Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve naturalness and provide one specific detail to enrich it. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and use a linking phrase to add a reason or example.

예시: I prefer to wear T-shirts and jeans because they’re comfortable for everyday activities. For example, I usually wear them when I run errands or meet friends, since they’re easy to move in and don’t need much effort to style.

제안: Good direct answer with a clear reason. To increase score, add a brief contrast or specific situation and a linking word for coherence. Avoid repeating phrases like “comfortable clothes” too often.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes because they let me move freely. For instance, when I have a busy day of errands or casual meetups, casual clothes are much more practical.

제안: Your answer covers reasons but contains some language errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., “charts”, “goods affordable styles”). Improve vocabulary choice and grammar, and keep it within 2–3 sentences using a linking word.

예시: Yes, I wear T-shirts almost every day because they’re comfortable and versatile. They’re easy to mix and match with jeans or chinos, and I can usually find affordable, good-quality styles in many shops.

제안: Answer is understandable but has grammar mistakes and unclear pronoun use (“he”). Make the structure direct: topic sentence then brief supporting detail with linking words. Be specific about what influences your decision and avoid extra words.

예시: It depends: if I find something that fits me well and is reasonably priced, I decide quickly. However, if I’m shopping for a special occasion, I might take longer to compare options and styles.

제안: Good contrast between weekdays and weekends. Fix minor errors ("AT shirt" unclear) and reduce redundancy. Use a linking word to make the contrast smoother and give a short example of a weekend outfit.

예시: Yes. During weekdays I usually wear a suit or other formal clothes because my job requires a professional appearance. In contrast, at the weekend I wear casual items like jeans and a T-shirt, which are more comfortable for relaxing or meeting friends.

제안: Clear preference and reason. Improve natural phrasing and avoid wordiness. Add a brief linking phrase and an extra specific example (e.g., accessories or occasions when you wear those colours).

예시: I usually choose black or navy because darker colours make me look slimmer. For example, I often wear a navy shirt for work and a black jacket for evenings out.

× They are easy to mix and match with jeans or charts and I can find goods affordable styles in many shops.

✓ They are easy to mix and match with jeans or shorts, and I can find good, affordable styles in many shops.

'charts' is a misspelling; intended word 'shorts' (plural) should be used. 'goods affordable styles' has incorrect word order and word choice; use 'good, affordable styles'. Use a comma before 'and' to join independent clauses. Improve vocabulary and adjective order: 'good' and 'affordable' modify 'styles', with 'good' preceding 'affordable' or you can omit 'good'.

× It depends if he found the one that fit with me with a good price, I will choose it in a short time.

✓ It depends: if I find one that fits me at a good price, I will choose it quickly.

The sentence mixes past and future tenses and has pronoun agreement issues. Use present simple in the conditional clause ('if I find') and present simple for state ('fits me'), then future ('I will choose'). Use correct pronoun 'I' not 'he'. Use 'at a good price' and 'quickly' instead of 'in a short time' for natural phrasing. Use a colon or comma to separate clauses correctly.

× It depends if he found the one that fit with me with a good price, I will choose it in a short time.

✓ It depends: if I find one that fits me at a good price, I will choose it quickly.

The original uses 'he' incorrectly when the speaker refers to themselves; correct pronoun is 'I'. Also 'fit with me' is unnatural; use 'fits me'. Pronoun and verb must agree.

× On weekends I prefer casual clothes like jeans and AT shirt because they are more comfortable and relaxed.

✓ On weekends I prefer casual clothes like jeans and a T-shirt because they are more comfortable and relaxed.

'AT shirt' appears to be a typo; correct form is 'a T-shirt'. Include the indefinite article 'a' before singular countable noun 'T-shirt'.

× I prefer to wear T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable to wear for everyday activities.

✓ I prefer to wear T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable for everyday activities.

'Comfortable to wear for' is wordy; 'comfortable for' is more natural. Removing 'to wear' avoids redundancy.

× It depends if he found the one that fit with me with a good price, I will choose it in a short time.

✓ It depends: if I find one that fits me at a good price, I will choose it quickly.

Use 'fits' for third person singular subject 'one'. The sentence originally used 'fit' (base form) after 'one' which requires 'fits'. Also maintain subject-verb agreement through the clause.

× I always choose the clothes that in black color or Navy color because I feel like it makes me look slimmer than the lighter color.

✓ I always choose clothes in black or navy because I feel they make me look slimmer than lighter colors.

Do not use 'that in black color' — use 'in black' or 'in black color'. 'Navy' should be lowercase unless part of a name. Use 'they' to refer to 'clothes' (plural) and 'lighter colors' (plural) for comparison. Also 'feel like it makes me' is wordy; 'feel they make me' is clearer.