Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Reduce hesitations and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief reason and an example. Use simple present tense and correct article: say "dresses" or "a dress."

예시: I prefer wearing dresses because they make me feel confident and comfortable. For example, I often choose a floral dress for social events because it’s easy to style and feels feminine.

제안: Avoid repetition and finish your thought. Use one linking word to contrast and mention frequency. Correct vocabulary: "occasion" not "occasional clothes".

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and confident. However, I wear smart clothes for formal events, such as interviews or weddings, about once or twice a month.

제안: Remove filler words and be concise. Give one specific reason and an example. Use correct phrase: "summer weather is hot" or "because it’s hot in summer."

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in summer because it’s hot and they are breathable. For example, I often wear a cotton T-shirt with shorts when I go to the park.

제안: Use correct tense and avoid long, unclear statements. State frequency and a reason, then give a brief outcome. Keep it to two or three sentences.

예시: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because it’s hard to find exactly what I want. As a result, I sometimes spend the whole morning trying on different outfits before going out.

제안: Clarify and correct grammar: explain weekday vs weekend choices with one linking word. Avoid filler sounds and be specific about activities causing the choice.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear more formal clothes for university, such as blouses and smart trousers; on weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts for relaxing.

제안: Reduce repetition and be specific about shades or combinations. Provide one example to illustrate your style. Keep sentences smooth and avoid fillers.

예시: I usually choose neutral colours like white and black because I prefer a minimalist style. For example, I often wear a black jacket with a white shirt for a clean, classic look.

× I prefer dress, uh, because it makes me, uh, it's makes me ecstatic and I like, I like wear dresses.

✓ I prefer dresses because they make me ecstatic and I like wearing dresses.

The student used the singular noun 'dress' where a plural 'dresses' is needed to express a general preference (article error / noun number). Also 'it's makes' is ungrammatical; use 'they make' to match plural subject. 'I like wear dresses' is incorrect verb form; use the gerund 'liking wearing' or 'I like wearing dresses'. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general preferences, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use 'like + -ing' for hobbies or habits.

× I prefer to wear comfortable casual casual clothes rather than smart clothes because it makes me feel confident and relaxed, and sometimes I wear occasional clothes for formal events, but I.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they make me feel confident and relaxed, and sometimes I wear formal clothes for special events.

Errors include repeated word 'casual casual' (redundancy) and an incomplete sentence ending with 'but I.' Also 'it makes me' should agree with plural 'clothes' -> 'they make me'. 'Occasional clothes' is not idiomatic; use 'formal clothes' or 'special event clothes'. Suggestions: remove duplication, complete the sentence, use plural pronoun agreement, and choose idiomatic collocations ('formal clothes', 'special events').

× Guess, umm, I like wearing T-shirts, uh, especially in summer because it's in, uh, because summer's weather is very hot so I choose to wear T-shirts.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts, especially in summer because the weather is very hot, so I choose to wear T-shirts.

Unnecessary filler 'Guess, umm' removed for clarity. 'It's in, uh, because summer's weather' is ungrammatical; use 'the weather is very hot' or 'summer weather is very hot'. Use present simple 'like' and 'choose' to describe general habits. Suggestions: simplify sentence, use 'the weather' or 'summer weather', and maintain consistent present simple tense for habitual actions.

× Actually, yes, I spent a lot of time choosing clothes and because umm, I always uh, don't find uh, clothes I want and so I spent whole day to choose clothes and round.

✓ Actually, yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I often don't find the clothes I want, so I spend the whole day choosing clothes.

The student mixed past 'spent' with habitual meaning; use present simple 'spend' for routines. 'Don't find' should be 'don't' (present) or 'didn't' (past); here present is appropriate. 'Spent whole day to choose clothes and round' is ungrammatical; use 'spend the whole day choosing clothes'. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual actions, include articles ('the whole day'), and use 'choose' -> gerund 'choosing' after 'spend'.

× Yes, I different, uh, yes, I choose different styles, uh, for weekdays on and week weekends because I studied weekdays. So I, we are formal uh, clothes and weekends I choose jeans or T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I choose different styles for weekdays and weekends because I study on weekdays. So I wear formal clothes on weekdays, and on weekends I choose jeans or T-shirts.

Multiple issues: 'I different' is incomplete. 'for weekdays on and week weekends' is confused word order; correct is 'for weekdays and weekends'. 'I studied weekdays' incorrectly uses past tense; use 'I study on weekdays' for current routine. 'So I, we are formal uh, clothes' misuses pronouns and verb; correct is 'I wear formal clothes'. Suggestions: use correct word order, maintain consistent tense (present simple for routines), and use proper pronoun-verb-object structure ('I wear clothes').

× I usually choose natural, uh, I usually choose natural colors like white and black because I prefer a minimal style and I know, for example, I wear black jacket with, uh, white shirts.

✓ I usually choose neutral colors like white and black because I prefer a minimal style. For example, I wear a black jacket with a white shirt.

'Natural colors' is less idiomatic than 'neutral colors'. Repetition 'I usually choose' can be reduced for clarity. 'I know, for example' is awkward; separate into a clear example sentence. Articles missing before singular nouns: 'a black jacket' and 'a white shirt'. Also 'white shirts' plural should match singular 'a black jacket with a white shirt'. Suggestions: use 'neutral colors', avoid filler words, and include articles before singular countable nouns.