Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct minor grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid vague phrasing like "I found it." Use linking words if adding details.

예시: I prefer wearing summer clothes because they feel light and elegant. For example, I often choose summer dresses that are comfortable in hot weather and look classy for social outings.

제안: Reduce hesitations and finish your sentence. Use a clear structure: topic sentence + brief reason + an example. Use linking words like "however" or "because" to connect ideas. Avoid repetition of "comfortable."

예시: It depends: I wear smart clothes for special occasions because they look professional. However, on most days I choose casual clothes because they are more comfortable for work and running errands.

제안: Give a direct answer and a concise reason with one example. Use more precise vocabulary ("masculine"/"feminine" styles) and avoid repeating words. Keep it within two to three sentences.

예시: Not really. I avoid plain T-shirts because they look too masculine on me; instead, I prefer feminine styles with a tailored fit or pretty patterns.

제안: Be specific and succinct. Start with a clear yes/no, give one or two concrete reasons and an example. Correct grammar: say "choose items" or "deciding what to wear."

예시: Yes, I do. I spend extra time choosing clothes because I care about the color and fit; for example, I often try on several sizes to make sure the dress flatters my figure.

제안: Finish your thought and avoid repetition. Use a clear contrast with linking words like "while" or "during the week." Provide one concrete example for each time period.

예시: Yes. On weekends I usually wear sportswear because I go to the gym and walk in the park, while during the week I wear smart-casual outfits for work, such as blouses and trousers.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and specific reasons. Correct grammar ("my favourite colours are dark blue and black"), and explain why with one example. Avoid vague phrases like "match my color skin."

예시: My favourite colours are dark blue and black because they suit my skin tone and are easy to mix with other items. For example, a black dress can be paired with many accessories for different occasions.

× Honestly I prefer summer clothes because I found it.

✓ Honestly I prefer summer clothes because I find them comfortable and suitable for me.

The original mixes present 'prefer' with past 'found', causing tense inconsistency. Use present tense 'find' to match 'prefer'. Also 'summer clothes' is plural so use plural object pronoun 'them' and clarify reason 'comfortable and suitable for me' for naturalness.

× I find it very classy and elegant, especially summer dresses.

✓ I find them very classy and elegant, especially summer dresses.

Pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to plural 'summer clothes'. Use plural pronoun 'them'. This is a present tense descriptive statement so keep present simple 'find'.

× Well, it depends, uh, sometimes I prefer to wear smart clothes if I have a special day uh, and in the other side, I prefer comfortable and casual clothes to feel comfortable, especially when.

✓ Well, it depends. Sometimes I prefer to wear smart clothes if I have a special occasion, and on the other hand I prefer comfortable, casual clothes to feel relaxed, especially at home.

Multiple issues: 'in the other side' is incorrect prepositional phrase; use 'on the other hand' (preposition error -> mapped to present tense/context). 'Special day' is better 'special occasion'. Sentence fragment 'especially when' is incomplete; complete thought 'especially at home'. Also avoid repetition 'comfortable' by using 'relaxed'. Correct punctuation and clause structure.

× Honestly not really because I feel like I look like a boy so I prefer more feminine T-shirt than normal T-shirts.

✓ Honestly, not really, because I feel like I look like a boy, so I prefer more feminine T-shirts than normal ones.

Use plural 'T-shirts' to match general statement (singular/plural issue). 'More feminine T-shirt' should be 'more feminine T-shirts' and compare with 'normal ones' to avoid repetition. Added commas for clarity.

× Yes, actually in anything, not just clothes. I spend a long time choosing a thing, especially clothes when it's it's revolve around the colors, size, so I spend more time to choose.

✓ Yes, actually for everything, not just clothes. I spend a long time choosing things, especially clothes when it revolves around color and size, so I take more time to decide.

Fragments and awkward phrasing: 'in anything' -> 'for everything'; 'choosing a thing' -> 'choosing things'; 'it's it's revolve' is ungrammatical; use 'it revolves' (subject-verb agreement). 'Colors, size' should be 'color and size'. Final clause 'spend more time to choose' -> 'take more time to decide' for naturalness.

× Yes, on weekends I prefer sports clothes because I usually go to the gym and go for a walk so I prefer sports clothes and the during the week, especially when I go to.

✓ Yes, on weekends I prefer sports clothes because I usually go to the gym and go for walks, while during the week I wear different clothes, especially when I go to work.

Redundant phrase 'I prefer sports clothes' repeated; 'the during the week' incorrect article usage and word order — use 'during the week'. Sentence ends incomplete 'especially when I go to' — complete as 'when I go to work' to suit context.

× Actually my favorite color and clothes, it's dark blue and the black because it's match my color skin and especially the black. You can wear it with any clothes.

✓ Actually, my favorite colors for clothes are dark blue and black because they match my skin tone, especially black. You can wear black with any outfit.

Multiple errors: 'favorite color and clothes, it's' is ungrammatical; use plural 'colors for clothes are'. 'the black' unnecessary article — use 'black'. 'it's match my color skin' incorrect subject-verb and word order — use 'they match my skin tone'. 'You can wear it with any clothes' should be 'you can wear black with any outfit' for natural collocation.