Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a brief topic sentence then add one specific reason or example. Use a linking word to connect ideas and expand slightly (max 3–4 sentences total).

예시: I prefer wearing comfortable clothes because they let me move freely and feel relaxed. For example, I often choose soft cotton trousers and loose tops when I’m studying at home, since they keep me comfortable during long hours.

제안: Start with a clear preference, then explain when you wear each style using linking words (e.g., "however", "for example"). Avoid repeating words. Keep it concise and specific.

예시: I prefer a mix of both, but I usually choose comfortable casual clothes for weekends. However, I wear smart clothes to formal events or presentations because they make a better impression.

제안: Provide a direct statement then add a specific situation or reason. Use a linking phrase like "for instance" or "such as" to give an example.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially on casual, laid-back days. For instance, I often wear a T-shirt and jeans when I hang out with friends or run errands.

제안: Answer directly, then give a concise reason and a brief example of what makes you spend time (e.g., deciding outfits for occasions). Use a linking word like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I like to coordinate outfits carefully. For example, I often try several combinations before going to school to make sure my clothes match the weather and the dress code.

제안: Make the topic sentence clear, then give two contrasting specific examples with a linking word like "whereas" or "while". Avoid filler phrases and incomplete clauses.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear smart or uniform-style clothes because school has a dress code, whereas on weekends I wear casual outfits like hoodies and jeans since I can be more relaxed.

제안: Answer with a clear preference (colour range), then explain why with a short specific detail or example. Use correct grammar (e.g., "complement" not "complements") and avoid ambiguity between 'warm clothes' and 'warm colours'.

예시: I prefer warm colours such as beige, olive and rust because they complement my skin tone and make me look healthier. For example, I often choose a rust-coloured sweater when I want a more flattering look.

× I like wearing comfortable clothes.

✓ I like wearing comfortable clothes.

No correction needed; sentence correctly uses the verb like + -ing to express a general preference. Keep as is.

× I like to wear a mix of both comfortable and casual and smart clothes.

✓ I like to wear a mix of comfortable, casual, and smart clothes.

The original uses redundant conjunctions ('both' with three items and 'and' repeated). This is not a verb form error but clarity and parallelism. Keep verb form 'like to wear' which is correct; improve coordination and punctuation for clarity by listing items with commas.

× I like wearing T-shirts on more casual laid back days.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts on more casual, laid-back days.

Verb + -ing form 'like wearing' is correct. The grammatical issues are omission of a hyphen in the compound adjective 'laid-back' and a missing comma between coordinate adjectives. Hyphenate 'laid-back' and add a comma for clarity.

× Yes, unfortunately I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I'm always thinking about what to wear.

✓ Yes, unfortunately I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am always thinking about what to wear.

The original uses contraction 'I'm' which is acceptable in speech; however for clear written correction expand to 'I am' to match formal style. The tense and verb forms are correct (present simple for habitual action and present continuous for ongoing thought). No structural change needed beyond formality.

× Yes I do wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and on weekends because on weekdays I do go to school and that there is a dress code compared to weekends I could wear anything I want and I feel like.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends because I go to school on weekdays and there is a dress code, whereas on weekends I can wear whatever I want.

Multiple issues: unnecessary emphatic 'do', awkward 'that there is', incorrect modal 'could' for habitual ability, and unfinished ending 'I feel like'. Revised sentence fixes sentence structure, removes redundancy, uses 'whereas' to contrast, uses simple present for habitual actions, and uses 'can' instead of 'could'.

× I like wearing warm clothes that complements my skin tone.

✓ I like wearing warm clothes that complement my skin tone.

Relative clause subject 'clothes' is plural, so the verb should be 'complement' (plural) not 'complements' (singular). Keep 'like wearing' which is correct; change verb form for subject-verb agreement.