Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Begin with a direct topic sentence (you did), then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word to explain what ‘comfortable’ and ‘presentable’ mean to you. Avoid vague adjectives alone. Keep it within 2–4 sentences total.

예시: I like to wear clothes that are comfortable and presentable. For example, I often choose soft cotton trousers and a neat shirt because they feel relaxed but still look tidy for meeting people.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is disfluent and repetitive. Use one clear conditional sentence, then give two brief, linked examples. Remove fillers and repeated words. Keep total sentences to three or fewer.

예시: It depends on the occasion: I wear comfortable clothes at home, casual clothes for quick outings like buying coffee, and smart clothes for work because I need to look professional.

제안: Good short response. Improve by adding one concise reason or a brief example linked with a connector (because/so) and correct a small grammar point (“in hot weather” not “on”).

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in hot weather because they are lightweight and keep me cool.

제안: Be careful with tense and article usage. Start with a clear topic sentence about how much time you spend, then give a specific example using a linking word (for example/for instance). Keep it concise and correct grammar (e.g., “I sometimes spend five minutes looking for a top that matches my outfit”).

예시: Yes, I do spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes. For example, I sometimes spend five minutes finding a top that matches my outfit.

제안: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and a little unclear. Use one clear sentence about weekdays and one about weekends, linked by a connector (whereas/but). Remove repeated words and the extra pronoun at the end.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear my work uniform, whereas on weekends I choose whatever suits the event I am attending.

제안: Good direct answer with a reason. Improve grammar agreement and specificity: use plural agreement (“they complement”) and give a brief example of shades or situations. Keep it to one or two sentences.

예시: I like to wear nude shades because they complement my skin tone; for instance, beige or light taupe tops make my complexion look warmer.

× Well, it depends on an event I'll be attending.

✓ Well, it depends on the event I'll be attending.

The phrase 'an event' is not wrong by itself but in context speakers usually refer to a specific upcoming event with 'the event'. Use 'the' to indicate a particular event being considered. Change 'an event' to 'the event' for clarity and naturalness.

× I would love to wear comfortable clothes whenever I'm inside the house, casual clothes when I when I I will go to buy coffee outside, smart clothes when I work.

✓ I would love to wear comfortable clothes when I'm at home, casual clothes when I go out to buy coffee, and smart clothes when I work.

Errors include repetition ('when I when I I'), incorrect phrase 'inside the house' (use 'at home'), and incorrect tense 'I will go' (simple present 'I go' for habitual or planned actions). Also join clauses with commas and 'and' for readability. Remove repeated words and use parallel structure.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, specially on hot weather.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in hot weather.

Use 'especially' (not 'specially') and the correct preposition is 'in hot weather' rather than 'on hot weather'. 'Especially' emphasizes degree, and 'in' is the standard collocation with 'weather'.

× Yes, I spend a lot choosing clothes.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

The phrase 'spend a lot' is incomplete; it requires an object such as 'a lot of time'. Add 'of time' to form the correct phrase 'spend a lot of time'.

× Sometimes I used to spend 5 minutes looking for a top that match my outfit.

✓ Sometimes I spend 5 minutes looking for a top that matches my outfit.

'Used to' suggests a past habitual action; context implies a present habit so use simple present 'spend'. Also subject-verb agreement: singular 'top' requires 'matches' not 'match'.

× Yes, I wear a different style of clothes on weekdays because I'm at work and I wear my uniform and on weekends it depends on the on the event I'll be attending me.

✓ Yes, I wear a different style of clothes on weekdays because I'm at work and wear my uniform; on weekends it depends on the event I'll be attending.

Remove the duplicated phrase 'on the' and the extraneous pronoun 'me'. Streamline by using a semicolon or conjunction. Ensure the clause 'it depends on the event I'll be attending' is complete and without extra pronouns.

× I like to wear nude clothes because it complements my skin tone.

✓ I like to wear nude clothes because they complement my skin tone.

Pronoun agreement error: 'clothes' is plural, so use 'they complement' instead of 'it complements'. Also 'nude clothes' is acceptable, ensure plural agreement throughout.