Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence (I usually wear T-shirts and jeans.), then add one specific reason with a linking word (because or so). Avoid filler sounds (uh, umm) and incorrect word choices (use move instead of acting). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: I usually wear T-shirts and jeans. I prefer them because they are comfortable and allow me to move freely when I go out with friends.

제안: Good structure and clear contrast. Improve cohesion by using linking words (for example, however, whereas) and combine short fragments into fluent sentences. Correct small grammar errors ("clothes are" not "A clothes are"). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: It depends on the situation. For example, when I hang out with friends I prefer casual clothes because they are relaxing; however, for interviews or work I wear professional outfits to make a good impression.

제안: Avoid repetition and unclear vocabulary. Give one clear reason and one specific detail or example. Remove fillers and incorrect words ("genetic" is wrong here). Use a linking phrase to add the extra detail (and, also).

예시: Yes, I really like T-shirts. I have many because they are comfortable and let me move easily, and they also make me feel more youthful.

제안: Be grammatically accurate and concise. Correct tense and phrasing (use "I follow a minimalist style" and "I only have a few items of clothing"). Use a linking phrase to explain the result (so, therefore).

예시: No, I don't. I follow a minimalist style and only own a few items of clothing, so I rarely spend time choosing what to wear.

제안: Organize into two clear contrasting sentences and fix grammar and word order. Use linking words (whereas, while) and correct plural/singular forms (trousers, jeans). Avoid fillers and be specific with examples.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear smart, professional clothes such as shirts and tailored trousers for work, whereas at the weekend I usually wear casual items like jeans and T-shirts.

제안: Good clear answers and reasons. Improve accuracy and phrasing (use "neutral colors like black and white" and avoid repeating words). Add a brief linking phrase to explain consequence (so, therefore).

예시: I prefer neutral colors like black and white because they are easy to match and look more professional, so most of the clothes in my wardrobe are black or white.

× I like to wear T-shirt and Jean.

✓ I like to wear T-shirts and jeans.

The nouns 'T-shirt' and 'Jean' should be plural when speaking generally about types of clothing. Use plural forms 'T-shirts' and 'jeans' to indicate more than one or general preference. Also capitalize common nouns only as needed: 'jeans' is lowercase.

× Uh, that exactly, uh, how what I wear when, whenever I go out with, uh, my friend because it's, umm, make me feel comfortable and convenient for acting or moving.

✓ That is exactly what I wear whenever I go out with my friends because it makes me feel comfortable and allows me to move easily.

Original sentence has redundant fillers and incorrect word order. 'That exactly, how what I wear' is ungrammatical; correct structure is 'That is exactly what I wear'. 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match general outings. 'It makes me feel' needs third-person singular verb 'makes'. Use 'allows me to move easily' instead of 'convenient for acting or moving' for natural phrasing.

× I usually choose clothes. A clothes are based on the situation.

✓ I usually choose my clothes based on the situation.

Sentence split and article use are incorrect. 'A clothes' is ungrammatical because 'clothes' is a plural noun that does not take 'a'. Combine into one sentence and use possessive 'my clothes' to indicate selection based on context.

× For example, when I hang out with my friends, I prefer wearing comfortable casual clothes because they are relaxing.

✓ For example, when I hang out with my friends, I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they are comfortable.

Use parallel infinitive 'prefer to wear' rather than 'prefer wearing' for clarity. Add a comma between coordinate adjectives 'comfortable, casual'. 'Relaxing' describes something that relaxes others; better to say 'comfortable' to describe clothes. This corrects adjective choice rather than strict article issue but improves accuracy.

× But for an interview or work, I wear smart, professional outfits to make a good impression.

✓ For an interview or at work, I wear smart, professional outfits to make a good impression.

Original sentence is mostly correct but 'for an interview or work' is awkward; 'for work' or 'at work' is more natural. Minor preposition adjustment improves clarity.

× Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is acceptable. Keeping the present participle 'wearing' is natural after 'like'. (Included for completeness as it matches allowed problem types.)

× Uh, actually I have many kinds of T-shirts in my home because it's now, because they make me feel comfortable and convenient for umm, uh, for moving or acting and it's make me feel young and, uh, genetic.

✓ Actually I have many kinds of T-shirts at home because they make me feel comfortable and allow me to move easily, and they make me feel young and energetic.

Use 'at home' not 'in my home' for clothing possession. Remove 'it's now' which is unclear. 'They make me' requires plural verb 'make' (not 'it's make'). 'Convenient for moving' is unnatural; use 'allow me to move easily'. 'Genetic' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'energetic'.

× No, I don't. I'm chasing the minimalist style so I I had just a few kinds of clothes so whenever I have to I hang out with my friends or go to work. I don't spend much time to choose it.

✓ No, I don't. I prefer a minimalist style, so I have just a few kinds of clothes, and when I go out with my friends or go to work I don't spend much time choosing them.

'I'm chasing' is unnatural for habitual preference; use 'I prefer'. 'I had' is wrong tense; use present 'I have'. 'Whenever I have to I hang out' is ungrammatical — use 'when I go out'. 'Spend much time to choose it' should be 'spend much time choosing them' (gerund after 'spend time' and plural pronoun 'them' for 'clothes').

× Yes, I yeah, I usually wear smart professional clothes on now weekdays because I need to look, umm, professional for work.

✓ Yes, I usually wear smart, professional clothes on weekdays because I need to look professional for work.

Remove 'now' which is misplaced. Use 'on weekdays' for habitual action. Add comma between 'smart, professional'. Streamline fillers for clarity.

× For example, uh, shirt, you know, and uh, tailored trouser at the weekend every casual comfortable clothes like Jean AT shirt.

✓ For example, a shirt and tailored trousers during the week, and casual comfortable clothes like jeans and T-shirts at the weekend.

Original is fragmented and has wrong singular/plural forms. Use 'a shirt and tailored trousers' for workdays. 'At the weekend' for weekends, and plural forms 'jeans' and 'T-shirts'. Remove filler words and correct word order.

× I prefer neutral color light black and white because they are easy to match and look more professional.

✓ I prefer neutral colors like black and white because they are easy to match and look more professional.

'Neutral color light black and white' is ungrammatical. Use 'neutral colors like black and white'. 'Colors' plural is required when listing multiple colors.

× I tend to avoid avoid bright colors so most of the clothes in my wardrobe have black and white.

✓ I tend to avoid bright colors, so most of the clothes in my wardrobe are black or white.

Remove duplicate 'avoid'. 'Have black and white' is incorrect description; use 'are black or white' to describe the colors of the clothes. Add comma before 'so' for readability.