Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct topic sentence then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid hesitation words and unnecessary gender remark unless relevant. Keep to 1–3 sentences and use linking words when adding detail.

예시: I usually wear neutral-coloured clothes because they are versatile and easy to match. For example, I often choose grey or navy trousers and simple tops for work or casual outings.

제안: Respond directly with a clear preference, then add a concise reason and a brief example. Avoid meta-comments like 'Good job!' and keep to natural phrasing. Use a linking word (because, so, for example) to connect your ideas.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I value ease of movement and simplicity. For example, I usually wear relaxed jeans and a soft sweater when I'm running errands or meeting friends.

제안: Give a clear, grammatical answer and then add a specific reason or example. Avoid fillers and incorrect phrasing (e.g., 'even if the more short T-shirts'). Use a linking word to add detail.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to style. For example, I often pair a plain short-sleeved T-shirt with jeans in summer.

제안: Answer directly, use correct tense and reduce hesitations. Give a reason and an example using linking words. For instance, say whether you usually spend time and explain exceptions. Keep sentences short and clear.

예시: No, I don't usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I prefer simple outfits. However, if I'm going to a special event, I will plan my outfit ahead to look more formal.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence then briefly explain exceptions with a linking word. Correct verb forms and word order are important. Keep to two sentences max.

예시: Generally no, I don't wear very different styles because I like comfortable clothes most of the time. But if I have a formal meeting on a weekday, I will wear smarter clothes compared to my relaxed weekend outfits.

제안: Answer clearly and avoid repetition. Give specific colours you prefer and explain why, using linking words. Use correct adjectives (e.g., 'flattering' instead of 'fit our').

예시: I like a range of colours, especially blue and green because they suit my skin tone. I choose colours that look flattering and make me feel confident.

× OK, I'm a woman, but I prefer, uh, more neutral clothes.

✓ OK, I'm a woman, but I prefer more neutral clothes.

Unnecessary commas around 'uh' interrupt flow; pronoun use is fine but remove filler punctuation. Suggestion: speak 'I prefer more neutral clothes.' to be concise and grammatically correct.

× I like wearing T-shirts and even if the more short T-shirts, I really like it.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts, even shorter ones; I really like them.

'More short' is incorrect comparative formation; use 'shorter' and refer to plural 'T-shirts' with 'them' rather than 'it'. Suggestion: use comparative adjective 'shorter' and match pronoun number.

× MMM not not many times, but it's like depends on where I to go.

✓ Not many times; it depends on where I am going.

Sentence had duplicated negation 'not not' and an incorrect infinitive 'where I to go.' Use simple adverbial phrase 'Not many times' and correct present continuous 'where I am going' for planned actions.

× And uh, if I will go to the school, I will random choose the uh, to, uh, comfortable.

✓ And if I go to school, I will randomly choose something comfortable.

In conditional sentences, use present tense in the 'if' clause, not 'will'. 'Random choose' is incorrect; use adverb 'randomly choose' and 'something comfortable' to complete the idea.

× MMM I will say no and it's depends on where I to go.

✓ I'd say no; it depends on where I am going.

Using 'will' for habitual or opinion 'I'd say' is more natural. 'It's depends' is incorrect verb form; use 'it depends'. Fix 'where I to go' to 'where I am going' for intended meaning.

× I like, uh, I like so many colors. If it can make me look more fit our or pretty, it's all.

✓ I like many colors. If it can make me look fitter or prettier, I'll wear it.

'So many colors' is informal but acceptable; streamlined to 'many colors'. 'Fit our' is incorrect — intended comparative 'fitter'. 'Pretty' should be comparative 'prettier' when comparing. Also complete sentence with 'I'll wear it' for clarity.