Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid vague phrases and tense errors. Use linking words (for example, when/if) to make the answer coherent.

예시: I usually wear T-shirts and trousers. For example, I wear casual T-shirts with jeans when I hang out with friends, and I choose formal shirts and trousers for parties or special events.

제안: Answer directly and avoid repeating. Use a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give a brief reason and one specific example. Correct grammar: subject-verb agreement and verb forms. Use linking words like because or so.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed. For instance, I usually wear a cotton T-shirt and chinos when I meet friends or go to class because they are easy to move in and cool in warm weather.

제안: Give a direct answer with a clear frequency word and add a specific detail. Reduce hesitations and combine related ideas into one or two sentences. Use linking words such as but or and.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts but I don't wear them every day. I often wear a traditional kurta-kameez for daily life, and reserve T-shirts for casual outings or weekends.

제안: Use correct tense and expand slightly to explain why. Provide one reason and an example to support your answer. Avoid short fragmented sentences; combine into a clear, natural response.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer items that fit well. For example, I usually pick an outfit quickly in the morning — a simple T-shirt and trousers — so I can get ready fast.

제안: Answer directly then contrast weekdays and weekends with a linking word (while/however). Be specific about differences and give one example. Eliminate filler words and correct word order.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear simple, practical clothes for work or study, while on weekends I dress more stylishly — for example, I might wear a fashionable shirt and jeans when I go out with friends.

제안: Give a direct preference, explain the reason clearly, and add a short example. Use correct tense and definite article use (e.g., 'suits me' not 'suited me').

예시: I prefer black and white because they suit me and are easy to match. For example, I often wear a white shirt with black trousers, and my friends often compliment that outfit.

× Usually I like to wear T-shirt trouser.

✓ Usually I like to wear T-shirts and trousers.

The sentence uses singular forms 'T-shirt' and 'trouser' when referring generally to types of clothing; English requires plural nouns for general preferences. Use 'T-shirts' and 'trousers' to indicate clothing items in general. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when speaking about items in general (I like to wear T-shirts and trousers).

× When I go for party I wear formal and when I go with my friends then I used to wear anything like which.

✓ When I go to parties I wear formal clothes, and when I go out with my friends I usually wear whatever I like.

Problems: 'go for party' should be 'go to parties' (preposition and plural), 'wear formal' requires 'formal clothes', and 'used to' is incorrect here because it suggests a past habit; the speaker means a present habit, so use 'usually' or 'usually wear'. Also 'anything like which' is ungrammatical; replace with 'whatever I like'. Suggestion: Use correct preposition 'to', pluralize 'parties' for general statements, and use 'usually' for habitual present actions.

× Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes when I go with the UH with my friend and I go outside with my uh girlfriend or classmates.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes when I go out with my friend, my girlfriend, or my classmates.

Errors: redundant filler 'UH', incorrect repetition 'go with the UH with my friend', and awkward conjunctions. 'Go outside with' is better as 'go out with'. Use commas to separate items in a list and consistent possessive pronouns. Suggestion: Remove fillers, keep parallel structure for list items ('my friend, my girlfriend, or my classmates').

× Then I used to wear T-shirt and trouser because it's make me comfortable.

✓ Then I usually wear T-shirts and trousers because they make me comfortable.

'Used to' implies past habitual action; for present habit use 'usually wear'. 'T-shirt and trouser' should be plural. 'It's make' is incorrect: 'it' does not agree with plural 'T-shirts and trousers', and verb form should be 'make' for plural subject; use 'they make'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns and match subject and verb (they make), and use 'usually' for present habits.

× Yes, I wear T-shirt occasionally.

✓ Yes, I wear T-shirts occasionally.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statement. The verb 'wear' is correct for first person singular. Ensure noun form matches general reference. Suggestion: Use plural when referring to items generally.

× I also use my uh, Kurta Kamis on everyday basis.

✓ I also wear my kurta and camis on an everyday basis.

Problems: 'use' is less natural than 'wear' for clothing. 'Kurta Kamis' is unclear; separate items 'kurta and camis'. 'On everyday basis' needs article 'an' and hyphenated adjective 'everyday' works as 'everyday basis' but 'on an everyday basis' is correct. Suggestion: Use 'wear' for clothing and include the article 'an' for 'on an everyday basis'. Clarify item names and separate them with 'and' if two items are meant.

× No, I didn't. Anything fit on my body. I just wear it.

✓ No, I don't. Anything that fits my body, I just wear.

Context asks about present habit; 'No, I didn't' is wrong tense. Use 'I don't'. 'Anything fit' lacks agreement and relative pronoun; use 'anything that fits'. Also adjust word order for natural English. Suggestion: Use present tense for current habits and ensure subject-verb agreement ('fits').

× When Now whenever I go outside with my friends, then I, uh, use different type of clothes.

✓ Whenever I go out with my friends, I wear different types of clothes.

Remove filler 'Now' and 'then', use 'go out' not 'go outside', 'use' is unnatural for clothing—use 'wear', and pluralize 'type' to 'types' when generalizing. Suggestion: Simplify to 'Whenever I go out with my friends, I wear different types of clothes.'

× I like a bit of uh, stylish sometime on weekends and uh, weekdays when I go for outing.

✓ I like to be a bit stylish sometimes on weekends and weekdays when I go out.

Problems: 'a bit of stylish' is ungrammatical; use 'be a bit stylish' or 'a bit of style'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Go for outing' should be 'go out' or 'go on outings'. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' for frequency and 'be stylish' or 'wear stylish clothes'.

× I prefer to wear black and white because this combination suited me well and my friends always complimented on me when I wear black and white.

✓ I prefer to wear black and white because this combination suits me well, and my friends always compliment me when I wear black and white.

Tense issues: 'suited' and 'complimented' are past; the speaker means present general truth, so use present 'suits' and 'compliment'. 'Complimented on me' is incorrect—use 'compliment me'. Ensure consistent present tense for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use present tense for general truths and correct verb patterns ('compliment me').