Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, simplify phrasing, fix grammar and avoid hesitation. Start with a concise statement of preference, then add one clear reason and one brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes with simple designs. For example, I usually choose soft cotton tops and loose trousers because they are easy to wear and suitable for everyday activities.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and avoid repeating phrases. Use more precise verbs and add a supporting reason with a linking word. Replace vague phrases ('no matter the design') with specific explanation.

예시: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes because they allow me to move freely and are quicker to put on when I'm in a hurry.

제안: Answer confidently and structure the sentence: a topic sentence plus a supporting example. Remove filler words and correct tense/grammar. Use linking words like 'for example' correctly.

예시: Yes, I do. For example, I often wear T-shirts both at home and when I go out because they are comfortable and versatile.

제안: Provide a clearer answer with one strong reason and avoid repetition. Use correct collocations ('spend time choosing clothes') and concise supporting detail.

예시: Sometimes I do. For instance, when I meet friends I spend extra time choosing an outfit because I want to look presentable and feel confident.

제안: Give a clear yes/no then explain briefly with contrasting details. Use linking words like 'while' or 'whereas' and avoid hesitations. Use natural phrases: 'on weekdays' and 'at weekends'.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear simple, comfortable clothes for school, whereas at weekends I choose more stylish outfits when I go out with friends.

제안: State your preference clearly, avoid hesitation and repetition, and give one brief reason. Consider adding a short example of how you use these colours.

예시: I like black, white and charcoal because they are easy to mix and match. For example, I often pair a white T-shirt with black jeans because it looks clean and effortless.

× Umm, I like actually I'm not.

✓ Umm, actually I don't mind.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper structure and a verb that matches the intended meaning. Replace with 'I don't mind' to express indifference. Keep adverb 'actually' before the main clause for natural word order.

× I don't matter the clothes, but I prefer the comfortable clothes and simple design clothes because it's it's easy to just wear.

✓ I don't mind the clothes, but I prefer comfortable clothes with simple designs because they're easy to wear.

'Don't matter' is incorrect; use 'don't mind'. Remove unnecessary definite articles before uncountable/plural general nouns ('comfortable clothes' not 'the comfortable clothes'). Use plural 'designs' and contract subject-verb agreement 'they're'. Also remove repeated 'it's' and simplify 'easy to just wear' to 'easy to wear'.

× I prefer comfortable clothes and casual clothes because it's easy to put, easy to put on, and no matter the design.

✓ I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they're easy to put on and the design doesn't matter.

'Easy to put' is incomplete; use 'easy to put on'. Combine adjectives with a comma 'comfortable, casual clothes'. 'No matter the design' is awkward; 'the design doesn't matter' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Absolutely because oh I who is wearing T-shirts for example, when I go out, when I go out or when I staying home, I always wearing T-shirts.

✓ Absolutely. For example, I wear T-shirts when I go out or when I stay at home; I always wear them.

Original contains extraneous words and wrong verb forms: 'who is wearing' is unnecessary, 'when I staying' should be 'when I stay', and 'always wearing' needs finite verb 'always wear'. Use pronoun 'them' to refer to T-shirts. Punctuate into sentences for clarity.

× For example, for example, when I met my friends, my girlfriends, I choose, I spend a lot of time to choose clothes because really, I want to look pretty.

✓ For example, when I meet my friends or my girlfriends, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I really want to look pretty.

Tense should match habitual present: use 'meet' not 'met' and 'spend' not 'choose' repeated. Use verb+ -ing 'choosing' after 'spend time'. Remove duplicate 'for example' and reorder adverb 'really' before the main clause.

× Yeah, I think I can say yes, because when the week, weekdays I just go school, so I wear comfortable and simple design clothes and when weekend I go, uh, I hang out so I wear more pretty design.

✓ Yes. On weekdays I just go to school, so I wear comfortable clothes with simple designs; on weekends I hang out, so I wear more attractive clothes.

Fix articles and prepositions: 'go to school' not 'go school'. Use 'on weekdays'/'on weekends'. 'Simple design clothes' and 'more pretty design' are incorrect adjective-noun orders; use 'clothes with simple designs' and 'more attractive clothes'. Remove filler words and split into clearer clauses.

× I pre I like black or white and charcoal color because I think it's easy to match match my outfit and I love the color because it's just simple and standard.

✓ I prefer black, white, and charcoal because I think they're easy to match with my outfit, and I love these colors because they're simple and classic.

'I pre I like' is a mistake; use 'I prefer'. List colors with commas and use plural pronoun 'they're' for colors. Use 'match with' or simply 'match' and avoid repetition. 'Standard' is unnatural here; 'classic' is a better adjective. Use 'these colors' to refer back.