Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and direct: start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I usually wear my school uniform and casual clothes such as T‑shirts and jeans.”). Avoid repetition about uniforms and reduce filler. Add one specific detail to support your preference, using a linking word (e.g. “because” or “so”).

예시: I usually wear my school uniform during term time. For leisure I prefer T‑shirts and jeans, and as a dancer I often choose baggy clothes because they allow me to move freely.

제안: Give a clearer, structured response: start with a direct statement of preference, then use linking words to show contrast (e.g. “however”, “but”). Be specific about what you call “smart” and avoid hesitations. Limit to two supporting sentences.

예시: It depends, but I generally prefer comfortable clothes for everyday activities. However, for special outings like visiting Disneyland or taking photos I dress smarter by wearing a nice blouse or fitted jeans so I look presentable.

제안: Correct vocabulary and finish your thought: use the word “fabrics” instead of “tissues” and complete the final sentence. Use one linking word to list reasons (e.g. “because” and “and”). Provide a concise specific example of a favorite T‑shirt.

예시: Yes, I like T‑shirts because they come in many fabrics and prints. For example, I often wear striped cotton T‑shirts since they are comfortable and look simple yet stylish.

제안: Be more precise and avoid repeated hedges (“maybe”, “like”). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give concrete times and an example. Use linking words (e.g. “however” or “but”) to contrast casual and formal situations.

예시: It depends on the occasion. For quick errands I usually pick something in 30 seconds, but for formal events I spend at least 20–30 minutes selecting an outfit that fits the dress code.

제안: Be concise and correct minor errors (e.g. “T‑shirt” not “AT shirt”). Start with a direct statement about the difference, then give two clear examples (weekday vs weekend). Remove filler words and repetitive phrases.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually change into pajamas or simple home clothes after school. At the weekend I wear casual outfits like T‑shirts and baggy jeans when I go out.

제안: Make the answer more fluent and finish the final contrast. Use precise vocabulary and avoid fillers (“umm”, “like”). Start with a topic sentence naming preferred colours, then give a reason and a brief contrast using a linking word like “however”.

예시: I prefer neutral colours such as black, white, gray, brown and beige because they are easy to mix with accessories. However, I avoid very bright colours like red or yellow since they draw too much attention.

× For school, which is where I go every day, I wear my uniform.

✓ For school, which is where I go every day, there I wear my uniform.

The original sentence is understandable but slightly awkward; the phrase 'I wear my uniform' is fine, however in contexts introducing a place it can be clearer to use 'there' with 'wear' to show existence/occurrence at a place. Suggestion: use 'there I wear my uniform' or simply 'I wear my uniform to school' for natural phrasing.

× If I'm seeing my friend or if me and my friend are going to take pictures or we're going to somewhere special maybe like Disneyland or go shopping, I would like to wear more smart clothes and casual clothes I guess.

✓ If I'm seeing my friend or if my friend and I are going to take pictures or we're going somewhere special, maybe Disneyland or going shopping, I would like to wear smarter clothes, I guess.

Pronoun order should be 'my friend and I' not 'me and my friend'. Also use 'go somewhere' (not 'go to somewhere') and comparative adjective 'smarter' is appropriate. Use parallel structure for activities and remove redundant 'and casual clothes' which conflicted with 'smarter'.

× If I'm just going down for a walk or for like a brunch, I would like to wear more comfortable.

✓ If I'm just going for a walk or to a brunch, I would like to wear more comfortable clothes.

Verb phrase should be 'going for a walk' and 'to a brunch' (or 'out for brunch'). 'Wear more comfortable' is incomplete; a noun 'clothes' or an adjective phrase 'more comfortable clothes' is needed. Also avoid colloquial filler 'like' in formal corrections.

× I like wearing T-shirts because there is a large variety of tissues that you can choose from.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts because there is a large variety of fabrics that you can choose from.

The word 'tissues' is incorrect in this context; the correct noun is 'fabric' or 'fabrics' to refer to material. 'A large variety of fabrics' matches plural noun agreement.

× T-shirts can have lots of different prints on it and for me my favorite is probably spots and some kind of patterns like stripes because they are really simple and it is not too.

✓ T-shirts can have lots of different prints on them, and for me my favorites are probably spots and patterns like stripes because they are really simple and not too flashy.

Pronoun 'it' must agree with plural 'T-shirts', so use 'them'. 'My favorite' should be plural 'my favorites' to match 'spots and patterns'. The clause 'it is not too' is incomplete; add an adjective such as 'flashy' to complete meaning.

× I think again, this really depends on where I'm going.

✓ I think, again, this really depends on where I'm going.

Minor punctuation/word order: place comma after 'I think' for clarity. Tense is fine; correction improves flow.

× If I'm just going for a really short trip to maybe get something outside my home, maybe I'll just use like maybe like 30 seconds to pick the clothes.

✓ If I'm just going on a very short trip to get something outside my home, maybe I'll just use about 30 seconds to pick my clothes.

Use 'go on a trip' not 'go for a trip'. Remove redundant 'maybe' and 'like'. Use 'about 30 seconds' and 'pick my clothes' (possessive) for natural phrasing.

× But if I'm going to a more formal event, I'll take more time to choose the clothing that suits my event the most.

✓ But if I'm going to a more formal event, I'll take more time to choose the clothing that suits the event best.

'Suits my event the most' is awkward; use 'suits the event best' for natural adjective/adverb placement and avoid redundant possessive.

× Actually I don't go out that much during the weekdays because I have to go to school and whenever I go back and when I come back home I'll just wear my normal home clothing like pajamas but definitely different style.

✓ Actually I don't go out that much on weekdays because I have to go to school, and when I come back home I'll just wear my usual home clothes, like pajamas, which are definitely a different style.

Use 'on weekdays' not 'during the weekdays'. Remove redundant 'whenever I go back and when I come back'. 'Normal home clothing' is awkward; use 'usual home clothes'. Add commas and a relative clause for clarity.

× Umm I wear more casual like AT shirt and some baggy jeans.

✓ I wear more casual clothes, like a T-shirt and some baggy jeans.

'AT shirt' is likely a typo for 'a T-shirt'. Use 'casual clothes' and 'a T-shirt' with correct article and spacing.

× This might be very different from other people, but personally I like to wear kind of more monotonous colors such as black, white, Gray, brown and beige because I feel like these kind of colors can be styled with all kinds of like umm accessories, but if it's too eye-catching like a red or yellow.

✓ This might be different from other people, but personally I like to wear more muted colors such as black, white, gray, brown, and beige because I feel these colors can be styled with many accessories; bright colors like red or yellow are too eye-catching for me.

Use 'muted' or 'monochrome' instead of 'monotonous'. Capitalization: 'gray' not 'Gray'. 'These kind of colors' should be 'these colors' or 'these kinds of colors' and avoid filler 'umm' and 'like'. Complete the sentence by explaining the contrast with bright colors.