Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, avoid filler words (uh) and redundancies, and add one specific example to support your point. Use a clear topic sentence followed by a supporting detail and a short reason. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer breezy, lightweight clothes because the Philippines is very hot. For example, I often wear linen shirts and cotton shorts which help me stay cool and comfortable all day.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one clear reason and a brief example. Reduce repetition (‘use it’ twice) and avoid informal contractions like 'gonna'.

예시: I prefer smart clothes because they serve a dual purpose for work and social occasions. For instance, I usually wear a polo shirt and chinos so I look professional at the office and presentable when meeting friends.

제안: Combine short fragmented sentences into a smooth response and remove hesitations/repetition. Provide a concise reason why you avoid T-shirts and one specific alternative you prefer.

예시: Not really — I only wear T-shirts at home because I want to appear more professional in public. Outside I usually choose collared polo shirts, which look smart but are still comfortable.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear explanation with a specific detail. Avoid vague phrases like 'certain set' — name one aspect (style, brand) and keep sentences connected with linking words.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I stick to one style and a few trusted brands. Therefore, when I buy clothes I usually pick the same models in different colours.

제안: Provide a clearer topic sentence and shorten the explanation. Use a linking word to introduce your reason and correct grammar ('I'd rather' not 'I rather'). Offer a brief example of what you wear both weekdays and weekends.

예시: No, I wear similar smart clothes every day because I'd rather look professional than casual. For example, I usually wear polos and chinos whether it's a weekday or the weekend.

제안: Remove hesitations, capitalize colour names only if proper nouns not necessary, and give one short additional detail about why those colours suit you (e.g., look slimmer, easy to match). Keep it to two sentences.

예시: I prefer dark colours such as navy blue, gray and dark green because they match my skin tone. They also hide stains and are easy to pair with different trousers.

× I like to wear clothes that are, uh, breezy and cool because here in the Philippines it's quite hot, so if you wear, uh, thick clothes, you're gonna sweat a lot.

✓ I like to wear clothes that are breezy and cool because here in the Philippines it's quite hot, so if you wear thick clothes, you are going to sweat a lot.

The sentence uses informal contraction 'gonna' which is nonstandard in spoken formal responses; replace with 'are going to' for correct future construction. Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity. Present tense description is otherwise correct; ensure consistency in register.

× I tend to wear smart clothes because it's a dual purpose.

✓ I tend to wear smart clothes because they serve a dual purpose.

The original uses 'it's' (it is) with 'a dual purpose' to refer to clothes (plural). This is a pronoun/reference issue and requires plural agreement. Changing to 'they serve a dual purpose' uses correct plural pronoun and a verb phrase that matches the plural noun 'clothes'.

× I can use it for work and use it on my off days.

✓ I can wear them for work and on my days off.

The sentence uses the singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'clothes' (plural). Replace with plural pronoun and natural verb 'wear'. Also 'off days' is more commonly 'days off' in English word order.

× And it's pretty nice to be looking smart all the time, so when you meet other people, you're gonna look at least a bit more professional.

✓ And it's nice to look smart all the time, so when you meet other people, you will look at least a bit more professional.

Replace informal progressive 'to be looking' with simple infinitive 'to look' for general habitual meaning. Replace 'gonna' with 'will' for standard future modal usage. This keeps tense and modality appropriate for general statements about appearance.

× Not so much. I only wear T-shirts when I'm at home. Outside I wear polo shirts or polos that have collars in them.

✓ Not so much. I only wear T-shirts when I'm at home. Outside, I wear polo shirts that have collars.

'Polos that have collars in them' is wordy and uses an unnecessary prepositional phrase. Simplify to 'polo shirts that have collars' and include a comma after 'Outside' for clarity. No change in tense.

× So at least I look professional.

✓ This way I at least look professional.

Reordering improves flow and connects it to the previous sentence. Original is understandable but somewhat fragmentary; adjusting word order yields a more natural spoken sentence.

× Because it's it's categorized as a smart kind of outfit.

✓ Because it is categorized as a smart type of outfit.

Remove duplicated 'it's' and replace informal 'kind of' with 'type of' for clarity. Use full 'it is' for formality and clarity.

× No, for years now I have a certain set of style and a certain set of brand, so I don't have any problems buying new clothes.

✓ No, for years now I have had a certain style and preferred brands, so I don't have any problems buying new clothes.

Use present perfect 'have had' to indicate a situation continuing from past to present. 'A certain set of style' is ungrammatical; use 'a certain style' or 'certain styles'. 'A certain set of brand' should be 'preferred brands' for natural expression.

× I just buy the same one that I have right now.

✓ I just buy the same ones that I have right now.

Refers to 'clothes' (plural), so 'one' should be 'ones' to agree in number. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× No, I pretty much wear the same type of clothes every day, even in my off days because I rather look smart than to be seen on a casual day with a casual outfit.

✓ No, I pretty much wear the same type of clothes every day, even on my days off, because I would rather look smart than be seen in a casual outfit.

Use 'on my days off' (preposition and plural). 'I rather' is incorrect; use 'I would rather'. After 'rather' follow base form 'be', not 'to be seen'. Also 'on a casual day with a casual outfit' is redundant; simplify to 'in a casual outfit'.

× I like to wear dark colored shirts like Navy blue, uh, Gray and dark green because it matches my skin tone very well.

✓ I like to wear dark-colored shirts like navy blue, gray, and dark green because they match my skin tone very well.

Use hyphen in 'dark-colored' as a compound adjective. Color names should be lowercased unless proper nouns. 'It matches' is incorrect because 'shirts' is plural; use 'they match' for subject-verb agreement. Remove filler 'uh' and add commas between colors.