobe to make me think for hours about what to choose.

The original sentence contains filler phrases and an awkward structure 'such a like' and 'to think for hours what to choose'. Rephrase to a concise structure: 'an overloaded wardrobe' and 'to make me think for hours about what to choose'. Suggestion: remove filler words and restructure the clause with 'about what to choose'.

× So it's usually the same thing, but only if I'm going to, uh, like special place, like a birthday.

✓ So it's usually the same thing, but only if I'm going to a special place, like a birthday party.

Use the article 'a' with 'special place' and add the noun 'party' after 'birthday' to clarify meaning. The preposition 'to' is fine with 'going to a place', but the original omitted 'a'. Suggestion: include articles and clarify noun phrases.

× As it snow summer I wear casual clothes all the time, but when it was time of school I obviously choose to wear more formal attire for it and on the weekends some casual clothes as it's more comfortable and there's no need to wear something formal.

✓ As it's summer I wear casual clothes all the time, but when it was the school term I obviously chose to wear more formal attire for it, and on weekends I wear casual clothes as it's more comfortable and there's no need to wear something formal.

Multiple tense and phrasing issues: 'As it snow summer' is incorrect; use 'As it's summer'. For past habitual during school, use past simple 'I chose' or 'I used to choose' – here 'I chose' suits the past reference. Use 'the school term' or 'school time' and 'on weekends' without 'the'. Maintain consistent tense within clauses. Suggestion: correct time expressions and use appropriate past/present tense depending on the time referred to.

× I prefer clothes in neutral tones actually, because in bright clothes like some neon or pink or green, I feel like it draws too much attention.

✓ I prefer clothes in neutral tones, actually, because bright clothes such as neon pink or green draw too much attention.

Avoid awkward phrasing 'in bright clothes like some neon or pink or green' and incorrect subject-verb agreement 'it draws' (plural 'clothes' require 'draw'). Rephrase to 'bright clothes such as neon pink or green draw too much attention'. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and use clearer phrasing such as 'such as' for examples.

× It looks too bright and my eyes just hurt looking at these colors.

✓ They look too bright and my eyes hurt when looking at those colours.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'colours' (plural), so use 'they'. Use 'those colours' to refer to colours mentioned earlier and 'hurt when looking at' is clearer than 'just hurt looking at'. Also adopt British spelling 'colours' per instruction. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and use consistent regional spelling where required.