Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid redundancy. Add a specific detail or brief example and use a linking word if you expand. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer wearing casual clothes at home because they are comfortable and help me relax. For example, I usually wear sweatpants and a loose T-shirt in the evening, which lets me unwind after work.

제안: Clarify your idea and use correct vocabulary. Start with a direct statement of preference, explain why with one clear reason, and give a short specific example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and correct phrasing (e.g., 'smart clothes').

예시: I prefer smart clothes because they make me feel more confident when I speak to others. For example, I wear a suit when presenting at work, so my audience takes me more seriously.

제안: Use precise vocabulary and correct sentence structure. Give one clear reason and a concrete example. Avoid unclear phrases ('Frank teachers') and use linking words like 'because' or 'and'.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and affordable. For example, I often buy loose cotton T-shirts from local markets because they are breathable and inexpensive.

제안: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Begin with a direct answer, then briefly explain with one specific detail. Use correct articles and noun forms and a linking word if needed.

예시: Not really. I'm easygoing, so I usually pick basic casual clothes quickly; for instance, I often choose jeans and a plain shirt without spending much time deciding.

제안: Be concise and correct grammar. State the contrast clearly, use linking words such as 'because' or 'whereas', and give a brief specific example of each style.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear my company uniform because it is required, whereas on weekends I wear casual clothes like jeans and a hoodie.

제안: Correct vocabulary and phrasing (e.g., 'white coat' vs 'white clothes') and make your opinion concise. Give a clear reason and one brief example; avoid vague abstract statements.

예시: I prefer white clothing because it looks clean and professional. For example, I often choose a white shirt for interviews since it gives a neat and honest impression.

× I prefer to wear casual clothes when I stay at my home because it give me a comfort to feel relaxed.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes when I stay at home because they give me comfort and help me feel relaxed.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference: 'clothes' is plural so use 'they give' not 'it give'. 'a comfort' is unnatural here; use 'comfort' without article. Added 'help me' and corrected word order for natural English.

× Basically, my preference is smart cross. I feel that I look more confident for my speaking with others.

✓ Basically, I prefer smart clothing. I feel that I look more confident when speaking with others.

Word choice: 'cross' is incorrect; use 'clothing' or 'smart clothes'. Sentence structure: 'for my speaking with others' is awkward; use 'when speaking with others' to express the reason/time correctly.

× For example, when I need to speak in public, I feel that my attendees look me as.

✓ For example, when I need to speak in public, I feel that my audience looks at me.

Wrong noun ('attendees' vs 'audience') and incorrect verb/preposition: use 'look at me' not 'look me as'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'audience' can take singular 'looks' here.

× Yes, I do. For me, Frank teachers give me some relax. It's not so fit and actually it's quite easy to buy from many places.

✓ Yes, I do. For me, frank T-shirts make me feel relaxed. They are not very tight and are quite easy to buy from many places.

Word choice and articles: 'Frank teachers' and 'relax' are incorrect. Likely meant 'frank T-shirts' or 'plain T-shirts'; corrected to 'frank T-shirts' could be 'plain T-shirts'. 'Give me some relax' -> 'make me feel relaxed'. Pronoun agreement: 'They are' for plural 'T-shirts'. 'Not so fit' -> 'not very tight'.

× Not really, I'm a kind of easy going person so I can wear a basic casual clothes which are not so special.

✓ Not really. I'm the kind of easygoing person who can wear basic casual clothes that are not very special.

Article and noun agreement: use 'the kind of' and 'easygoing' as one word. 'A basic casual clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; change to 'basic casual clothes'. Use 'who' for people and 'that' for clothes; adjusted adjective placement.

× Definitely I need to wear different kind of clothes because on weekday I need to wear the uniform which given from my company.

✓ Definitely I need to wear different kinds of clothes because on weekdays I need to wear the uniform given by my company.

Pluralization: 'different kind of clothes' -> 'different kinds of clothes' or 'different kinds' and 'weekday' -> 'weekdays'. Passive/relative clause: 'uniform which given from my company' -> 'uniform given by my company'.

× For weekend I can wear a normal casual clothes.

✓ On weekends I can wear normal casual clothes.

Preposition and number: use 'on weekends' not 'for weekend'. Article/noun agreement: 'a normal casual clothes' is wrong—'clothes' is plural so no 'a'. Removed article and adjusted word order.

× I prefer white coat. It shows that you are honest and integrate into integrity.

✓ I prefer a white coat. It shows that you are honest and have integrity.

Article: 'white coat' as a single item needs 'a'. Word choice: 'integrate into integrity' is incorrect; use 'have integrity' to express honesty. Also 'It shows that you are honest and have integrity' is a natural phrasing.

× Many times people also believe that the color of clothes can reflect your habit.

✓ Many people also believe that the color of clothing can reflect your habits.

Word choice and plurality: 'color of clothes' -> 'color of clothing' or 'colors of clothes'. 'Your habit' should be plural 'your habits' to match general behavior. Simplified 'Many times people' to 'Many people' for natural English.