Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details and avoid redundancy. Correct small mistakes like "to wearing" → "wearing" and remove filler words such as "actually."

예시: I like wearing chic clothes most of the time, but I also enjoy casual styles depending on my mood. For example, I often choose a sleek blazer and tailored trousers for work, while I pick jeans and a simple sweater when I want to relax. I also prefer dark colors like black because they look elegant and easy to match.

제안: Be concise and avoid repeating phrases. Give a clear preference in the topic sentence, then briefly explain with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like "however" to contrast.

예시: I prefer smart clothes overall because they look more professional and chic; however, I also wear casual items at home. For instance, I choose a smart dress or blazer for meetings, but I switch to jeans and a sweatshirt for weekends.

제안: Avoid overly negative or personal phrasing and correct grammar. Give a brief direct answer, then explain politely and provide an alternative. Keep it within two to three sentences and use linking words such as "because" or "so."

예시: Not really, because T-shirts feel too casual for me and I don't like how they fit my body. Instead, I prefer fitted shirts or blouses that give a more polished silhouette.

제안: Make sentences grammatically correct and more concise. Give one clear reason why it takes time and mention one specific strategy to improve. Use linking words like "because" and "so."

예시: Yes, I do, because I like to coordinate outfits carefully and that can be time-consuming. To avoid being late, I now lay out outfits the night before and that saves me time in the morning.

제안: Avoid exaggerated or awkward phrases like "no choice than" and "people should be impressed by me." State the contrast clearly and use natural expressions to explain why. Keep it polite and specific.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually dress casually for comfort, such as jeans and a shirt, but on weekends I tend to wear smarter outfits for events or going out. For example, I might wear a nice dress or blazer when meeting friends or attending dinners.

제안: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and then list specific colors with reasons. Avoid repeating the same points and use linking words such as "for example" or "however."

예시: I usually prefer dark, neutral colors, especially black and navy blue, because they make me feel confident and are easy to match. However, I sometimes wear white for a fresh look, and when I'm in a very cheerful mood I might choose pink for a pop of color.

× I really like to wear chic clothes but I also like being casual.

✓ I really like to wear chic clothes, but I also like being casual.

No grammatical change needed except adding a comma: the gerund 'being' is correct after 'like'. Suggestion: add a comma before 'but' to improve sentence clarity.

× It depends on my mood actually and also I like to wearing black in my outfits.

✓ It depends on my mood actually, and also I like wearing black in my outfits.

'Like' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to'. The phrase 'to wearing' is incorrect; use 'like wearing'. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity.

× I like both of them but if I need to choose one of them I would prefer smart clothes because they are more chic than casual ones.

✓ I like both, but if I had to choose one I would prefer smart clothes because they are chicer than casual ones.

'Both of them' and 'one of them' are wordy; 'both' and 'one' are sufficient. The conditional should use 'had to choose' or 'needed to choose' for hypothetical preference; using 'would' pairs with past form. Also use comparative adjective 'chicer' rather than 'more chic'.

× No, I don't like wearing T-shirts because they're too casual and they make me feel like I'm fat and I don't like that look so I don't prefer wearing T-shirt in my life.

✓ No, I don't like wearing T-shirts because they're too casual and they make me feel fat, and I don't like that look, so I don't prefer wearing T-shirts in my life.

Plural consistency: use 'T-shirts' throughout. 'Make me feel like I'm fat' is wordy; 'make me feel fat' is natural. Add commas to separate clauses. 'Prefer wearing T-shirt' should be 'prefer wearing T-shirts'.

× Choosing clothes take a lot from my daily time and sometimes the situation makes me late for the events I need to go.

✓ Choosing clothes takes a lot of my daily time, and sometimes it makes me late for events I need to attend.

'Choosing clothes' is a singular gerund phrase, so the verb should be 'takes' not 'take'. 'Take a lot from my daily time' is unnatural; use 'takes a lot of my daily time'. 'The situation makes me late for the events I need to go' is awkward; use 'it makes me late for events I need to attend.'

× Somehow I can manage the situations, but I really need to be quicker than that.

✓ Somehow I can manage the situations, but I really need to be quicker.

'Quicker than that' is informal and vague; removing 'than that' makes the sentence clearer. The rest is grammatically acceptable.

× Yes, on weekdays I prefer more casual clothes, but on weekends I have no choice than wearing smart clothes, because I would like to being seen fabulous from the outside and people should be impressed by me.

✓ Yes, on weekdays I prefer more casual clothes, but on weekends I have no choice but to wear smart clothes, because I would like to be seen as fabulous from the outside, and I want people to be impressed by me.

'No choice than' is incorrect; 'no choice but to' is the correct idiom followed by the base verb. Use 'to wear' not 'wearing' after 'but to'. 'Would like to being seen' is wrong; use 'would like to be seen'. Add 'as' for 'seen as fabulous'. Replace 'people should be impressed by me' with 'I want people to be impressed by me' for naturalness.

× So at the weekends I especially wear smart clothes.

✓ So at the weekends I especially wear smart clothes.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. 'At the weekends' and 'especially' placement are acceptable; can also say 'On weekends I especially wear smart clothes.'

× I usually prefer just one color in my outfits.

✓ I usually prefer just one color in my outfits.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.

× When I feel colorful I don't feel so comfortable so I prefer dark colors like black or Navy blue.

✓ When I feel colorful, I don't feel comfortable, so I prefer dark colors like black or navy blue.

Add commas to separate clauses. 'Don't feel so comfortable' is fine but 'don't feel comfortable' is more natural. 'Navy' should be lowercase when used as a color adjective.

× But sometimes I can wear white too.

✓ But sometimes I wear white too.

'Can wear' suggests ability; simple present 'I wear' fits habitual preference better.

× If I feel really happy I can wear pink too.

✓ If I feel really happy, I wear pink too.

For habits and preferences, simple present is more natural than 'can wear'. Add comma after the conditional clause.

× But if I want to feel confident I definitely prefer black.

✓ But if I want to feel confident, I definitely prefer black.

Add comma after the conditional clause. Tense and verb forms are correct.

× I usually wear black.

✓ I usually wear black.

Sentence is correct. No change needed.