Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, produce a clear topic sentence and add one specific reason or example. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid redundancy. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer to wear simple, comfortable clothes rather than flashy outfits. For example, I often choose a plain T-shirt and jeans because they let me move freely and feel relaxed all day.

제안: Answer directly without uncertainty, define ‘smart clothes’ briefly if needed, and give a concise reason. Avoid repeating the same word (comfy).

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes. By smart clothes I mean formal outfits like blazers and dress shirts, which I only wear for interviews or ceremonies.

제안: Be more fluent and concise: state your main idea, give one clear reason, and connect the second idea with a linking phrase. Remove fillers like 'you know' and 'umm'.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical. However, I wear smarter clothes like a dress or a shirt only for formal events.

제안: Use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example of when you spend more time choosing an outfit.

예시: Yes, I sometimes spend a long time choosing clothes because I care about looking appropriate. For example, I plan my outfit carefully before a party or presentation to make sure it matches the occasion.

제안: Good content and clear contrast. Improve sentence structure and remove redundancy. Use linking words like 'while' to compare weekdays and weekends and correct small grammar errors.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: during weekdays I wear my school uniform or PE kit, while on weekends I choose casual clothes that make me feel comfortable.

제안: Make your preference clearer and avoid conflicting phrases. Give a short, specific example of colors you prefer and why. Use correct wording: 'colour' or 'colors' consistently.

예시: I don't have one fixed favourite colour, but I usually prefer soft or muted tones like pastel blue or beige for everyday wear. Occasionally I choose vibrant colours such as red when I want to stand out.

× The clothes that I like to wear is simple and more comfortable, not those showy clothes and nothing more.

✓ The clothes that I like to wear are simple and comfortable, not showy clothes.

Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure: 'The clothes' is plural so use 'are' (type 27 and 26). 'More comfortable' is unnecessary comparative without comparison; 'comfortable' suffices. 'Not those showy clothes and nothing more' is awkward and redundant; simplify to 'not showy clothes.' Suggestion: ensure plural subjects take plural verbs and remove redundant phrases.

× Well, I don't know what you're talking about the smart clothes, but yeah, I do wear comfortable and casual clothes to feel more comfy.

✓ Well, I don't know what you mean by 'smart clothes,' but yes, I do wear comfortable, casual clothes to feel more comfortable.

Pronoun and phrase use: 'what you're talking about the smart clothes' is incorrect; use 'what you mean by' for clarification (type 12). Also 'yeah' and 'comfy' are informal; 'yes' and 'comfortable' are better for clarity. Suggestion: use 'what you mean by' when asking for clarification and keep consistent formality.

× Yes, I do love wearing T-shirts because it feels more comfortable to wear and also not to, you know, not to showy or flashy then Umm. I only use smart clothes when I go to formal events.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are more comfortable and not showy or flashy. I only wear smart clothes when I go to formal events.

Pronoun and subject-verb form and sentence structure: 'it feels' should be 'they are' because 'T-shirts' is plural (types 27 and 26). Remove filler 'not to, you know, not to' and incorrect 'then Umm.' Use 'wear' instead of 'use' for clothes. Suggestion: match pronouns to nouns and avoid fillers for clarity.

× Yes 'cause sometimes I am a type of girl that very obsessed with outfits so I have to be aware for what I am wearing in that event or situation.

✓ Yes, because sometimes I am the type of girl who is very obsessed with outfits, so I have to be careful about what I wear for an event or situation.

Conjunction and relative clause errors: use 'because' instead of ''cause' in formal tone and 'the type of girl who is very obsessed' requires 'who is' (type 16 and 26). 'Aware for' is incorrect preposition; use 'careful about' and 'what I wear' (verb form). Also 'in that event' -> 'for an event.' Suggestion: use correct relative pronoun 'who' with people, proper prepositions, and concise phrasing.

× Yeah, I do wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends since I am a student. So in weekdays I have to wear my uniform or my PE uniform and for my weekends if I have a event, I have to choose whatever I like to feel comfortable.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends since I am a student. On weekdays I have to wear my uniform or my PE uniform, and on weekends, if I have an event, I choose whatever makes me comfortable.

Article and preposition errors: 'in weekdays' should be 'on weekdays' (type 11). 'a event' needs 'an event' (type 22). 'I do wear' is unnecessary; simpler 'I wear.' 'I have to choose whatever I like to feel comfortable' is awkward; use 'choose whatever makes me comfortable.' Suggestion: use correct prepositions 'on' with days, 'an' before vowel sounds, and prefer concise verb forms.

× As for me, I don't have a specific color what I like to wear my clothes, but I do like wearing a vibrant color or something casual or soft color that I want to wear.

✓ As for me, I don't have a specific color that I like to wear, but I do like wearing vibrant or soft, casual colors.

Pronoun and relative clause errors: 'specific color what I like to wear my clothes' is ungrammatical; use 'color that I like to wear' or 'a specific color I prefer' (type 12 and 26). Pluralize 'colors' when speaking generally. 'Something casual or soft color' should be 'vibrant or soft, casual colors.' Suggestion: use 'that' for clauses, keep noun number consistent, and order adjectives naturally.